Wrong Target (part 10 added 10/11/22)

[Kymuscleboy]

That was an awesome, hot chapter! The father vs. son dick size competition was one of the hottest things I've ever read. Also, the part where Kyle is knocked to the floor simply by the act of Zach's dick getting hard again was a great follow up to the competition to further demonstrate his power and an incredibly hot scene. I have a feeling he might have a lot more growing to do... in height, muscle and maybe where he's already the largest (well, except for David). 

The nearly last scene with the formula and Kevin was a little bit of a roller coaster. At first, I was pissed at David, but not surprised, as it seemed he was rubbing in the fact that Kenny hadn't grown like the rest of his family. Then I was absolutely shocked that he would give him the formula anyway to hold onto for when/IF it would be of use to him. Then I was mad again but at Amanda for the cruel way she acted to belittle Kenny and convince David to take his dose back. I don't really blame David.  I don't think he should have given Kenny the formula then taken it back, as in my mind you don't do that, but he shouldn't have given it to him in the first place since he can't use it.

All that said, I can't wait to see how taking a second dose within the week affects David. I hope he gets a major boost from him and becomes even huger compared to everyone else. 

Of course, I think @lolpoooper knows by now that my criticism of the actions of the characters are just me thinking about the story and are not criticisms of the writing itself. The story has been and remains incredible! It's very good writing when it evokes a reaction and makes you think about it. 

[baralover101]

Bummmmmmmmp

[MuscleFrot]

On 10/5/2022 at 9:57 AM, Kymuscleboy said:

That was an awesome, hot chapter! The father vs. son dick size competition was one of the hottest things I've ever read. 

 

Absolutely agree and really do hope there'll be a longer and more detailed rematch!

 

[dagonthethird]

Loved this series! Can't wait to see more

[bigbbny]

So good!! Thank you 

[lolpoooper]

Once again I'm very glad you all like the story so far, thanks for the kind words, the tips, the criticisms, all of it! Much appreciated. 
The chapters are gonna come out a bit more slowly now unfortunately, but I'll try to put out one a week or so as I do like writing them.

 

PART 8:

For the rest of the week after the party Kyle’s father worked out like a man possessed. Kyle realized that it was probably something about that second shot that reinvigorated his growth which had, according to David, “stagnated” in the last couple of weeks.

Every time he saw his dad outside the HIMS gym he saw a larger and larger man.

Of all the people in the world to give this much power to, did it have to be his own father, Kyle thought. He wondered what would have happened if he had grown instead of his dad. Maybe it was all the time spent feeling inferior in the presence of a giant among giants, maybe it was because he knew so much more about his own father now, but he couldn’t help but wonder if he would have ever grown anywhere near the size of his own dad.

He could barely reconcile in his mind that the ever-growing living embodiment of masculinity he saw every day now was the same man he remembered from before that night. But then again he remembered the difference there was between them even then. His father was always at least a head taller than everyone else, he was extremely strong and muscular and fit even into his old age. He looked muscular and huge despite his height. He was rich, extremely handsome, confident, and—Kyle now knew—more hung than 99% of people on the planet.

He was used to being so much more than anyone he could meet. And now, this man that probably needed this mega-boost into hyper-masculinity the least was now eagerly working on making even his old HIMS self look puny by comparison.

Kyle couldn’t even begin to imagine how his father felt.

“Thirteen foot three, dad.” Kyle said reading off the tape pressed against the wall.

“Finally.” David boomed.

Kyle knew that David wanted to breach the 13-foot mark for some time, and it looked like the second shot had helped him out in that. He looked at his father’s head which had become ever more distant in their measuring sessions, receding behind his huge, round shoulders which seemed to expand outward endlessly as David’s body took on a form resembling some hyper-masculine ideal.

“92.9 inches.” Kyle read out the measurement on his dad’s chest later.

“Hnngh.” David let out a frustrated moan.

David was so close to breaking even these enormous record numbers, that he was no longer satisfied with a 93-inch chest, he desired a 100-inch one, no longer settling for a ‘mere’ 46-inch bicep, but gunning for the 50-inch mark. He now wanted his calves to be larger than most men’s chests.

For Kyle, the most unnerving part of these measurements were his father’s enormous biceps. There was something terrifying and exciting about his dad raising his colossal, ripped, pillar-like arm up so close to Kyle’s face. His already overly huge, muscled arm was on its own and relaxed enough to terrify most anyone on the planet with its sheer size. But then he would nonchalantly flex the enormous limb, making all that mass explode outwards in all directions even more, hardening and metamorphosing into this enormous sphere of pure power that felt harder than steel, and that Kyle knew possessed so much more actual strength than any limb even of its colossal size had any right to possess.

His dad could overpower him with a single finger, he realized.

Eventually it came time for the last measurement. Kyle delicately placed the tape at the base of David’s fully erect member. He glanced at the giant ballsack underneath his dad’s thick, long dick, and he briefly thought how only one of his dad’s balls probably produced more cum per orgasm than a regular man could produce in an entire week. And his dad could orgasm many, many times.

But he snapped himself out of it, and extended the measuring tape up, and up, along the warm, immovable, steel-hard member, covered in a soft layer of silky-smooth skin, all the way up, and with some difficulty, to its monumental tip.

Kyle remembered the first time that they did this, and how much easier it had all been, how big he thought his dad had grown, but that was nothing compared to his dad now.

“T—twenty-two point three inches, dad.” Kyle said, and David just nodded.

Kyle realized that his dad’s dick had grown more than two inches in a week. It was the fastest growing part on David’s whole body. Perhaps because it was the one that got the most exercise.

