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Another Nerd Story (3 Parts)


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I love that Ollie the musle beast here is so atypical!  He's intelligent, relentlessly logical, arrogant about his own intelligence and world view, and totally dismissive of typical human emotions like lust and awe.

It would serve him right if he came to feel lust or pride in his size and strength.  Our other protagonist, Thomas, could enlighten him to the alternative world view of which he is so dismissive.  It would serve him well to be humbled!

Great story! 

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29 minutes ago, RockyDragon said:

Any updates on the next part?

Still not sure it'll get any more parts yet.  I'm not overly happy with what I've written for the next part so far and I'm not sure you guys will be either.

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13 hours ago, sithspawn said:

Still not sure it'll get any more parts yet.  I'm not overly happy with what I've written for the next part so far and I'm not sure you guys will be either.

Well u never know. It is always a trial and error!

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Oh my goodness I love this so much!

 

Also, Ollie is one of the cutest, most annoyingly obtuse muscle nerds I’ve ever read and I love him. 

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