Shawn1978 Posted October 21, 2018 Share Posted October 21, 2018 Another brilliant chapter, MuscleAddict! AJ and Noah are growing closer and closer with each new chapter! Plus, I kind of love how Noah has let his former crush on Andy be known and how AJ is literally teasing him relentlessly with it, sometimes. It's funny as hell, and not to mention a little cute. It'll be funny to see Andy's and AJ's mom's reaction if that little tidbit ever comes out. I highly doubt it will, since this story is about Noah and AJ. What would be really hot is if AJ happens to someday put on some biker gear like Andy wears, and models it for AJ. Then he could say to Noah "Who looks better in biker gear now? Andy or me?" Noah's reaction would be either " Andy who?" or he would laugh hysterically. Although I have to admit, seeing AJ in a tight T shirt and tight form fitting black leather pants is a hot image as well. Muscle guys always look hot in leather, regardless of the style they go for, whether it's kinky or casual. Your story is getting better and better with each new chapter! I could certainly learn a thing or two from you about writing. It's been over 10 years since the last chapter I wrote on my own story "My Everything" and I was recently looking back at the Boyband Story Awards directory. When I did, I remembered that my story got nominated in 8 different categories in the first year. I don't remember what categories they were, since when they first started doing that, they didn't post them in a regular pose on the Nifty site, like we did our stories. the last story awards thing they did in 2006, was my 2nd year that my story got nominated, but the 2nd year it did, it was a continuing series. The categories I recieved nominations for were Best Straight Couple Best Series Best Villian (2 characters nominated) Worst Couple And when I looked back through the winners, I actually won in the category "Worst Couple" which were Nick Lachey and Jessica Simpson. Not the category I would have expected, but a win is a still a win, right? Plus, it's an honor just to be nominated. I remember being shocked when my story was nominated for anything, because I didn't think I was that good of a writer back then, but of course, many of my fans and readers disagreed. It just goes to show you, MuscleAddict, if they still did stuff like this for writing talents, who knows, your story would be one that got my nomination! It's possibly the best story, involving both muscle and romantic relationships that I"ve ever read, in a long time. And I haven't had time for reading stories like I used to. Your story is the first one that held my interest in a long time. Keep up the great work! there's alot about writing that I still have to learn even after almost 17 years. Whether my writing is good enough to write for soaps and television, I'll never really know. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Austinevenson42 Posted October 21, 2018 Share Posted October 21, 2018 It's almost time for the main event! Wonder how long Noah can even last, or how many times he might, you know? Great work as always, and loved Noah's mom talking about AJ. With that said, I think I am looking most forward to AJ becoming more comfortable with their relationship in general, and Noah telling his mom and Naomi about them when AJ is okay with it. Funny how you come for the sexy muscular guy, but stay the romance. 4 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
muscleaddict Posted October 22, 2018 Author Share Posted October 22, 2018 On 21 October 2018 at 8:14 PM, rairf said: I am so completely in love with these characters. You've managed to create real depth of personality in both AJ and Noah, which is no easy feat. I've also been thinking about the timing of your posts- the serial format gives me such a sense of anticipation. I look forward to reading each new chapter and always want more. It's so refreshing to have this experience. You're a terrific author. I've been around since the old site, but only came out of lurking to comment with this story. I really hope you're considering publishing this on Amazon- I'd love to have a copy of the complete product when you're done posting it on here. As always, thank you for another tantalizing chapter! Thank you so much for the wonderful feedback @rairf! I have actually thought about publishing the story on Amazon. I did it with a short story a few years ago. However, I don't really find the process that rewarding. It's much more enjoyable for me to share online like I have been here! I'm glad you like the timing of the posts too! I was worried I was going too fast initally. Then, lately I've been wondering wether I'm going too slow! People seem to be sticking with it though so something's obviously working! 2 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
