Popular Post Marquis Posted October 10, 2017 Popular Post Share Posted October 10, 2017 (deleted by the author) 35 1 9 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
canon Posted October 10, 2017 Share Posted October 10, 2017 Love it <3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Esshar Posted October 10, 2017 Share Posted October 10, 2017 Yaasssss Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darkluster4 Posted October 10, 2017 Share Posted October 10, 2017 I really enjoyed it, particularly the perspective of Landon having trouble getting used to his body after such a sudden change. Not enough writers do that. My one suggestion would be the relationship between Damon and Lamia needing to be more cut throat in the long run. Demons always look out for number one, and how to take other higher demons positions. So, any 'friendship' between two demons might seem amicable on the surface, but would only serve the purpose of furthering their own goals, suppressing a potential rival, or sucking up. When the time comes however, they'll cut the dead weight in half a heart beat. 1 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ro20316 Posted October 11, 2017 Share Posted October 11, 2017 interesting ending. What are Lamia's plansnow.Damon foud Lamçndon and has teh incubus now Lamia whih is more powerful wants anotehr one to herself??? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kymuscleboy Posted October 11, 2017 Share Posted October 11, 2017 I agree with darkluster4 about Landon's issues getting used to his new body. That was a great twist. I mean, how many of us fantasize about the kind of growth in these stories, but then might have pause when faced with the reality of being almost a foot taller and hundreds of pounds heavier with solid muscle? Of course it's a dilemma I'd like to face (I think)! Another great move was the use of male and female articles for the demons in this chapter and their own reactions to it. It kind of threw me for a loop in the first chapter, using "it" for Damon, but then when I saw what you were doing with it in the second, I really appreciated the detail. Overall, the story has been fantastic so far! I'm definitely looking forward to more. 1 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azrael Posted October 11, 2017 Share Posted October 11, 2017 I enjoyed this almost as much as the first chapter. Please don't let this become one of those series that just disappear. I really enjoy this series so far. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arpeejay Posted October 11, 2017 Share Posted October 11, 2017 Yummy! Here's hoping there will be more! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted October 11, 2017 Share Posted October 11, 2017 Awesome ! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spacevlad Posted October 12, 2017 Share Posted October 12, 2017 Looooove it! I'm eager for more scenes of Landon's greed and need for MORE taking over and making him grow more. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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