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This is so good! 

As DuskIce86 posts, are we going to be treated to cocky handsome muscular Cody getting it on with Zack?  And during detention, will Cody be treating Mr. Skreet to some private posing?  With what exactly ensuing? 

MA, this is high-end muscle-porn personified!  And Archie has a lucrative future as publisher and CEO of the Brighton Fuck-Stories Company of the UK!  😃

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4 hours ago, muscleaddict said:

DuskIce86                     Posted November 28

Oh my god.

No idea if I can say that much off the top of my head but I really like this story. 

Here are some random plot twists you could introduce, @ArchieLovesMuscle (these are meant as jokes. Well - sort of! 😂😞

1) Mr Skreet gives Cody Saturday detention for showing off his strength to Zack and the jocks by bending the legs of Mr Skreet’s chair. During the detention, Cody treats Mr Skreet to some private posing!

2) Zack and Cody become friends but Zack falls in love with our boy Cody. Confused about his own feelings, Cody starts to question his sexuality.

3) Cody walks into the principal’s office to discover he’s also a bodybuilder and much bigger and cockier than Cody!

Hmmm, who could that be? 😂🤔

But really, I am liking this story more and more. Zack is self-confidence in person! He doesn´t seem to mind the eye-rolls and scared gasps. Instead, he revels in the "Wow"´s and overwhelmed stares. Maybe one certain professor even gets to feel these huge arms after class. 😜 Either way, I´m excited for more.

Also: please take the first option! 🙏

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Grade A+ on the second part mate! A story inside of the story. That was a great surprise @muscleaddict Part 3 is shaping to be another interesting chapter. Which way are you going to go? Another chapter on Cody’s?? Is a short assed insanely muscular half brother is going to find out about the story? Ah, the possibilities are endless mate.

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Haha this is great.  The meta-ness makes it extra fun.  

Poor Mr. Skreet!  I hope nothing bad happens to him. 

 

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This is so good and so funny!  Love it. Poor Mr Skreet.  He’s so lonely for muscle now 

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On 5/9/2024 at 6:07 PM, DennisFLL said:

This is so good! 

As DuskIce86 posts, are we going to be treated to cocky handsome muscular Cody getting it on with Zack?  And during detention, will Cody be treating Mr. Skreet to some private posing?  With what exactly ensuing? 

MA, this is high-end muscle-porn personified!  And Archie has a lucrative future as publisher and CEO of the Brighton Fuck-Stories Company of the UK!  😃

Thanks, Dennis! I’m glad you’re still enjoying it. I had loads of fun writing this one. With Cody, I wanted to sort of create the ultimate teen muscle God. I had loads of ideas of where I could take it but hopefully you’ll like the direction I’ve gone in. 

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On 5/9/2024 at 9:58 PM, DawnFire98 said:

Hmmm, who could that be? 😂🤔

But really, I am liking this story more and more. Zack is self-confidence in person! He doesn´t seem to mind the eye-rolls and scared gasps. Instead, he revels in the "Wow"´s and overwhelmed stares. Maybe one certain professor even gets to feel these huge arms after class. 😜 Either way, I´m excited for more.

Also: please take the first option! 🙏

Who knows, mate? Maybe some awesome forum member who always gives me the loveliest and most enthusiastic feedback?! 🤪😘 Self-confidence? You could say that. I was more going for OTT brat-ish cockiness! 😆

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On 5/9/2024 at 10:28 PM, BrzNLA said:

Grade A+ on the second part mate! A story inside of the story. That was a great surprise @muscleaddict Part 3 is shaping to be another interesting chapter. Which way are you going to go? Another chapter on Cody’s?? Is a short assed insanely muscular half brother is going to find out about the story? Ah, the possibilities are endless mate.

Bless you, mate. I think Deano would probably roll his eyes and groan at everything Cody does but maybe secretly enjoy the story anyway? 😅

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On 5/10/2024 at 3:23 AM, dredlifter said:

Haha this is great.  The meta-ness makes it extra fun.  

Poor Mr. Skreet!  I hope nothing bad happens to him. 

 

Thank you, dred! I’m glad you’re enjoying it. Meta and fun was exactly what I was going for. 😁

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On 5/10/2024 at 5:50 PM, MuscleJoe said:

This is so good and so funny!  Love it. Poor Mr Skreet.  He’s so lonely for muscle now 

I’m glad you're enjoying it, Joe. Maybe Archie needs to write a sequel where Mr Skreet gets a job teaching at Muscle University. 

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