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SEED - Part 2

Jack was starting to lose himself again due to the power of the aroma that was covering the wing of Jason’s hospital floor like a thick luscious fog.  His cock, if possible, was even harder than it had been back at the farm and it felt as if every part of his body was building up into a sexual frenzy that he knew he soon would not be able to control.  He contemplated leaving and going back down the elevator, when he saw a box of surgical masks on the floor.  Hopeful that it would help, he picked one up and put it on.  Even though he was still incredibly horny he was able to regain some more control of his body.  The fabric of the mask must have been filtering just enough of the aroma to let him keep his wits, but his yearning for an orgasm was still at an incredible level and he didn’t know how long he would be able to keep from completely succumbing to the feeling he was feeling.  To describe the feeling, would be like he was right on the edge of a constant orgasm that never let up.   It was combined by an incredible desire to have someone fuck him both in his ass and mouth.  He knew that if the mask came off, he would completely fail to resist the feeling and be a pawn in this euphoric atmosphere.  Part of him screamed to rip the mask off and just relish in the erotic abyss, but he knew he needed answers. He knew he had to help his uncle. So, after surveying the environment of the hospital wing, he began to walk down the hall toward Jason’s room.  Along the way, he noticed drug carts on their sides, holes in the walls, broken glass everywhere and a very sticky substance on the floor and walls.  Basically he thought it looked like a war zone. 

As he passed by the various rooms that were open, it seemed weird and ominous that there were only a very few people there and even stranger, that they all were men.  There wasn’t a woman to be seen.  As well, each one of them seemed to be in some sort of trance.  He figured it was the same type of trance as he had experienced it himself.   Their eyes were open, but their faces were of euphoric expressions and they were in a constant heightened state of orgasm.   All of them were naked and as Jake looked down their bodies, it was very visible that each of them had been having various episodes of orgasms as cum covered most of their bodies and beds.  Also, their cocks were at a constant state of full erection; some just slowly spurting or oozing out more cum. They weren’t frozen in their beds, but they were writhing around and sexually touching themselves, by pinching their nipples, stroking their cocks and fingering their assholes.  He felt envious.

Jack also noticed in some of the rooms and on the floor of the hallways, orderlies, male nurses, doctors and every man that he had seen was in the same euphoric coma. Jake knew that if his mask were to come off, he would be joining them.  He checked the straps to make sure they were good and tight, but something in the back of his mind just wanted to untie the straps and to join the men and he even had a burning desire to suck and fuck them as a few of them had found each other and were fucking to no abandon.  He shook his head to get the thoughts out.

He stepped over and around the mass orgy of men and as he grew closer to where he thought was Jason’s room, he tread even more cautiously.  He was afraid that his uncle must have been somewhere around to cause this as Jack had figured that he caused what happened to him on the farm.  He remembered when he saw his uncle tear off into the fields and he wondered if he had made it to the hospital first.   He feared for Jason as well.  He hoped that Jason would have been able to help him with the situation, but if he was in the same state as these men, then all hope may have been lost. 

Just as a depression about that began to set in, Jack saw a few other nurses and doctors who were actually walking in and out of what should have been Jason’s room down at the end of the hall.  He thought, “Oh thank God…At least some of them are still…well…them.”  These men all had their clothes on but there were definite wet stains around their crotches, where they must had fallen victim to his uncle’s desires. Stranger still was that the closer he got to Jason’s room, he noticed that the nurses and doctors, all male of course, looked to be of their own minds and none of them were wearing masks either, so how was it that they weren’t totally incapacitated like the others. 

They were all larger in size than the rest of the men that were in the euphoric state.  Their clothes were very tight across their bodies and even some of their clothes were torn where it looked as though their muscles had pushed through.  All of them looked as large as guys who had spent years at the gym or on a stage.  None of them were as large and obscene as his uncle, but all of them were definitely buff and in various sizes of muscle and thickness.  They were bodybuilder, power lifter, and bouncer looking.  Even a few of them were shirtless and two of them were actually completely naked with massive bodybuilder bodies that had even larger muscles and cocks that must have been well over 8 inches, soft.   Jack’s still hard cock shot precum out of it as he saw them. It seemed that those two men, one being slightly smaller than the other, were the leaders of the other men that he could see, with the larger one being the boss. He noticed that a few of the other’s had called them both doctor, but he couldn’t make out their last names. 

Jack stopped dead in his tracks and watched the men.  He stared at them as they moved around and in and out of Jason’s room, and some were carrying large containers.  He leaned against the wall and looked intently at how their muscles moved and flexed as they moved.  He noticed the power in their arms and their asses pushing the fabric of their scrubs to the limit. All of them were definitely packing as huge bulges pushed out their pants or underwear.   A few of them would walk by each other and briefly stop and kiss deeply, encircling their tongues and feeling each other’s bodies. 

