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Elongro Silver Commercial (short - posted with permission)


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Elongro Silver

"That's my boy!  a father cheers on his son.  He's masculine brown beard and headed father in the stands of a little league game as he cheered on his little son briefly running in the foreground.  


The scene fades to a few years later.


"That's my boy!"  said the same father in the stands at a school gym. he and his son are slightly older the father's hair and beard are salt and pepper, his son is taller and more adult looking like he was in high school.


A few years later...


"That's my boy!"  the father cheers on his growing son.  It's obvious his son and the others players have taken Elongro.

Cut to...

The father and son walking together after the game.  Both come across the son's group of friends.  

"This is my dad!"  The son says to the friends and they warmly greet him, but various camera angles show the size difference.  The father is jovial but there is a look of dismay.  The son is revealed to have a slight look of pity.

Announcer:
"Feeling a little small in this world?"  

Cut to...   another scene of the family at a restaurant. 

The father and his wife are at a table at a restaurant looking upward at their two GIANT boys.

"Feeling pushed to the side?"

Cut to... a shot of the family at a reunion, the GIANT sons are the center of attention and the parents are cast aside.

"Feeling like you're worth is shrinking?"

Cut to a scene of the father at work looking at a young co-worker getting a big promotion that obviously should have been given to him.

"Then ask your doctor about new Elongro Silver from the makers of Elongro!"  the announcer lauds as the box and logo are shown. 

Various scenes of the father growing and gaining more confidence in various locations including the gym progress as the following paragraph is read.

"Elongro Silver has been clinically shown in older adults over the average age of 45 to dramatically improve muscle size and strength as well as height and overall health.  Elongro SIlver may increase the size of genitals and libido.  Elongro Silver can even treat or cure some previous health conditions after use based on clinical studies.  Side effects include dramatic growth of muscles and height.  Regular exercise can increase these effects.  Growth effects are  variable based on body type, metabolism and overall health before taking Elongro Sliver.  There may be other factors that may affect growth.  Body growth has been known to be more affected by the intensity of exercise.  Mental side effects such as increased attention span, acuity and overall intelligence may occur as well.  These are also affected by situations that require increased use of mental states.  Minor effects such as rash or bruising and soreness at the injection site may occur.  These effects are temporary and non life threatening.  Be prepared to accommodate for the effects of growth as Elongro Silver may make some ordinary life situations a little more difficult.  Government and private programs are available to assist with this life adjustment.  Elongro Silver may cause changes in mood, thoughts of dominance and superiority complex may develop although mild and treatable.  Seek professional help should these moods become severe.  Elongro Silver is a vaccine.  Elongro Silver must only be taken once.  Do not take Elongro Silver if you had a previous dose of Elongro or Elongro Silver.  Detrimental and potential life threatening effects will occur should multiple doses be taken including shrinkage of muscles, height and other body organs including genitalia.  Depression and suicidal thoughts have occurred after a second dose.  Only your doctor can prescribe Elongro and Elongro Silver.  


Cut to... similar scene later on of the son and father walking together.


"This is my dad!"  The son announces proudly as the father stands tall next to him, his muscles bulging huge and his height seeming to loom over the son's friends.  Different camera angles reflect the scene.  The son's friends look at the father in awe as the father turns to the camera.


"Get your life back, BIG TIME!  Talk to your doctor about new Elongro Silver."  The father flexes a massive bicep.  "I did."   The son and his friends surround the father patting him on the back and treating him like a bro before the scene fades to black.

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This was so great and so hot! I agree with @debate1. There  desperately needs to be a full narrative story on this idea. There could really be a lot to flesh out, the brothers' and their friends' initial growth with Elongro, the dad's feelings of both pride at his growing sons and his feeling of inferiority, the work situation with a younger, bigger guy getting dad's promotion, the science of how they get Elongro Silver to work with closed growth plates. Of course, then the fun part as the dad grows and catches up to and eventually overtakes his sons and their friends and the people he works with. All this is just one idea kind of following the commercial as an outline. Of course, the narrative could involve different characters entirely, but the idea is still so awesome and ripe for exploration!

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