Popular Post Newmassaddict Posted January 6, 2015 Popular Post Share Posted January 6, 2015 I have been reading stories on this site (and the old one) for many years. I'm in awe of the talented writers that post stories here. Recently, I have started writing my own stories. This is something I have been working on and have received some positive feedback. I hope you enjoy it. Growth 1 It’s been happening more and more lately. I catch a glimpse of myself in a mirror or window reflection and my heart skips a beat. This used to happen only on occasion; during a particularly gruelling workout. I would see my reflection in the gym mirror and have to do a double take. These days, its happening outside the gym, when I’m not even pumped. It all started two months ago when I finally broke the 300lb barrier. I remember just staring at the scale for well over a minute. 301.5lbs it read. I finally tore myself away from the display and lumbered towards the bathroom. Instantly, my cock was rock hard. I could feel its 9” girth pressing against my gym shorts. I stopped in front of the bathroom mirror and literally ripped my tank top off. I knew anyone else in the locker room could've heard the tearing sound but I didn’t care. I contorted myself into a most muscular crab pose. My traps rose to touch my earlobes. Thick veins erupted on the surface of my tanned skin. Sweat immediately started to glisten on my hulking shoulders. Deep striations and more veins coverd their surface. My inhumanly huge biceps harden like granite as they reached their 25” maximum size. I grunted and flexed even harder. My bloated triceps exploded in perfect ripped horseshoes as my forearms tripled in size. At 20” of thick, vein covered monstrosities, they were larger than most men’s biceps. I could feel my chest filling with blood as it rose to meet my chin. Striations three inches deep appeared. Each overdeveloped fibre twitched and moved with raw power. I was growling now and my arms started to shake as I held the pose. Through the small gaps between my arms and chest I could see my ripped abs expanding in a solid powerful column. Even though I could not see it; I flared my impossibly wide back to the point where the skin felt as if it might split open. I managed to take a step back as the seams of my gym shorts started to tear. A network of veins so thick and engorged covered every visible inch. At 37” each quad fought with the other for room. Sweat ran down my quads to my calves. Even though my massive quads prevented my legs from touching at the knees there was barely an inch separating my calves. At last measure they we over 22” of pure beef. Even unflexed they were the most overdeveloped calves I had even witnessed. I had now been holding this body torturing pose for close to a minute. Sweat was pooling at my feet, my whole body was trembling and I was growling like a rabid animal. My eyes darted around my reflection as 301.5lbs ran though my head. Summoning an incomprehensible inner power I somehow flexed even harder. As I watched my already hulking frame expand even bigger I could feel huge amounts of hot cum running down my legs. I released to pose as I hit orgasm and stumbled back and slammed into the wall behind me bracing myself on the counter to stop from collapsing on the floor. I had never cum without touching myself before. 11 25 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arpeejay Posted January 6, 2015 Share Posted January 6, 2015 Excellent start! Great descriptions and highly readable. Now quadruple the length and you'll have a first chapter. Get cracking! :-) 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Newmassaddict Posted January 6, 2015 Author Share Posted January 6, 2015 Excellent start! Great descriptions and highly readable. Now quadruple the length and you'll have a first chapter. Get cracking! :-) High praise coming from you Richard! Thanks. I have a lot more written so stay tuned. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
muscle16a Posted January 6, 2015 Share Posted January 6, 2015 So far so good! I like your sentence structure. And ANY muscle-flexing session that ends with a cumshot will earn applause from me! One thought, though: For me, the most erotic thing is the GROWTH. When the protagonist is, from the very beginning of the story, already over 300 pounds of rock-hard ripped and rippling muscle, the first thought I have is that the growth has already occurred! (And I missed it!) Which is surely a shame, don't you think? 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arpeejay Posted January 6, 2015 Share Posted January 6, 2015 Muscle16a, two words:1. Flashbacks!2. 400 lbs.! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tenma Posted January 6, 2015 Share Posted January 6, 2015 ... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
muscle16a Posted January 6, 2015 Share Posted January 6, 2015 Muscle16a, two words: 1. Flashbacks! 2. 400 lbs.! Hopefully more of #1 and less of #2. . . . but that's my own bias on this issue, as I generally do not find growth beyond standard human range to be very erotic. Of course, in a world in which the "standard human range" has been altered, maybe my biases would alter as well. Hmmm . . . . sounds like the beginnings of an idea for a story! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
muscleaddict Posted February 20, 2015 Share Posted February 20, 2015 Great start with amazing descriptions! My kind of language! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
richard18 Posted August 5, 2015 Share Posted August 5, 2015 I love this first part and can't wait to read the rest hope you keep getting more muscular 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bratt Posted August 21, 2015 Share Posted August 21, 2015 Great story! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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