Popular Post Hialmar Posted September 22, 2020 Popular Post Share Posted September 22, 2020 (edited) Take the lid off Part One When Dr. Korsakoff initiated the process, Kevin felt how his arousal intensified, but he also felt a twitch of worry and regret. He blushed. He hadn't been entirely honest with Todd, and married couples were supposed to be honest, weren't they? The humming sound from the Modification Pod slowly and gradually grew louder. Taking the medical aspects of it in regard, when he first heard about it all, he had expected to have to wait for Todd's return from the Treatment at some sort of separate ward or hotel for next-of-kin, but no: Friends or relatives were allowed to watch the entire Treatment, if The Subject agreed to that beforehand. The small lounge adjacent to the Modification Pod was obviously designed on purpose, to make the experience of relatives or friends of The Subject comfortable. He sat comfortably in a dimly lit room a half-stair under the level of the Modification Pod, and, from Kevin's view, the Modification Pod resembled a large aquarium, fixed to the wall of the Observation Lounge at eye-level. "No, it's a fairly common request. We actually expect most of our Subjects' significant others to be present and watch the Treatment, and we have accommodations ready for that purpose." Kevin briefly remembered Dr. Korsakoff's words from the interview. Wasn't something wrong with him, if he had been able to talk more openly and honestly about his fantasies with Dr. Korsakoff, than with Todd himself? The memories of the surveys they had both taken individually before the Treatments, the promises of Dr. Korsakoff to design unique and individually tailored Treatment Profiles for each of them, based on the answers of them both ... "What did you answer?" Kevin had asked, but Todd had just looked smug. Kevin loved when Todd looked smug. Snuggling up close to Todd's burly rugby-physique with the little belly, that never disappeared entirely, despite these years at the gym ... The smell of Todd's armpits ... Todd looking smug ... Todd's idea in the first place, to consult the company about the Treatment ... Kevin's doubts: Sounded too good to be true, like one of those Muscle Growth stories he read online and erased from his browsing history on their computer, in order that Todd wouldn't find out ... Kevin blushed again. * * * "No, of course not. Not something too exaggerated. Just enough to lose this dad bod belly." "Todd, you know that you are my hero, and that's not a dad bod belly. You are more built than half of the other guys at the gym, and you know it." "Would feel more comfortable without it. And as I said, not something too exaggerated. I went for the option, which will allow you fill in a survey, too, so I put my destiny in your hands. Afterwards, I'll look 50% like how you wanted me to improve, and I hope, that you will return that favour, by allowing me to have a 50% say about your Treatment." Snuggling up close. Todd. And his dishonest reply: "Of course. I don't wish any of us to look like the more extreme options in the folder, of course. And if you want me to undergo it with you, I'm honoured. Could make this hardgainer bod a little bit more toned, couldn't it?" "You don't think I'm throwing away money, for some ridiculous vanity project?" "No. No, I wasn't just aware of its existence until you showed me. Just perplexed. Didn't think it was possible or legal. Make me grow. But not too extreme, of course. And I'll tell that company about how I would like them to modify your body composition. Todd, do you know, that you are hard?" "Just feel excited. I'm so glad, that you are willing to grow together with me." * * * Kevin's awareness returned to his present surroundings. Behind the thick glass-pane, Todd's imposing body floated in the liquid -- a solution saturated with anabolic salts, as Dr. Korsakoff had explained earlier. Kevin felt hot. Sweat trickled in his armpits and from his brow, just as it had from Todd's body two hours earlier. It was probably the effect of the injection kicking in. A mask allowed Todd to breathe inside the ModPod. That made it difficult, to discern the facial expression of Todd. Some sort of spasm caused Todd's jock-next-door physique to convulse. Kevin suddenly felt worried. It looked like Todd flexed all his muscles all at once, and then relaxed. Flexed. And relaxed. Flexed. And relaxed. What if Dr. Korsakoff took Kevin's fantasies literally? What if Todd, to 50% at least, ended up how Kevin wished him to be, and didn't like it at all? What if their marriage ... He'd been a fool. The humming sound grew louder. Power emissions crackled inside the ModPod. Kevin could see hundreds of tiny bolts of -- what did Dr. Korsakoff call it? -- Hypertrophic Energy hit Todd's exposed body. Todd's nice tan becoming more even, becoming darker, achieving a sort of golden-bronzed hue, and the pudge, that had bothered Todd so much and Kevin so little, began to shrink at a visible speed. If this was The Treatment was possible to do, Kevin regretted how much he had assured Todd, about his own goals: "No, just tone up a bit. Nothing exaggerated. Not bodybuilder-big, of course. Just a small improvement." He should have told him. He should have told him before. * * * Two hours later, it was he who floated inside the ModPod, and Todd who sat outside in the Observation Lounge, watching. * * * Chapter two is found HERE Edited December 18, 2020 by Hialmar added link 30 1 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ro20316 Posted September 23, 2020 Share Posted September 23, 2020 Nice and intrigying start lets see what's next 1 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
growthfan96 Posted September 23, 2020 Share Posted September 23, 2020 Nice start, can’t wait to read more 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hialmar Posted September 23, 2020 Author Share Posted September 23, 2020 9 hours ago, Ro20316 said: Nice and intrigying start lets see what's next 17 minutes ago, growthfan96 said: Nice start, can’t wait to read more Thank you. I just posted Part Two, which may be found here: https://muscle-growth.org/topic/21068-take-the-lid-off-part-two/ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hialmar Posted May 11, 2022 Author Share Posted May 11, 2022 I celebrate the vernal relaunch of the forum, by giving this story a little bump. It' possible, that new readers haven't read it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hialmar Posted February 28 Author Share Posted February 28 This story is four years old, and since recent users may not have noticed it, I give it my biennial bump. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aronymous Posted February 28 Share Posted February 28 Imagine if every writer started doing that. Just don't. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hialmar Posted February 28 Author Share Posted February 28 11 minutes ago, Aronymous said: Imagine if every writer started doing that. Just don't. Thank you for your advice. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jakob78 Posted February 28 Share Posted February 28 46 minutes ago, Hialmar said: Thank you for your advice. Some of the best stories I've read since I found this site were written five, ten or more years ago. I for one appreciate the bump! Thanks 1 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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