muscleaddict Posted October 22, 2018 Author Share Posted October 22, 2018 23 hours ago, Shawn1978 said: Another brilliant chapter, MuscleAddict! AJ and Noah are growing closer and closer with each new chapter! Plus, I kind of love how Noah has let his former crush on Andy be known and how AJ is literally teasing him relentlessly with it, sometimes. It's funny as hell, and not to mention a little cute. It'll be funny to see Andy's and AJ's mom's reaction if that little tidbit ever comes out. I highly doubt it will, since this story is about Noah and AJ. What would be really hot is if AJ happens to someday put on some biker gear like Andy wears, and models it for AJ. Then he could say to Noah "Who looks better in biker gear now? Andy or me?" Noah's reaction would be either " Andy who?" or he would laugh hysterically. Although I have to admit, seeing AJ in a tight T shirt and tight form fitting black leather pants is a hot image as well. Muscle guys always look hot in leather, regardless of the style they go for, whether it's kinky or casual. Your story is getting better and better with each new chapter! I could certainly learn a thing or two from you about writing. It's been over 10 years since the last chapter I wrote on my own story "My Everything" and I was recently looking back at the Boyband Story Awards directory. When I did, I remembered that my story got nominated in 8 different categories in the first year. I don't remember what categories they were, since when they first started doing that, they didn't post them in a regular pose on the Nifty site, like we did our stories. the last story awards thing they did in 2006, was my 2nd year that my story got nominated, but the 2nd year it did, it was a continuing series. The categories I recieved nominations for were Best Straight Couple Best Series Best Villian (2 characters nominated) Worst Couple And when I looked back through the winners, I actually won in the category "Worst Couple" which were Nick Lachey and Jessica Simpson. Not the category I would have expected, but a win is a still a win, right? Plus, it's an honor just to be nominated. I remember being shocked when my story was nominated for anything, because I didn't think I was that good of a writer back then, but of course, many of my fans and readers disagreed. It just goes to show you, MuscleAddict, if they still did stuff like this for writing talents, who knows, your story would be one that got my nomination! It's possibly the best story, involving both muscle and romantic relationships that I"ve ever read, in a long time. And I haven't had time for reading stories like I used to. Your story is the first one that held my interest in a long time. Keep up the great work! there's alot about writing that I still have to learn even after almost 17 years. Whether my writing is good enough to write for soaps and television, I'll never really know. AJ and his obscenely huge arse in a pair of soft, tight leather jeans? I think Noah's head would explode! I love the awards idea. Someone should definitely suggest it to the mods here - hehe! Like you, I'm still learning so much too and I know there's things in this story I could improve. I don't really feel experienced enough to be giving out advice but the one thing I've learned (and this may sound really obvious!) is the more you write, the better you do get at it so just keep going! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
muscleaddict Posted October 22, 2018 Author Share Posted October 22, 2018 21 hours ago, Austinevenson42 said: It's almost time for the main event! Wonder how long Noah can even last, or how many times he might, you know? Great work as always, and loved Noah's mom talking about AJ. With that said, I think I am looking most forward to AJ becoming more comfortable with their relationship in general, and Noah telling his mom and Naomi about them when AJ is okay with it. Funny how you come for the sexy muscular guy, but stay the romance. Main event? Oooh...er...OK that makes me a bit nervous for the next chapter now! Honestly, I'd say there's bigger things to come but yeah, in terms of muscle stuff, I guess the next one is a bit of a juicy one. I suppose everyone will take their own thing from the story, but for me, the worship/muscle stuff is just one aspect of it. I'm not sure if I'm making much sense. It's a Monday, it's getting late, it's been a bloody long day and I think I'm coming down with something (I basically just need an AJ to snuggle up in bed with ) but hopefully you'll get what I'm trying to say! 6 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Austinevenson42 Posted October 22, 2018 Share Posted October 22, 2018 3 hours ago, muscleaddict said: Main event? Oooh...er...OK that makes me a bit nervous for the next chapter now! Honestly, I'd say there's bigger things to come but yeah, in terms of muscle stuff, I guess the next one is a bit of a juicy one. I suppose everyone will take their own thing from the story, but for me, the worship/muscle stuff is just one aspect of it. I'm not sure if I'm making much sense. It's a Monday, it's getting late, it's been a bloody long day and I think I'm coming down with something (I basically just need an AJ to snuggle up in bed with ) but hopefully you'll get what I'm trying to say! No pressure! But I actually meant main event in terms of something that I imagine Noah has looked forward to for a long time, a bodybuilder posing just for him. Like I was saying though, I'm definitely here for the romance more now, although I obviously love the muscle aspects. Feel better too! 