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cutlerfan Posted August 15, 2016 Share Posted August 15, 2016 Cool story! It is like a kind of thinking porn since the reader has to imagine the scenes. Amazing transformations! The writing is as good as your visual art! Would love to see more! 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
musclevirus Posted August 15, 2016 Share Posted August 15, 2016 Awesome story <3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Esshar Posted August 15, 2016 Share Posted August 15, 2016 love it! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hanugumo Posted August 16, 2016 Share Posted August 16, 2016 Awww man, why did you choose Jude Vieber? I just hope he wasn't similar to Justin Bieber cause that singer is a suler idiot who is insane as frick. xD lol Anywau: I do wonder what a 100% would grow into. ;3 <3 <3 Gosh I am so looking forwards to the next 2 parts. <3 <3 Thx for writing this awesome story man!! 8D 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marquis Posted August 16, 2016 Author Share Posted August 16, 2016 6 hours ago, Hanugumo said: Awww man, why did you choose Jude Vieber? I just hope he wasn't similar to Justin Bieber cause that singer is a suler idiot who is insane as frick. xD lol Well that was just a silly joke. I'm not a bieber fan (or enthusiast or anything... I actually don't care for that poor sod). I just wanted the name to be sort of a ringabell thing. 6 hours ago, Hanugumo said: Anywau: I do wonder what a 100% would grow into. ;3 <3 <3 Gosh I am so looking forwards to the next 2 parts. <3 <3 Thx for writing this awesome story man!! 8D We'll get to that for the grand finale. 6 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hanugumo Posted August 16, 2016 Share Posted August 16, 2016 17 minutes ago, Marquis said: Well that was just a silly joke. I'm not a bieber fan (or enthusiast or anything... I actually don't care for that poor sod). I just wanted the name to be sort of a ringabell thing. We'll get to that for the grand finale. i understand don't worry. x3 And whohoo!!! 8D <3 <3 <3 Gosh darn it, we need to wait a while till you would be able to upload part 4 & 5. ;n; *cries* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
canon Posted August 21, 2016 Share Posted August 21, 2016 I hope Angus stops competing and lets himself get upgraded. As he is already a huge guy he would grow huge!!! Cant wait for the next chapters 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goremeridian Posted August 22, 2016 Share Posted August 22, 2016 Firstly, thank you for posting Parts 1 and 2 along with this installment; somehow I completely missed them when you first uploaded them to the forum. Secondly...wow. Your craft of language is exquisite. From your references to a 'fleshmancer' in Part 2 to the 'vertiginous speed of [Strebel's] speech' in the text above, your lexical panache is enviable. You have elevated a muscle growth story to the realm of literature. And thirdly, you have created an original, fascinating and wholly believable futuristic world, one that I am thoroughly enjoying discovering. Your characterisation is rich and colourful, and even the vassals, who are very much tertiary characters, seem to have a depth to them that evokes, yes, lust, of course, but also pathos. I am very much looking forward to the next part! 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JackAms Posted August 28, 2016 Share Posted August 28, 2016 Thank you so much for putting your talent in words! What a wonderful imagination you have! One of the best stories I ever read, looking forward to more. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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