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17 hours ago, citizenies said:

Hot as always ~~ thanks for continuing :)

Wonder when froy needs to use his powers again 

6 hours ago, spacevlad said:

Also, like, I know this isn't likely to happen and isn't how he grows, but there's a big part of me that wants Wes to get out that massive, uncontrollable cock and pound Dory with it. Maybe after he slurps another load out of Dory and is getting his growth spurt, swelling bigger inside of the smaller man. 🤤

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When I started reading the chapter, I had no idea that it would pan/play out this way. It was very interesting to see how the conflict in here slowly escalated. 


1) I am kind of suprised by Marcus' manipulative streak there (the speech he gives to Froy). But I also can't really say that he's wrong. 


2) You also brought a new conflict to the forefront of my mind: for whom does Dory's heart truly beat? Froy or Marcus? Now, that his ever-growing attraction of the two hunks is out in the open, it will be interesting to see the fallout of this. (Marcus and Froy making out infront of our protagonist doesn't make the situation any easier.) 


3) Marcus' growth must have grave consequences. I mean, he might not be able to go to work, let alone fit into any of the rooms. 


Not sure if I articulated my thoughts clear enough, but oh well. In terms of plot and character development, a solid 10 out of 10 from me, @scarletic
 

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