Mdlftr Posted March 19, 2020 Share Posted March 19, 2020 OMG!! Best sex and domination scene EVER! Thank you, man! Awesome! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zazu Posted March 19, 2020 Share Posted March 19, 2020 Absolutely awesome! I really hope we get more parts of this. How will things be for Jason if he gets even bigger? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mdlftr Posted March 19, 2020 Share Posted March 19, 2020 follow up thought - but what about all those babies? The mini-Jasons running around? This could evolve into a multi-generational epic! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jtchef2 Posted March 20, 2020 Share Posted March 20, 2020 Awesome chapter 2. Please many more Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Calepage60 Posted March 21, 2020 Author Share Posted March 21, 2020 On 3/19/2020 at 6:18 AM, Mdlftr said: follow up thought - but what about all those babies? The mini-Jasons running around? This could evolve into a multi-generational epic! That's the plan! I have a general idea of where this is going, but in the meantime, let me know what you guys liked in the first two chapters, and what you want to see in the next. 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mdlftr Posted March 21, 2020 Share Posted March 21, 2020 2 hours ago, Calepage60 said: That's the plan! I have a general idea of where this is going, but in the meantime, let me know what you guys liked in the first two chapters, and what you want to see in the next. The muscle descriptions, the horny state of mind, and the detailing of the general atmosphere of "overcome by lust as he plunges his babymaker into her." I loved the unexpected sex in the dressing room, right near the a--h---e former coach. "Hello cuck-Daddy!" Nasty, but Niiiiice, Dude! You know, "stuff". 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dredlifter Posted March 21, 2020 Share Posted March 21, 2020 This story is fantastic. I'm enjoying Jason's somewhat slower, more realistic evolution into the total alpha male that he is. I like how inside his head he's absolutely loving what he is becoming, while on the outside he's much more nonchalant about it, like it's no big deal. The small subtle details of his growing power are amazing. Things like how his friends now naturally follow behind him and defer to him. How he doesn't care anymore if his bros see his chest hair. How his friends were nervous to talk to Chris and he just sauntered over there and struck up a conversation. How he himself relished the fact that he dwarfed his former coach. And of course, flexing to himself in the mirror during sex. So awesome. I can't wait to read more about Jason's evolution. 4 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dredlifter Posted May 31, 2020 Share Posted May 31, 2020 Is this another story that's gonna be abandoned? I hope not. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
panama Posted May 31, 2020 Share Posted May 31, 2020 So great !! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Calepage60 Posted July 29, 2022 Author Share Posted July 29, 2022 Posting again because of lost comments on the old site... I want to revive this story, so if anyone has input on what they liked from the first two parts and where you would like to see the story go from here, please share! I'm totally open to suggestions. 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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