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6 minutes ago, LorianofLothric said:

Wow… just wow. I never, never, would have anticipated Jake being brought down by his love of tiramisu. And of course it was great seeing HIM humble Jake at long last that man got what he deserved. It was so strange to see that Jake didn’t really enjoy pain when he wasn’t the one causing it, oh well😏 This was an absolutely insane climax for all the right reasons! Can’t wait to see the resolution for this disaster because Jake’s mental anguish will no doubt eclipse any physical pain that he experienced.

Thank you. :)

I think it was more his love and respect for Nonna, than the tiramisu, per se. She could've brought him anything and he would've had the same reaction.

It was really a team effort - Amber who's idea it was to have Nonna as a backup, HIM, obviously, having the ability and saving the day, Brad, who made sure Jake didn't sick his minions on HIM before Jake's sperm died off. Nonna, of course, and even Assad, for holding out so long before succumbing to Jake. So the team effort, combined with Jake's hubris (silencing Assad as he was trying to warn him), and a little luck... saved the day.

Jake is definitely more of a sadist than a masochist. He only enjoys the pain of working out, because he knows that's growing his muscles.

Oh, and if you read back, there are definitely some hints signposting ;) The best twist being obvious when you re-read, right? :D

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13 minutes ago, mmvmgo2011 said:

Thank you. :)

I think it was more his love and respect for Nonna, than the tiramisu, per se. She could've brought him anything and he would've had the same reaction.

It was really a team effort - Amber who's idea it was to have Nonna as a backup, HIM, obviously, having the ability and saving the day, Brad, who made sure Jake didn't sick his minions on HIM before Jake's sperm died off. Nonna, of course, and even Assad, for holding out so long before succumbing to Jake. So the team effort, combined with Jake's hubris (silencing Assad as he was trying to warn him), and a little luck... saved the day.

Jake is definitely more of a sadist than a masochist. He only enjoys the pain of working out, because he knows that's growing his muscles.

Oh, and if you read back, there are definitely some hints signposting ;) The best twist being obvious when you re-read, right? :D

And you are most certainly welcome! This story is phenomenal!

Oh yeah agreed on all fronts! I was going to mention her cooking but I thought the tiramisu line was slightly more amusing albeit less accurate! 

The team effort was beautiful to behold poetic in a way really that he was finally brought down by all of his close friends. At least he wasn’t killed but he’ll probably wish he was dead when he wakes up. Poor Amber, that woman has suffered way too much. And ironically may have suffered more at Jake’s hands than those kidnappers which is just nauseating to think about. 

And now that you mention it I do seem to recall Amber or HIM mentioning they had 3 tries to get Jake. So very sneaky😉

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CHAPTER ONE-HUNDRED-AND-SEVENTY-FIVE

HE felt sick. HE only very briefly emulated Jake’s behaviour, inflicting pain, rubbing it in, and HE never wanted to feel that ever again. How could Jake keep it up, repeat it for so many slaves? HE shuddered.

HE went over to Brad, HE was already horny, but HE stared at Jake’s incredibly body, bigger and more vascular than HE last saw him, Brad, too, was looking incredible, which was enough for HIM to be ready to cum into Brad.

“Don’t waste YOUR load on me. I’m fine. I’m not under his spell. I don’t know how, but I can sense his subconscious, make changes, I–”

“That was you?!?”

“Yes. I have the ‘voices’ in my head now, but those voices aren’t my subconscious, they’re Jake’s.”

“Fascinating,” HE said.

“Go, start fixing the others. Start with Assad, then Diego - they’re the biggest, the strongest, if Jake comes to before YOU’re done, we don’t want to have to deal with them if we can avoid it.”

Assad was still unconscious, HE pumped a few pumps of HIS load into Assad’s mouth, then moved quickly over to Diego, trying to aim for his mouth. Diego and the others were having none of it. Diego moved to attack HIM, but Brad was faster, intercepting his fist, and crushing down with his grip, Diego yelling in pain and dropping to his knees. As Diego yelled, HE aimed a rope into his mouth.

HIS cumshot ran out of steam, the other slaves following Diego’s lead and trying to attack HIM. Despite their amped up strength, Brad was still stronger than each one individually, so he overpowered them, dropping them each with a sleeper hold, while HE worked on building up another cumshot.

HE worked quickly, reversing the effects of Jake’s cum. All except for Sam. He did not seem to have been forced into servitude, but was voluntarily following Jake. This was a problem.

****

Jake woke up. He was in HIS bedroom, HE recognised the decor. His head hurt, and he could not remember how he got there. That must have been quite a banging night, he thought to himself, his total blackout of memory a rare thing.

