SMC2710 Posted December 20, 2022 Share Posted December 20, 2022 Wow. This is great writing. I’m absolutely loving this as well as your other current work Weird, But Sweet. You’ve created such vivid, nuanced characters inside of two wonderfully unique stories. Amazing work. These two are soul mates. I’m hoping we see Gabe go off like a nuclear bomb when his sexual dam finally bursts. Would also love to get more visuals on Auggie’s looks too. We know he’s a catch for a guy like Doug, but his look has not yet been the focus. Maybe when/if sexual Gabe is unleashed, we can hear his thoughts on Auggie’s body? 4 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mario2007 Posted December 20, 2022 Share Posted December 20, 2022 After last week's marathon, I was hoping for more lol. Such an AWESOME story. I really hope Gabriel has that breakthrough! 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ploder4 Posted December 20, 2022 Share Posted December 20, 2022 At the rate Gabriel is growing, sex would be moot anyway. He'll be too big all over. Probably to the point where it ends up too dangerous for Auggie. They may end up having to live separately together... much like now. I also have the feeling that Gabriel may up having that "ultimate ascension" where he's too advanced for mere humans physically. Would Auggie gladly end up being a pet. 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted December 20, 2022 Share Posted December 20, 2022 Love the outright scene where Gabriel leaves greatly thoughtlessly for a lover. The implication that there's a gap he cannot fill while just acting through it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KeiraCooke Posted December 20, 2022 Share Posted December 20, 2022 I've really enjoyed the story so far and I can't wait to see where you take it! Your writing has got me feeling all kinds of ways for these two idiots; I was sad for Gabe when he was despairing over masturbating, indignant when the allos insist that Gabe needs fixing and most recently I feel so upset with Gabe. Coercing your friend into a shower with you and leaving as soon as you bring him to orgasm? Not cool man. Not. Cool. In and case, I look forward to the next update and seeing what shenanigans Gabe gets up to to get Auggie to stay. 5 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jwood Posted December 21, 2022 Share Posted December 21, 2022 Really hope the chalkboard on the fridge eventually says 6.9 and 420 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ploder4 Posted December 21, 2022 Share Posted December 21, 2022 6 minutes ago, jwood said: Really hope the chalkboard on the fridge eventually says 6.9 and 420 Just 420? Why not 500? Lol 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OldFashioned Posted December 21, 2022 Share Posted December 21, 2022 3 hours ago, ploder4 said: Just 420? Why not 500? Lol 2 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ozymandias Posted December 21, 2022 Share Posted December 21, 2022 Gabriel is rather toxic when it comes down to it. Auggie needs to leave him for his own good. 2 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jontron Posted December 21, 2022 Share Posted December 21, 2022 37 minutes ago, Ozymandias said: Gabriel is rather toxic when it comes down to it. Auggie needs to leave him for his own good. Honestly, agreed at this point. When the story first started I really wanted them to get together. Now, though, I don't think it'd be good for Auggie to settle. He deserves the "real deal." I'm excited to see where the story ends up taking us. 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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