Muscle Lads, Inc.

[muscleaddict]

13 hours ago, Maxum said:

Thanks for getting to some muscle sex and worship early in the story. While I appreciate the purpose and effect of a slow wind-up to romantic interests, I'm glad to get a sex scene from you in the first chapter. I know there's a lot more good stuff to come. Looking forward to it.

M

Yeah - no waiting for 15 chapters for the sex in this one!  I can't promise hot sex and worship scenes with a hot silver chain-wearing daddy in every chapter though. 

[muscleaddict]

10 hours ago, biggymnast84 said:

My god MA, every story I read of yours plays out like a movie in my head. Your descriptors are insane!! I can’t wait to see if Nick accepts the apartment and which gym he chooses. I wonder what will happen with Benji? So many questions!! Patiently waiting till part two….

Haha! Glad you're liking it so far, mate!  Next chapter is told from Alfie's point of view so it has a slightly different vibe! 

[muscleaddict]

8 hours ago, dredlifter said:

UFFF!  YESSS!

That's how you write bodybuilder sex!  I don't know why there isn't more posing-while-fucking content in the world

I can relate so much with the main character.  Realistically I know I'm kinda big, but it's so hard to consider myself a real bodybuilder.  

Now I need to find myself a shaved-head bodybuilder daddy oof. 

Haha! Thank you, mate! Honestly - I don't know, either. Surely most bodybuilders flex and pose while fucking? (Whether their partners like it or not. ) Just need to get yourself down to Utopia, mate. (Pretty sure Mason would have picked you over Nick - sorry, Nick!) And you ARE a real bodybuilder but maybe you won't fully believe it until you're bronzed up and cranking out a crab most muscular on stage in your shiny blue trunks with your tongue sticking out. 

[Ozymandias]

A captivating start. Waiting for Nick to become a 300lb roided mass monster by the story’s end.

That (demand) aside, looking forward to how this develops. I’m expecting some sort of love triangle drama…

[BrzNLA]

Wow! What a great first chapter and set up for what’s to come. Thanks @muscleaddict for starting to share another story with us!

By the way, is not a problem at all if all the chapters are long as this one.

[crushme99]

2 hours ago, BrzNLA said:

By the way, is not a problem at all if all the chapters are long as this one.

I agree.  Not that we want to exhaust you and wear you out, MA, but I feel the longer format allows you to draw us more deeply into the story.  But your creative instincts come first, and all your unmet friends respect that.

[muscleaddict]

21 hours ago, BrzNLA said:

Wow! What a great first chapter and set up for what’s to come. Thanks @muscleaddict for starting to share another story with us!

By the way, is not a problem at all if all the chapters are long as this one.

 

18 hours ago, crushme99 said:

I agree.  Not that we want to exhaust you and wear you out, MA, but I feel the longer format allows you to draw us more deeply into the story.  But your creative instincts come first, and all your unmet friends respect that.

And here I was worrying the length of the first chapter might put people off! There are a couple of longer ones to come but most are about half to two-thirds of the length of this one. 

[DawnFire98]

Oh my god. 

Seeing you post a new epic tale of love, bodybuilders and shiny posing trunks filled me with joy, @muscleaddict. Here are my two cents (maybe I'll add more in the future). 

1. I hope, we get to see more sides of Danny King. Would be cool to find out, that he's not the biggest twat and actually a really nice guy...or maybe he is THE ultimate twat. 

2. Mason, the hot muscle daddy, was a "breakout-character" for me. He completely won me over with his bold, cocky nature and I would love to see more of him. Also: BIG PECS, HUBBA HUBBA!
 

[muscleaddict]

On 5/21/2023 at 4:56 PM, Ozymandias said:

A captivating start. Waiting for Nick to become a 300lb roided mass monster by the story’s end.

That (demand) aside, looking forward to how this develops. I’m expecting some sort of love triangle drama…

 

On 5/22/2023 at 10:43 PM, DawnFire98 said:

Oh my god. 

Seeing you post a new epic tale of love, bodybuilders and shiny posing trunks filled me with joy, @muscleaddict. Here are my two cents (maybe I'll add more in the future). 

1. I hope, we get to see more sides of Danny King. Would be cool to find out, that he's not the biggest twat and actually a really nice guy...or maybe he is THE ultimate twat. 

2. Mason, the hot muscle daddy, was a "breakout-character" for me. He completely won me over with his bold, cocky nature and I would love to see more of him. Also: BIG PECS, HUBBA HUBBA!
 

Thank you both for the awesome feedback. I'm glad you guys are liking it so far! I won't give anything away on the Danny front but Mason for me is kind of like the ultimate muscle daddy. Short, bald, handsome, cocky...knows what he wants! 

[muscleaddict]

I thought I'd post a few "notes" on the first chapter. I'm not sure if people want this sort of thing and I probably won't do it for every chapter but here goes...

- Mitchell “The Machine” Murray (the bodybuilder on the poster in the flat) was referenced and eventually featured in Deano, Again as one of the well-known IFBB pros competing at the McCarthy Classic, which Deano and some of his classmates guest posed at. He's a Canadian bodybuilder in his mid to late twenties, described as being a freak with shocking size and crazy vascularity that borders on grotesque. As well looking like a bodybuilding version of Chris Pratt.

- Montgomery University is the name of the uni in my Muscle University/Deano stories. (I know most of you know that already!) It isn't referenced much after this chapter, but some familiar character names do pop up in conversation.

- My original plan was to have the story set in a fictional coastal city/town which included the name "on-sea" but in my head I just kept picturing Brighton! Having it set in Manchester seemed to give it a bit more of an authentic/realistic feel.

- There are a couple of Mancunian slang terms/words scattered throughout the story but I don't think anything will cause too much confusion with non-Brits. I'll probably address these if they come up.

I also meant to thank some of you for helping me chose the name of the story in the original post but completely forget. So here goes - @DennisFLL @DawnFire98 and @Mdlftr. And also a special thanks to  @MuscleJoe for helping me out with certain aspects of the story still to come!