Jack was completely transfixed on them.  His own hands began to feel under his shirt and his right hand found his nipple.  He squeezed it and moaned quietly to himself.  He watched their wet crotches and the huge shafts of the two naked muscle Gods and his mouth began to moisten.  His breathing rapidly began to increase and his other hand found his own mound in his pants.  He squeezed his rock hard cock and he moaned out loud this time.  Behind him, to the left, he noticed a large oblong knob of a drawer and he moved in front of it and deliberately pressed the knob into the crack of his ass as he began to move his hips back and forth. His eyes closed and visions of his uncle fucking him from behind began to send Jack over the edge.  He grabbed the desk in front of him and pushed harder into the knob. He pushed so hard that he could feel the knob pushing against his hole, pushing the fabric, demanding entrance.  He unknowingly called out, “OH GOD YES…FUCK ME!” 

This caused him to open his eyes and he saw the larger naked muscle god start to walk over to him. He watched with pleasure as he could see that the man’s cock was growing and getting hard and massive, ending at a full mast of well over 12 inches, which only made Jack’s insatiable desire even heighten.  He nodded his head to the stud while licking his lips.  He wanted this.  He needed this more than ever.  There was nothing that he craved more.  He knew for some reason this isn’t why he had come here, but he didn’t care.  It was all that he desired. 

The filter of the mask was failing.

His constant fucking of the knob had caused the fabric of his shorts to begin to give way and to his wonderful surprise the knob broke through smashing hard into Jack’s willing hole as he let out a cry of joy.  “OH JESUS!! YES!!”  Instantly, as if by instinct, he feverishly began to fuck the knob in and out of his asshole. The knob was about 5 inches long and it looked like a butt plug with the middle of the knob being the thickest part and it perfectly fit into Jack’s hungry ass.  It was the best feeling he had ever felt before.  The most he ever had was his hands to pleasure himself, whether it be jerking his cock or teasing his hole, but he had never experienced anything even remotely inside him and it was amazing.   Jack was a 26 year old virgin. 

The muscle God was now in front of him and Jack looked up at him the towering 6.5 foot man and nodded his head, saying one word as he begged, “Please!”  The man smiled and nodded in acceptance so Jack took one of the man’s large quarter sized nipples into his mouth and he began to suck on it, flicking it with his tongue and nibbling it as he sucked like a baby starving for its milk.  This caused the muscle god to moan loudly and he grabbed Jack’s head pushing his face hard into his granite chest.  Feeling the sheer power of the man, made Jack feel like he knew it was his job to please this man and to be his servant and he was willing to give his body to do so.  Jack was accepting that he was a muscle pig.  He sucked feverishly on the man’s entire chest going from pec to pec, to nipple, to flexed bicep, to abs to pit, licking and worshiping the muscle that was before him. As he sucked and worshiped the huge torso, the man picked up Jack’s lower body raising his feet off the ground and he began to help the knob fuck him harder and harder.  The man tore Jack’s pants more to ease in the knob’s dominance of Jack.  As he went back on forth on the knob, Jack began to scream out in complete pleasure and then he pleaded to suck the man’s cock.  

As soon as Jack pleaded for the man’s cock, the man pushed Jack’s head down and he felt the mask come off as he opened his mouth as wide as he could.  He no longer cared about succumbing to his uncle’s aroma.  His only desire and will was to serve the man in front of him. He was now this man’s property.  He opened his mouth as wide as he could as he barely fit the man’s giant prick into his mouth.  This was the first cock that Jack had ever had in his mouth, but it was like he had been doing it for years.  It was as if it was instinct. Even though the sides of his mouth hurt, he didn’t care.  He licked under the head with his tongue and he inched himself lower and lower sinking the man’s cock deeper into him causing the man himself to reach a frenzied pitch of euphoria. The man held Jack’s head as he fucked the boy’s face.   

By this time, a group of some of the other muscled men had walked over to the scene and had disrobed all of their clothes as they were stroking intently on their larger than normal shafts.  The men’s voices were deep and low as they egged on Jack and his new master, the boss. They pulled off Jack’s shirt and a couple of them began to touch Jack’s chest, squeezing his nipples. Hands and mouths were all over Jack’s body and the feeling was incredible. 