H: 13' 3''

Ch: 92.9

B: 46.45

W: 59.3

T: 57.9

Ca: 37.5

P: 22.3

As Kyle entered his father’s stats on his phone, he realized that soon, his father’s already overly engorged 16-inch HIMS cock will have just grown by the size of Kyle’s whole dick. This shook him deeply, and he looked up at his awaiting father in awe and unimaginable envy.

He climbed up to his dad’s arm to give him the shot. But, when he got there, and was about to administer the formula, he had the same problem that Amanda did last time around. He found it incredibly difficult to pierce his dad’s skin with the needle.

“What’s the matter?” David asked.

“Nothing, I’m on it, sir. Sorry.” Kyle said, and barely somehow managed to administer the formula.

He looked over at David, who was instantly thrown into the throes of pleasure, his dick hardening even further. Kyle watched him knowing that now David was no longer uncontrollably horny from the shot, but that he was merely allowing himself to feel the inhuman pleasure that it brought.

“Aaaah, thank you, son.” David said when it was done, and went to his bedroom.

…

After giving his father the shot on Mondays, Kyle would go to his dad’s bedroom and look into the HIMS gym through the window his dad installed there with the gym. There was something intoxicating about David’s workouts right after he received the shot. He was so powerful, so elated in the gym.

It was the same that week, for a couple of days after the shot, Kyle would watch his father working out, he heard his mother deliver nutrient canister after nutrient canister to the gym’s doors.

He watched as his dad lowered himself on his unique beyond-HIMS version of a bench press. It was an extra-reinforced concrete and steel contraption. Almost the size of a regular human room. It had extra reinforced bars which David gripped, and almost comical amounts of weight piled on both sides of the special barbell. Kyle didn’t know just how much weight his father could bench press now, as the numbers grew so astronomically quickly.

There were three other HIMS men in there with him, spotting him. One on each side of the barbell, one next to his head. All three were more than ten feet tall and the size of professional bodybuilders, and even they were beginning to get nervous with the amount of weight his father was about to bench press.

Kyle stared at his father’s enormous muscles as they all suddenly exploded outward in this stunning display of size and strength when he began his set. His pectorals fought for size on his chest, they were somehow both bulging with massive size but also striated, muscular, and lean. The muscles on his arms were a symphony of movements, flexing, and ripped muscles all working together flawlessly for David to pump out rep after flawless, slow, controlled rep.

His father was an animal. Even after the three HIMS men jumped in, expecting him to stop, he just kept going. Kyle could see the hunger in his eyes, for more size, more strength. He pushed himself beyond what even Kyle thought possible every time.

Finally, he could go no further. A rare moment when David met a limit of any kind, although Kyle knew it was only temporary.

The three HIMS men clearly struggled while assisting him, all three going red in the face as they, with his help, returned the barbell back up into its place.

That was the last workout of the day it seemed, as David left the gym with his three HIMS buddies, and Kyle took out his phone, deciding to hang out some more there before someone came in to use the bedroom. But then he heard his father’s voice coming from the living room.

“Son!” David demanded his presence.

Kyle jumped up and jolted over to the living room. He kept surprising himself with just how eagerly his body followed every one of his father’s commands before his brain could even process what was happening.

When he entered the living room he saw David sitting on the couch, and to Kyle’s horror, he saw a syringe filled with the formula, waiting on the coffee table above.

“Dad?” He asked. “Wh- why did you call?”

“It’s time for my injection.”

“B- but you’ve already had one this week.” Kyle said, meekly.

“I know.” David replied. “But now, you’re going to give me another one.”

“W- won’t you run out?” Kyle asked.

David just laughed.

“Son, did you really think your father would allow anyone to have this formula while he had the means to buy it all?” David simply said, and then repeated his command. “The shot. Now.”

Kyle should have known his father had acquired whatever little of the formula there was left in the world, and it looked like he intended to use it all on himself.

Despite the deep pit forming in his stomach, Kyle climbed up to be nearer to his huge father’s arm, and went to administer his shot.

However, this time he had more trouble than even last time. He tried and tried, but he just couldn’t do it.

“What is it?” David boomed, and his face turned to look down at Kyle struggling with the syringe.

“I- I don’t know,” Kyle said, nervously. “I just can’t seem to get the needle through your skin. It- it’s just… too hard.”

David raised his brow, and then he let out a laugh.

“Well, this is new. Is your dad developing impenetrable skin?”

Kyle’s eyes went wide as he stared up at his dad.

“It makes sense, I suppose,” David said. “Every part of me is becoming superhuman.”

“I can’t do it dad, I’m sorry, your skin is too hard.” Kyle said, and held up the syringe to his dad.

David took it gently from his hand, and went to administer the shot himself.

He held the thing gently in his huge hand. The entire syringe disappeared in between his massive fingers, and yet David possessed such control of his body, that he handled the syringe more carefully than even Kyle ever could even with his much, much smaller hands and fingers.

Slowly, carefully, he managed to puncture his own skin without bending or breaking the syringe. Kyle realized that soon they would need new, less brittle equipment for his dad. And he looked up at David, who was smiling.

“Alright, looks like it’s time for your dad to become invincible.” He said, and began administering the shot, throwing his head back in pleasure as his cock pulsed eagerly.

Kyle stared up, in awe, watching his father who he now realized was putting himself on a road to godhood.

[bigbbny]

So hot! 

[citizenies]

Take your time

Cant wait to know how everyone else who got shots got affected as well and for possible twists ahaha

[Ro20316]

I love the way his dad just dominates everything around him without trying. He doesnt excert that Dominance he just knows everyone will do as he says.

[merehuman]

good lord

 

when you thought that this genre was already fully explored, comes a great new story making it feel anew

 

I love how the domination aspect is never spoken, it is just the natural order. very hot