In fact, as he thought further, the last thing he could really remember was escorting Mike into the posing room, starting him on his cutting journey and their second walking advertisement, after Brad. Odd.

****

HE explained the problem to Brad.

“Can you erase all their memories?” Brad asked.

“I think so, memories are stored and processed by the subconscious, so there’s no particular reason to think it can’t be done, but I’ve never done it before.”

“I’m not sure we have a choice. You have to erase all their memories, Assad, all the cops - every slave. Can you do Amber too? I don’t want her to remember Jake’s treatment of her - with her permission, of course. You and I will be the only two people that will ever remember what happened to him. I still have access to his subconscious, so I can continue to keep an eye on him and rein him in if he ever strays too far off the rails.”

“There’s a few more we need to add. Stella, at the front desk.”

Shit. “No, I can convince her it was a bad reaction to medication or something. We’ll get by.”

“What about the other cops at the station?”

“We can’t erase everyone’s memories.”

“Oh, and don’t forget the most important one. Jake, himself. He can’t remember any of this, or that we were the ones to take away his ability.”

“Agreed.”

****

Assad woke, he’d fallen asleep at his desk. That was strange, he didn’t remember nodding off, in fact, he didn’t remember a whole lot of things from the last few days.

He walked out of his office, and checked the station logs. There was an entry, from last night. “Captain phoned in. APBs and orders to retain belayed on account of Captain’s compromise per Officer Rodriguez.”

What? He went to find Rodriguez.

“No, I don’t remember anything about that Captain. I swear. The last thing I remember was delivering Jake his uniform and the orgy that night.” They both flushed at the memory, their cocks chubbing.

“That’s very odd, because the orgy is my last memory, too. It’s like we’ve lost a few days.”

Combined with the station’s log, and officer’s constantly asking if he was ‘okay now’ Assad needed to do some digging.

****

“Amber, we want to erase your memories. Not too far back, but maybe erase what happened to you at the club, erase what Jake said and did to you,” Brad said.

“No. I don’t think so. I want to remember what he said, what he did.”

“But it wasn’t really him, it was the vaccines.”

“Still, I want to use it as a lesson in trusting people, falling too quickly.”

He hugged her, she snuggled into his broad chest, his massive arms wrapping around her making her feel safe and comfortable for the first time in too long.

****

Jake was incredibly horny. His levels were insane… how did that happen, he’d promised Brad to ramp up slowly.

His cock was rock hard, he pumped it a few times, and exploded all over the bed sheets in no time.

Silence. What? What happened to the ‘voices’ of his sperm?

Something odd was going on.

****

“You collapsed,” HE said. “We’re not really sure why.”

“I can’t hear my sperm any more. I think I’ve lost that ability. I can still hear and modify my own subconscious, but what about our coaching business, if I can’t change them with my cum…”

“Well, I still have the ability, at least for now.” HE said.

That wasn’t enough. Jake immediately set to work with his subconscious, trying to work out a way to restore the sperm ability….

                THE END

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14 minutes ago, Ripped said:

The last two words can’t be true. What about the new gym? What about … everything else!

"Always leave them wanting more..." 🤣

I'm cheating and writing an epilogue that will set out where everyone ended up. It's almost done so will post it soon.

I have a few spin off ideas, and maybe even some alternate endings as possible future works. As you'll see from the epilogue, there's tonnes of scope for further works, in particular focussing on HIM. (We might even learn HIS name one day ;))

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CHAPTER ONE-HUNDRED-AND-SEVENTY-SIX — EPILOGUE

HE moved to the other side of the country, accepting the position of Chair at The International Institute of Immunology & Microbiology. Of course, HE excelled at the role and made multiple lasting contributions and advancements to medical science. HIS lab was dismantled, and the remaining samples destroyed. Though HE does still have HIS encrypted file…

HE fell into gym ownership like a duck to water, becoming the “Jake of the other side of the country”, as Amber liked to describe HIM. Everyone loved HIM, everyone wanted to be with HIM, and HE certainly never had any trouble finding HIS next fuck. Progress on HIS physique was phenomenal but, like many bitten by the iron bug, bigger is never big enough.

Brad was surprised to learn that another effect of Jake’s sperm was to pass on the sperm ability, so Brad took over the gym’s coaching functions on this side of the country. His link to Jake’s subconscious persists, but he has not needed to use this ability to bring Jake into line, at least not as of the time of writing. He continues to have incredible strength, and off the charts muscle density. From time to time, he gets hungry again and the muscle density piles on, increasing his strength. With Jake's help, he's improved his cardiovascular fitness, but no one can yet hold a candle to Jake. He remains a machine in the gym.