As Jack feverishly sucked the bosses cock, the other smaller naked muscle man pulled him off of the knob with a pop and he took off Jack’s pants and all of the rest of his clothes.  Then he replaced the knob with the tip of his cock.  Before he could enter Jack, the Boss, put his hands around Jack’s waist and picked him up, twisting him around upside, keeping his cock in Jack’s mouth, and then for the first time, Jack’s felt what it was like to have his cock in someone’s mouth.  The smaller god began to kiss Jack’s ass and then he began to lick his freshly fucked hole, with a tongue invading where the knob used to be.  This was more than Jack cold take and within only a few moments Jack exploded into his partner’s mouth.  He thought that the orgasm at the farm was the most he had ever cum but this time it was so powerful and long lasting that Jack could literally feel his balls emptying out and along with his identity.  He was now becoming like the others and he didn’t care.

Oddly enough, his insatiable desire, did not subside after his orgasm, in fact, it seemed to make it increase.  Jack continued to suck on the boss’s massive cock and the boss turned Jack back around so that his feet were back on the floor.  That’s when the smaller god pushed his wet thick cock into Jack’s willing ass.   As with the boss, the smaller god took charge of his end of Jack.  He fucked Jack hard and passionately, moving in and out around pushing his cock in as far as he could go and then tease Jack’s ass with the massive cockhead right at the opening of his ass. 

For what seemed like an eternity of bliss, the two men fucked Jack from both ends, just as he had desired earlier.  Neither of them spoke a word, but Jack knew that he was there boy, their play thing and he couldn’t have been happier.   They made no commands to him, they just were in charge.  It was almost telepathic in nature; Jack would just realize that he needed to lick the boss’s balls and then concentrate on the cock head for a while.  Jack knew when to back into the smaller man’s cock so that he was doing all the work and then he would clinch his ass just right to make the smaller man moan in ecstasy.  The three of them were a well-oiled machine of premium sex.  They remained constant like this for more than an hour, never ebbing, only increasing.  Then Jack knew it was time to make his owners cum, he simultaneously worked on the boss’s cock giving him long deep insertions into his mouth all the while tonguing the underneath of the cock, which he instinctively knew was the boss’s favorite. As well, he tightened up his ass like a vise and pulsated his fuckhole to make his 2nd master go wild.  Meanwhile, the onlookers where firing off their own orgasms and covering the three with their cum, soaking their bodies with warm electrifying energy. As the pinnacle neared, both of his masters began to moan louder and he could literally feel their rising orgasms as he himself was on the verge of a euphoric explosion.  First to cum was the boss.  With one final thrust so that his cock was entirely down Jack’s throat, he erupted shot after shot, down into Jack’s gut.   There was so much cum that was filling him up; Jack could feel his stomach push tighter against his skin as it filled to capacity.  

Then just as strong as the boss’s orgasm, his other master’s cock shot deep into his ass, filling up his intestines and stomach even more.  The sensation of having both men shooting deep into him almost simultaneously, caused Jack to have another orgasm of his own, without even trying to touch himself to accomplish the deed.  As all three of them continued to cum, Jack’s stomach grew to look like a man with a beer gut hard and full.  Amazingly, both men had shot so hard and so far up into Jack, that not a drop escaped his body.  Then just as suddenly all three men stopped cumming and Jack realized for the first time, that the mask was now off, but that he was still okay.  Then both of his masters simultaneously uttered their only words, “I am so very proud of you Jack, you have taken the first step to becoming part of the plan and you will be at my side, changing humanity forever. Take in the gift you have been given and then come to me and be at my side. Your uncle will be joining us soon.” 

Jack realized the voice that came out of the two men. It was Jason. 

Suddenly, Jack felt his stomach begin to gargle and he could feel the cum begin to absorb into him, Then he began to feel very different.  He felt more alive and have felt stronger…a lot stronger.  He grabbed ahold of the boss to steady himself as he felt heavier.  His cock actually began to grow even though it was already rock hard.  His balls began to fill and grow as well.  Jack could feel his chest expand and his nipples became super sensitive. Both pecs filled up as if pumped up with air, but what he felt fill them was strength and power.  His back began to widen as his traps grew around his thickening neck.  His arms filled with power and grew to be just shy of his boss’s arms that were on either side of him.  He flexed his upper arms and marveled in the bulbous power they produced.  He felt massive and superior.  He let go of his old masters and he stood up, realizing that he was now taller than both of them at around 7 feet.  His upper body was not larger than that of the smaller god and he turned to him and smiled as he now was superior to him.  He grabbed the smaller man’s face and kissed him hard, causing the smaller guy to moan in submission to Jack.  This made Jack feel in more superior.  He turned to the larger god and he could see that the demeanor of him was now that of a subordinate. He grabbed the man’s ass and pulled him into him and he kissed him even more passionately than the first.  The boss moaned and literally shot a small amount of cum onto Jack.  Jack looked at the man and pointed to the cum running the length of his new hugely endowed cock.  The man immediately bent down and licked his own cum off of Jack and then put Jack’s cock in his mouth to clean him off.

