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July 14th - Control the Power


londonboy

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Personally, I find the idea of prison pretty scary, but I really enjoyed the direction you took this story. The concept of a weaker guy outgrowing his trainer is a classic, but incorporating desire for Darth that remains to the end is a great twist on that. As said before though, the quotes would definitely have helped, either way, the highlight was your clear description of muscles on top of muscles.

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Man. Amazing work. Altho i would like to knwo why they are in jail but that's just not what teh story was abaout.

It was about how two people found each other in that dreadful place.

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  • 3 weeks later...

An amazing story!! Do wish for a continuation! I also wish u lean on the muscle details but this was sooo hot. Worship was sooo needed here too. This almost didn’t felt like a story written by you but love it a lot

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