Ro20316 Posted August 17, 2022 Share Posted August 17, 2022 Holy fking fuck. This was excellent, no. This is excellent. Dont doubt yourself. You are writting a pretty interesting story. Yeah, it doesnt have the detailed growth descriptions or the littlw details of whats ocurring to him but you are doing it your own way and that fast description kinda show us how he is really feeling. Daniel doesnt understand what is happening to him but he feels the need to be powerfull. Our main guy and our courier guy i think they are the ones that will challenge that being that is controling people and driving them power hungry. Our guy thiks he is not important but the blue haired guy is telling him that he can be powerfull himself and to write his own story instead of being part of others. The supernatural element is a nice touch. We dont know what entity is driving them but there is always a fight for good and evil. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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