Jack moaned himself and he listened as his voice had lowered many octaves to that of a thundering bass.  He stood the man back up to his feet and picked him up in the process.  The feeling of power coursed through his entire body, even his toes and fingers felt powerful.  His looked down at his legs as they continued to build upon themselves and his thighs pushed together, causing his growing cock and balls to push out further in front of him. As his cock was pushing out in front, his ass filled up with strength and muscle and pushed outward, becoming two hard melons. What was once a soft pliable ass was now harder than rock and each cheek caved perfectly in on the sides, creating the perfect muscle butt.

Not only were there growth and changes on the outside of Jack, but he felt his core strengthen along with his mind.  He was sharper and more in tune with himself.  His senses were heightened.  He was able to smell even more of the pungent odor, actually dissecting the different ingredients in the aroma like, testosterone, various types of pheromones, pollens and proteins. He noticed that instead of it making him into a sexually incapacitated lump; it invigorated him and made him feel unstoppable.  His eyesight increased as well and he welcomed the light as it cleared his vision for him to see much further with more clarity.  He was also able to hear everything that anyone was saying, even on some of the other floors.   Then they feeling of power increased in his skeletal and blood systems.  His bones strengthened to that of tree trunks and his blood cells accelerated his heart beat that strengthened his immunity and help to soon make him indestructible.  His nerves were heightened and he could literally feel what others were feeling.  He could physically feel the attraction that others, like the previous masters were given him.  It made his skin tingle and it fueled even more power inside of him.  Everything that was happening was making him better, stronger, bigger and more superhuman. 

His brain as well, increased in strength as he was beginning to hear what others were thinking as well.  His former muscle boss was now wishing for Jack to fuck him and Jack could feel that deep in his mind he was actually begging for it.  So Jack decided to do an experiment.  He thought about how he could make the man feel like Jack was actually fucking him with physically doing the act.  He thought about what it would feel like to fuck the muscle god and then it happened.  Jack wasn’t sure how he did it, but he just tried to project what he felt and what was in his mind as to how he would fuck the man and he saw this once mammoth boss, begin to moan as if he was slowly being fucked.  Jack increased the intensity in his head and the man screamed out in pleasure as if Jack were actually fucking him. The boss’s eyes rolled back in his head and he started begging at the top of his lungs for Jack to fuck him harder.  Jack thought it and the man, yelled “FUUUUUUUUUUCK” and shot stream after stream of hot cum all over the hallway. Jack just smiled and licked his lips, reveling in his new gifts that he had been given. 

Then as his change began to subside, the final bit of increased power and strength hit him as he felt stronger inside his crotch area as his Kegel muscles tightened and gained size and strength, actually pushing his taint down further.  This cause the biggest wave of pleasure throughout Jack’s body causing him to growl so loudly that the walls shook.  He now knew why his previous masters were able to shoot so hard and far into him. He decided to try out a second experiment. 

He looked over at the smaller muscle god and he gazed into the stud’s eyes as he commanded, yet again with his mind, that the man get on his knees and began to suck Jack’s newly improved 14 inch cock. To his astonishment, the man licked his lips and knelt in front of Jack’s massive frame.  He took over half of Jack’s cock into his willing mouth and pushed it down into his throat.  The man grabbed Jack’s ass and started fucking his own mouth with Jack.  Within a few minutes Jack was nearing an orgasm that never in his wildest dreams could he have imagined.  He grabbed the man’s head and held it there as he began to fire explosively into the man, which actually was shooting at such velocity that it was starting to tear apart the man’s oral cavity like bullets.  Jack released him as the man shot back against the wall with a loud thud, and Jack knew the man was dead, but this didn’t stop Jack from cumming.  His cock stopped shooting rounds off, but instead manifested into a huge steady stream of cum that was soaking everything and everyone with 20 feet of him. Jack roared at the top of his lungs as emptied his load everywhere.  Inside his head, he heard 2 voices saying “Yes my son.” and “You are now ready for us.”  He knew that they were Jason and his Uncle Roy.  When he finally started to come down from the orgasm, he looked around and saw the larger muscle man, along with the other minions lapping up all of his cum that they could get.  It was a frenzy of debauchery. 

He looked down the hall and yelled out in earnest, “JASON!!”

“Yes, Jack…you may now see me!! You are now worthy!!  Please come and join us, we have much to discuss!!