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Popular Post muscleaddict Posted October 23, 2018 Author Popular Post Share Posted October 23, 2018 Next chapter and here's the second illustration my mate "Reeddune" did for me. Feels fitting to include it in this chapter given what AJ is wearing! Twenty Five I groaned into AJ’s mouth as his tongue danced with mine and my hand slipped down and gripped on to one of his huge upper arms. Fuck! I was pinned up against his bedroom door. We’d barely been able to keep our hands off each other since we’d entered his house. “FUCK!” I cried as AJ cheekily flexed his arm and the freakish ball of marble-like bicep muscle exploded under my fingertips. Freshly pumped from the gym, it felt even bigger and harder than the last time. I probably could have exploded in my undies right there and then. If AJ hadn’t already confessed how much he loved the effect his flexed muscle had on me, I would known in that moment, anyway, by the smug, excitable look on his face. AJ was clearly getting a huge kick out of how much feeling his flexed bicep wowed and turned on me. “Go to the bathroom for two minutes!” he ordered, with a devilish grin. I gave him a confused but excited grin. “Whyyyy?” I asked suspiciously. “Just do it!!” he cheekily demanded. I kissed him and obeyed his order, highly suspecting that I was going to walk back into the room to find AJ in nothing but his shiny lime green posing trunks (FUCK). I was a little gutted when I returned to find him still wearing his trackies and a vest. I looked around the room and narrowed my eyes. “What was all that about?” He playfully shrugged, wrapped his arms around my back, pushed his huge, pumped, muscle tits into my regular sized chest and kissed me passionately. How could one man turn me on, arouse me and excite me to such a degree that AJ did? Whenever I touched him. Whenever I kissed him. I felt like I was constantly on the verge of exploding with ecstasy. We’d soon switched places, and it was AJ who was up against the door. His vest had come off, most of my own clothes had been removed, and I was bending down so I was faced with his huge, hard dick, sticking out and bulging through his gym trackies. Fuck! I wanted to worship that dick with my tongue. I wanted to make him blow. Harder, faster and more intensely than he’d ever done before. I wanted to make his toe curls. His eyes roll back. His whole body quiver and burst as he exploded in my mouth. I grabbed the waistband of his trackies and gently pulled them down. Instead of being faced with the material of whatever colour boxer shorts AJ had been wearing that day, I was faced with something which made my heart skip a beat; the bright and inexplicably shiny material of AJ Jones’ lime green posing trunks. FUCKING HELL!! I looked up at AJ, wide eyed and excited. His gorgeous, bumpy ab blocks, huge, hanging tits and a smug but oh-so-gorgeous grin staring down at me. As I’d suspected, AJ had banished me to the bathroom so he could take off his underwear and put his posers on. Hiding them under his clothes to surprise me was something I definitely hadn’t predicted him to do. The trunks were so much shinier than I anticipated they would be. Without a doubt, they were the horniest clothing garment I’d ever come into contact with. Much hotter than the leather jeans Andy had been squeezing his big, meaty arse into. I squeezed AJ’s hard on, which was tenting the obscenely shiny posing trunk material and he groaned. I gently took it out of it’s lime green poser wrapper and there it was; the most gorgeous cock I’d ever seen, juddering and sticking out from the ridiculously muscular body of the most beautiful boy I’d ever been with. AJ gave the hottest little groan and sank his fingers into my hair as I put the head of his thick, hard cock in my mouth. As I danced my wet tongue around the rim, I looked up to see AJ in some sort of state of euphoria. It was the sexiest image. Seeing a bodybuilder in posing trunks, freshly pumped from the gym in a state of arousal because of me. I wanted to spend the whole night worshipping AJ and his cock. To make him cum over and over again. I felt him pull back and I looked up to see him still aroused and in a state of bliss, but gently shaking his head as he giddily smirked at me. I knew what it meant; that he was dangerously close to cumming but didn’t want to do so just yet. “Sit on the edge of the bed!” AJ gently ordered. I obeyed, and he followed me. Kneeling down on the floor, he helped me get my trackies and boxers off and began to suck and play with my fully erect cock as I ruffled his hair. I could tell by AJ’s face that he really loved sucking me off. He always made these hot groaning noises too as he did. It was like he couldn’t get enough of it. It was so obscenely fucking sexy. “GRRRRR!” he growled, giving my hard, wet cock a firm squeeze. While I was still perched on the edge of his bed naked, AJ stood up, his expression an insanely hot mixture of determination and arousal. He then adjusted his trunks so that his cock was nestled back in the shiny, lime green pouch of his posers. Oh God, I thought. This is it. He’s gonna fucking do it! He’s actually gonna pose for me! And then he did. The very thing he’d been teasing me about the last few days since I’d confessed how much bodybuilders turned me on. AJ, the posing trunk wearing bodybuilder who I’d not long been kissing, lifted both of his arms up either side of his head and, twisting his gaze from side to side to get a good look at both of his arms, cranked down into a front double bicep. He released an obscenely hot grunt as he did so and his face suddenly contorted into