Jake used his ability to modify his subconscious to achieve his dream of adding over 30kg (66lbs) of pure muscle. His physique was already the envy of everyone that saw him, now… words cannot describe it. Had he chosen to compete, there is no question he would win.

Their coaching business is booked years in advance on both sides of the country. Demand was so high, they had to raise the prices, and they’re still not able to keep up with the demand. As they predicted, the three business owners, Brad, Jake and HIM, have more money than they could ever spend or know what to do with.

Nonna died peacefully in her sleep, happy in the knowledge that ‘her Jake’ fulfilled his dreams of gaining the muscoli. Jake still eats tiramisu, though he has never found one quite like Nonna’s.

Brad and Amber ended up together, eventually married and had two children. A girl, Angelina, and a boy, Jake. Jake is the godfather of both children and, of course, they love Jake, and he's already encouraging them to think about fitness.

Jake and Ralph ended up together, also marrying, though they decided not to have any children, which is sad for everyone because Ralph wouldn’t be passing on his angelic face genes and Jake wouldn’t be passing on his physique genes.

They still regularly see HIM in person, alternating who flies across once a month for their “business meetings.” It was fun writing off their group sex sessions as a business expense. Yes, they still regularly enjoyed having sex with one another. The married couples were not in an open relationship, but they were comfortable with each others’ partners and HIM.

Amber never really got over Jake’s treatment of her, though he was still the greatest fuck she’s ever had. Brad was fucking great, but he wasn’t Jake. So she enjoyed their group sex sessions, but was wary of getting too close to him emotionally ever again.

Assad never did find out what happened to him and Diego, he remained friends with Brad and Jake. Diego and Sam ended up transferring to a different precinct about a year after the events in the story, and had to cancel their membership to the gym. Eventually they lost touch as long distance relationships and friendships often do.

Scott continued his bodybuilding journey, with the help of Brad and his Uncle, becoming the youngest Mr Olympia winner in history, obliterating the competition. Scott, more than anything else, was the best advertisement for their coaching business, and the business really took off after Scott’s win. Scott and Jake remain super close, and Scott still remembers the first time he got laid… happy for her and Brad.

Jason and Maria remain married, still fucking to their once a month schedule. And it is fucking, not making love. The love was lost in the marriage a long time ago. Neither has the courage to leave. They are estranged from their only son Scott, neither could understand Scott’s interest in, and certainly not his obsession with, bodybuilding and fitness. Jason remains in denial about his attraction and fetish. Brad has offered to 'fix' him on many occasions, but Scott decided that he did not want his father’s personality altered, even if it was for his own good. Jason and Jake have not spoken since the incident.

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1 hour ago, mmvmgo2011 said:

Jake still eats tiramisu, though he has never found one quite like Nonna’s.

Good, he better eat that fucking tiramisu and he better enjoy it🤣 A great conclusion to a true epic! I loved seeing where everybody ended up and it looks like our unnamed protag is really living it up on the other side of the country, good for him😏 Amber and Brad together is great to see and I’m glad that Jake remained under control and found someone which is good!

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No name reveal for HIM is really surprising! Loved this story even when it got scary at times. Can’t wait to see how you build off it (if you do)

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Oh man its sad this absolutely great, awesome outa words journey has come to an end.

The characters you created were so well done and the work you'd put on the story was fantastic.

Altho im kind of sad how things have been left of with Jason. He is not happy and destroyed his relationship with his brother and only son. 

Everyone is in a "happy" place after the incident and they tried to moved on their own way.

 

Thank you man for writting this piece amd i hope its not the last.

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9 hours ago, RavenousBeast said:

No name reveal for HIM is really surprising! Loved this story even when it got scary at times. Can’t wait to see how you build off it (if you do)

 

2 hours ago, Ro20316 said:

Oh man its sad this absolutely great, awesome outa words journey has come to an end.

The characters you created were so well done and the work you'd put on the story was fantastic.

Altho im kind of sad how things have been left of with Jason. He is not happy and destroyed his relationship with his brother and only son. 

Everyone is in a "happy" place after the incident and they tried to moved on their own way.

 

Thank you man for writting this piece amd i hope its not the last.

Thanks guys. I think we'll defintiely see some or all of these characters again in some future works.

I think I feel more sorry for Maria, than Jason. I think she's trapped in a loveless marriage, whether through financial dependence or some misguided sense of loyalty, and he's sticking with it because it's an easy "out" for him to deny his true feelings and nature. Jason only has himself to blame, really. Though it's not ideal, I think both Scott and Jake are better off without that toxic relationship constantly throwing up dramas and issues.

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