PART 3 coming next week (As with before, your comments would be great!)

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There should be a LOT more comments :P i LOVE this as a follow up, it's ramped up the pacing accordingly it FEELS like it leaves us on this fantastic verge of part 3 and Jack...god damn Jack's a lucky boy I NEED to see what this plan is..and the evergrowing beast in me wants MORE GROWTH give me some real fucking TITANS man! LOL Again you've got a fantastic way of describing the growth and "frenzy of debauchery" (GOD i love that phrase!) So yeah just DON'T STOP! BIGGER fucking THICKER and MORE MAN!

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I do wonder why Jason has started to grkw and all like Jack's uncle did (though ended up smaller). <=/ I mean: He was pretty much normal before when he gave that liquid for the seeds of the crops, right? ^^;; Or am I wrong about that? ^^;;

 

This story IS awesome though. 83 I'm liking it. ^^

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What a great story. One thing that is left out of stories, is how big a person is in pounds. It is easier on a person to comprehend if there were numbers to say how big. Please keep writing your stories for people like me that can not. I was unable to lift weights because arriving in this world 3 months early. These stories let me wish  and dream about being big. Thanks again

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Hmm, I like the idea.  I love the setup.  And the description of the action is great.

Its just if feels your writing summarizes on some details I feel could be used to build tension/excitement and the scene.  I'm thinking particularly of the walk up to the encounter.  It is already good but then it feels like its telling instead of showing, when it could enhance the feeling of the change of thought and the temptation and the physical not just changes but experiences.

 

NYBear's story is really good.  The setup, the use of the mask, the knob.. I mean that impromptu humping sells the feel of just what's going on in the character's head as he becomes little more than a bonobo on amyl nitrate.  And then there is the influence of the 'gods'  how they handle the character.

Admittedly I was hoping for freakier (with all the changes and fluids and nipple munching shocked no milk came out, this is partially plant based so wondering what, if anything coming in from that in the changes of the dudes)  Admittedly part of this is the character goes from straight to hardcore gay all at once.  I mean I know where I am and have few objections and it was NICE to see the mania just take hold.  but he goes from straight and virigin to "man I really want something ramming my ass, ANYTHING, hard for that is sexually pleasurable to me" 

The thing is NYbear does this well by upping the appearance of gay sex and male sexuality on the walk.  but as there isn't as much induction, just examples, it feels a little much.  

Mind past THAT point things get hot and interesting

And I liked the "switch" element.  a character going from topping, serving, and then dominating or back or forth.  The sense of veering between extremes, drawn and craving and indulging both.

Not so hot with the use of so many physical senses the story using psychic powers, again because plants/seeds/flowers are a thing I guess was hoping for freakier or something tied to that aesthetic.  but then you use the psychic phenomenon DAMN well.  For example that one guy absorbing the other's desires. But again wish a little more, if not precise detail, sensual nuance describing how he feels and knows to be servile or to be taken charge of or the familiar or pleasing if first experience sucking cock. Not a fan of the "first time but naturally awesome" bit in general as porn story trope. It helps schooch over the terrible aspects of the inexperienced and virginal sex participant but it feels cheap as you have a story device and conceit to direct from eager desperation to genuine enjoyment to gained skill and expertise.  and making it a process, hopefully in just as few a sentences I used to describe it can make it feel that much more... 'real' or enjoyable.

That way you don't have to exposit about this or that mental or emotional shift you iillustrate it.

Hehe but the setup and execution is still really really good.  All my complaints come down to "want more" if not additonal chapters (though want that) more sense of depth or being tied into what your characters are doing and experiencing.

Thank you gain for a very interesting and promising tale.  And I look forward to your continuation/conclusion.

Also I like you're sort of laying out and building some rules.  big nerd so always like these patterns and tricks and so on.

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Love the great story, I like it so much to ask when are we going to get the 3rd chapter? I want to see Jack get Huge.

Due to heath problems when I was young, I was not able to gain a lot of muscle,. I can only dream and wish now. Thanks for writing stories so I can Don't feel  bad if you do not get lots of replies, It is due to the times we live in. A lot of guys have a lot on their minds. THANKS AGAIN

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I'm working on Chapter 3 as I write this to you all.  Please know that I take to heart all of your comments, opinions and suggestions and I have planned on incorporating a lot of your ideas into my stories.  I too, want Jack to obtain a status like none of us have ever thought of before, but it's going to take some time and many different things to happen to him in order from him to become THE most colossal man in history (or of my stories at least. LOL).  So please be patient, hang on and enjoy the HUGE ride. .

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