spacevlad Posted September 6, 2015 Share Posted September 6, 2015 Hey everybody, I finished my newest story and I've started posting chapters of it over at Coiledfist.org. I'll be posting new chapters regularly over the next few days, so check back regularly as I add more. So far I've posted the first three chapters with more to come. Here's the link to the story page.http://www.coiledfist.org/stories/index.php?mode=search&submitted=1&keyType=sid&query=spacevlad_summerresearcI think many of you will like the story! It's about a researcher fed up with the red tape and regulations holding back his growth formula experiments, so he decides to take matters into his own hands. He recruits a football player on campus who is desperate to grow bigger. The formula works better than expected but at the cost of the football jock's intelligence: he grows bigger and bigger as he becomes dumber and more obedient. Growth, flexing, feats of strength, lots of sex, and a little destruction ensue. 6 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
flamedelft Posted September 6, 2015 Share Posted September 6, 2015 Already commented on cf, but I have to say it again, you write really cool stuff, I'm so looking forward to more Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
myfaceisitchy Posted September 6, 2015 Share Posted September 6, 2015 Great read so far. Can't wait for more Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spacevlad Posted September 6, 2015 Author Share Posted September 6, 2015 There are a couple new chapters posted! Check them out if you want. Thanks for the compliments Angle and Flame! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scriptboy Posted September 7, 2015 Share Posted September 7, 2015 I got one shrinking story on coiledfist and I have to say that is one of the most friendliest communities I have ever been a part of. The people on there are totally cool, especially if you post a story. I don't come on there often but I should come there and check out your story. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lighterstill Posted September 7, 2015 Share Posted September 7, 2015 This is awesome! Let's see how big Grunt can get. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spacevlad Posted September 8, 2015 Author Share Posted September 8, 2015 New chapters 6 and 7 posted, I think you guys will enjoy these ones, especially chapter 7. 5 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spacevlad Posted September 11, 2015 Author Share Posted September 11, 2015 There are a few new chapters posted. I've got one more after this plus an epilogue to go. I hope you check it out! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
muscle16a Posted September 11, 2015 Share Posted September 11, 2015 I had trouble getting past chapter one. Don't get me wrong - I like the theme and like your writing style.But seriously, dude: "Ryan", the football player introduced in Chapter-1 is 5'9" tall and weighs 250 pounds (at the start), and complains that he "just can't gain any weight"! "The problem was he had a hard time putting on weight. He had always been strong, and in high school that strength allowed to him to play on the line despite being smaller than his teammates. He ate and ate, lifted five times a week and took plenty of protein shakes and pre-workout supplements to give him every edge he could think of without using steroids, but nothing seemed to work." Yeah. For me, that opening premise is so preposterous and unreal that I cannot get past it. I mean, seriously! 5'9" and 250 pounds is FUCKING HUGE and there is no other way to describe it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
flamedelft Posted September 11, 2015 Share Posted September 11, 2015 I had trouble getting past chapter one. Don't get me wrong - I like the theme and like your writing style.But seriously, dude: "Ryan", the football player introduced in Chapter-1 is 5'9" tall and weighs 250 pounds (at the start), and complains that he "just can't gain any weight"! "The problem was he had a hard time putting on weight. He had always been strong, and in high school that strength allowed to him to play on the line despite being smaller than his teammates. He ate and ate, lifted five times a week and took plenty of protein shakes and pre-workout supplements to give him every edge he could think of without using steroids, but nothing seemed to work." Yeah. For me, that opening premise is so preposterous and unreal that I cannot get past it. I mean, seriously! 5'9" and 250 pounds is FUCKING HUGE and there is no other way to describe it.Body dysmorphia, there, suspension of disbelief restored. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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