Littlebro Posted January 17, 2021 Share Posted January 17, 2021 Hi everyone,this is my first time to create a story,actually there has some ideas in my mind for a long long time but i don't know how to start it,secondly because my english was poor,sometimes i need to google translate,please forgive me,thanks! this story is about a fantasy guide runner and i really a visually impared person,therefore maybe some situations without sighted and welcome comments for help, here we go, it's thursday night again,it's time for running practice,i arrived the meeting point at 7pm,sooner one of the guide runner Michael who bring me to the sport court,on the way we talk together what is the reason start to run etc,few minutes ago we arrive the sport court,we went to changing room ready for run,suddenly someone patting my back,i felt shocked then ask "who?" "you guess" the guy Answer with a smile, "coach?" I asked, "excelllent phil!are you ready for training tonight?we're going to run on the street,feel happy?" actually i prefer training outside better than running at the court,"sure!" "ok cool,you ready?let me bring you out,probably guys are waiting!" "ok guys!welcome to join training tonight,let's pair up first." "ok phil,there has some new comers,i pair up one of them to you,ok?" "hey Anson,he is phil,help me to take care of him,he run very fast!" "no!don't listen to him,i just relax run." "haha,alright,nice to meet you phil,my name is Anson." "nice to meet you too Anson." "you need to teach me how can i help you,this is my first time being volunteer to serve visually impaired people." "no worries,relax is ok,no stress." "ok." "guys,come for warm up now!"coach yelling with clapping, "phil,hold my arm,let's face to our coach." when i hold Anson's arm,his arm was kind of lean,seems he work outs sometimes, "ok guys,head up for ten seconds!" i was looking for a guide runner who living close to me and go to gym together so that i can being lean, "put your arms at the back and lift it up!" Did Qnson can help?i hope he can. "Phil?We change the posing already,now we put our left leg at the front and bend over,can you get it?" "sorry Anson,ok,like that?" "yes,you did it well Phil." "now fold your left leg at your back and using your left hand to hold it,vi members can rely on your partner for balance." "Ok Phil?" "Ok!"i put my right hand on Anson's right shoulder and i can feel Anson's warm little stands out pecs,does he has abs?six or eight? "guys,that's all for warm up,time for run now!are you ready?" "yeah!"everybody said,we had a belt for us to run with guide runners, "Phil,you usually hold left hand side or right hand side?" "i usually hold on right" "Ok cool,let's start!" "I relax run by usual." "Ok,just tell me if had any change." "who invite you to join this volunteer?" "actually i heard about guide runners for a while,i saw some of the pairs when i join races,it was meaningful then i search on the internet that you guys training here,that's why i am here,how about you?" "i just want to do some exercise and expand my social circle." "i see,that's great!so you like running much?" "not really." "huh?ok." "actually i looking for someone who can bring me to the gym to gain some muscles." "sounds good,you know,i go to gym triple a week,let see we can make it or not." "you don't mind i spend your time?" "it's ok,i do it for fun." "thank you." "welcome." During the run we talking our hobbies,family etc... "Ok guys,we finish today,guide runners please help iv members to bus stops or stations to leave,thanks!" "Phil,what will you take?" "train please." "I decided take the train too,i bring you to the station then." "Thanks!" "where do you live?" "Lok Fu." "I live there too,that's fortunate." "which block are you living?" "block 2." "I live block 3,i can bring you to block 2." "thanks,but......" "it's ok,i have time,no worries." "Here you go,see you Phil,it was nice to run with you,have a good rest!" "Anson,wait." "Yes?" "May i have your number to schedule our time for gym?" "Oh yes,sure!you tell me your number then i call you ok?" "Got it,i have your number now,thanks Anson,thanks for today." "welcome Phil,see you next time,take care!" To be continue...... 5 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ro20316 Posted January 17, 2021 Share Posted January 17, 2021 There definetly work to be done but yout have an inetresting premisse. I think it's teh first time i've read a story with someone visually impared and that's already a plus. I would definetly read what will happen next 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arpeejay Posted October 15, 2021 Share Posted October 15, 2021 What Ro said. You need a copy editor (hi!) but the premise is intriguing and I would be interested in seeing where it goes! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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