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I finally read this story, and wow! I was missing out, because this is fantastic. The descriptions are so well done and the characters are so well drawn out that it's amazing. I love how Todd's confidence is slowly growing as he gets stronger and stronger and better at BJJ. I hope you decide to continue so that we can see what happens when Todd finally gets his showdown with Jake.

If I have one suggestion, it might be that the weights he is lifting could be even heavier compared to the other descriptions of his growing strength (such as denting his brother's car) and how easily he takes down seasoned martial arts fighters. However, that's extremely minor in the grand scheme of things and doesn't take away at all from a really well-written story.

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