arpeejay Posted December 16, 2023 Share Posted December 16, 2023 [Interrupting my reading to note a word choice error. -- RPJ] In the third paragraph you use "defiantly" when you clearly mean "definitely." I would normally just zip right past it but it was a common mistake by favorite author (along with "satiated," rather than "striated," delts) so I was moved by nostalgia to comment! [Now back to reading!] 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arpeejay Posted December 16, 2023 Share Posted December 16, 2023 Excellent! Some typos, a couple of grammatical errors here and there are nothing compared to a truly excellent set up and a hot hot muscle worship sex scene! Many thanks! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shinji86 Posted December 18, 2023 Author Share Posted December 18, 2023 On 12/16/2023 at 2:18 PM, arpeejay said: Excellent! Some typos, a couple of grammatical errors here and there are nothing compared to a truly excellent set up and a hot hot muscle worship sex scene! Many thanks! Thank you so much, I will try harder at my spelling mistakes hahaha I’m horrible at spelling 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hunghuge Posted December 27, 2023 Share Posted December 27, 2023 @Shinji86 Hope you had a good Holiday! Still eagerly awaiting the next part . Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shinji86 Posted December 30, 2023 Author Share Posted December 30, 2023 On 12/28/2023 at 5:33 AM, hunghuge said: @Shinji86 Hope you had a good Holiday! Still eagerly awaiting the next part . Thank you, hope yours was awesome aswell Yeah the last few weeks have been crazy, next part should be soon 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hunghuge Posted February 27 Share Posted February 27 Still eagerly waiting on part 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shinji86 Posted April 11 Author Share Posted April 11 Part 2 is in the works, bumping this to keep myself accountable hahaha 6 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
asianman2410 Posted May 5 Share Posted May 5 I'm sure you're still working on part 2, so this is just a friendly bump 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shinji86 Posted May 5 Author Share Posted May 5 It’s getting there, just making sure it’s where I want it hahaha 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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