DennisFLL Posted March 22 Author Share Posted March 22 36 minutes ago, Ro20316 said: i loved this ending. It was sweet and teh start of something beautiful Thanks a lot for your complement. Call me old-school, but I always love a realistic happy ending! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
muscleaddict Posted April 1 Share Posted April 1 Great work again, Dennis! You're definitely on a bit of a roll at the moment. Sexy and hot but also very sweet but is always a great combination in my eyes. Quick mention to the pec-bouncing at the water fountain moment! I also loved it when Biff (great bodybuilder name, by the way!) casually scratched the back of his head as a ploy to show off his biceps to Timmy. Sometimes it's those little things/touches/moments that really stick in your mind! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DennisFLL Posted April 1 Author Share Posted April 1 5 hours ago, muscleaddict said: Great work again, Dennis! You're definitely on a bit of a roll at the moment. Sexy and hot but also very sweet but is always a great combination in my eyes. Quick mention to the pec-bouncing at the water fountain moment! I also loved it when Biff (great bodybuilder name, by the way!) casually scratched the back of his head as a ploy to show off his biceps to Timmy. Sometimes it's those little things/touches/moments that really stick in your mind! I can't thank you enough, MA, for your very positive comments. And those little "touches" were fun inclusions to the story. Your influence from reading many of your really fine stories was very important to me. "AJ & Noah" comes to mind, which definitely shows through with this story's romantic ending. 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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