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The Arab Prince


rmorris

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Wow - you really have a terrific imagination.  You clearly know something about how the news media works and how stories are assigned.  You also have a unique understanding and insight into Middle Eastern cultures, customs and rulers!

<wink wink>

Well done idea.  Funny dialog in spots helps to make the muscle growth scenes even more effective. 

Thank you for sharing your story with us!

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Yes. Agreed. This was a hot story. The reveal of the Prince had my mouth watering. I wanted to know more.  Yet, now, I would like to see the reporter grow. And for him to know his full potential. You never really revealed the reporter's body features... 

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Okay, wow, I'm taken aback by the feedback, I'm flattered! Had no idea this would go down as well as it has! 

So, I need a bit of time to think about a second chapter (bear in mind this first chapter took me a couple of months to write). 

I think I know where I'm going with it, at least for the next chapter or two.

Again, any further feedback, drop a comment or leave me a message!

Thanks once again guys! You're all lovely.  

Next time you see a reply from me on this thread it should be the next chapter. 

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I’m glad you continued this story after so long.

It’s nice to read muscle growth stories where the MC isn’t necessarily white 

I also like that you leave the other character blank; not because you didn’t purposefully didn’t want to write him in but leaving it as a template for the ready to imagine however they want that person to look like in their mind

It still felt short when you got to the juicy parts but I didn’t mind 

I still hope to see a part 3/4 etc :)

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