an arrogant and obscenely hot grimace. It was the horniest and most surreal image. A proper bodybuilder flexing just for me! FUUUUCKKK!! AJ looked from his flexed biceps to me, his mouth curling into this sexy, smug little smirk, as I watched on in sheer awe and excitement. He relaxed from the pose, a cheeky, excitable grin on his face. AJ was clearly loving putting on a show for me and showing off his muscle. He then curled his fingers around both of the straps of his shiny green posing trunks, and with his lips pursed, he blasted out a front lat spread pose. “OOOOH!” he outrageously grunted as the lime green straps hoisted up and AJ’s tits jumped and twitched. “FUCK!” I exclaimed, in response. I couldn’t help it. A cocky grin emerged on AJ’s face as he continued to hold the pose and look down at me. He then made the most outrageously cocky move; he cheekily exclaimed, “YEAH!” and animatedly nodded his head. He looked like a man possessed as he played the part of a cocky, flexing bodybuilder. As he twisted to one side and transitioned into a side chest pose, AJ let out the hottest and most inexplicably hot grunt. “EURGH!!” Fuck! I couldn’t hold back any longer. Watching AJ pose in front of me while displaying the cockiest and most animated attitude was such an insane turn on, that I reached for my throbbing hard on and began to wank off. AJ’s eyes widened in surprise and excitement as I did so. “Fuck!” he ushered, at what was suddenly unfolding. AJ spun around and cranked his arms down into a back double bicep with a loud grizzly, grunt, which sounded a bit like, “HRRYEEAHH!” Fucking HELL! I loved how much he was getting into it. It made the whole thing just so much hotter. My eyes were transfixed on one thing only; the big, round gorgeous cheeks which made up AJ’s obscenely beefy arse, spilling out of the shiny, lime green material of his posers. I wanted to do so many things to that insanely hot arse. If AJ would let me. “OOOOOH!” AJ exclaimed as he opened up his back in a back lat spread pose, making it look wider than it ever had. He spun back around to face me, still wearing that excitable and cheeky grin. AJ then stepped closer to me, reached for my left free hand and, with an excited smirk, placed it flat over his stomach. His skin was soft and slightly sticky. I could feel the bumps of muscle underneath, and the ridges which separated them. He then threw both of his arms behind the back of his head and I knew exactly what was coming next. His face transformed into the most outrageously cocky grimace. “HSSSSS!!” AJ cranked down into an abs and thighs pose. His gorgeous, block-like tummy muscles crunched and exploded underneath my hand. I was feeling and touching the hard, flexed abs of a real life bodybuilder. “FUCK!” I cried in response, continuing to wank off. I was so close to cumming. I knew I wouldn’t be able to hold it in any longer. AJ bought his arms back down and, clamping his fists together, cranked down into a most muscular pose with a short, sharp, grizzly growl. His biceps popping, his shoulders looking bigger and rounder than ever and his whole upper body exploding with incredible mass. “Oh God! I’m close!” I cried, as I continued to plunge up and down on my throbbing cock. “Fuck!” AJ exclaimed, excitedly. He reached for my hand again and placed it over one of his upper arms, my fingers gripping the huge, solid, un-flexed muscle. He lifted both of his arms up and then cranked back down into a crab most muscular and I felt his warm, hard, marble-like bicep erupt and explode in my hand. “ARGGHHHH!!” he shouted loudly in my ear as he hit the pose. It was all too much. The attitude. The noise. The exploding bicep underneath my grip. “OH GOD! OH FUCK! ARRRGGGHH!!” Still squeezing AJ’s huge arm with my other hand, I screamed as my cock exploded and thick ropes of cum erupted from the head. I couldn’t stop groaning. I just kept cumming and cumming. The orgasm didn’t seem to stop. “FUCK!!” AJ exclaimed excitedly, while also releasing a few chuckles, when I’d finally stopped. “Oh God!” I panted. I was a mess. A sweaty, heaving, cum soaked mess on a post orgasmic high. I started laughing too and buried my head into AJ’s abs as he placed his hands around my back. I looked up at him. He was beaming down at me. I could tell he was still on a high from having someone cum over his flexing muscles. “Fuck!” he said, shaking his head. “That was so hot!!” I melted and grinned back at him. And then something else stole my attention. AJ was tenting his lime green posers. I grabbed the straps and pulled them down. Now it was AJ’s turn to blow his load. He groaned loudly as I swallowed his cock. I don’t really know what came over me in that moment. Just as AJ had turned into an animal when he’d been stood over me hitting pose after pose and flexing his muscles with attitude, I’d turned into some kind of horn crazed beast, determined to make the beautiful bodybuilder before me cum as hard and fast as possible. It didn’t take AJ long to give me exactly what I wanted. “I’m gonna cum!! Noah! OH GOD! ARGGHHHH!! AHHHHHHH!!” AJ shouted as he exploded in my mouth. I loved how he called out my name just before he came. Just as he’d done the first time. “That was one of the most intense orgasms I’ve ever had!” AJ exclaimed, once he’d collapsed on the bed next to me and wrapped me up in a cuddle. “FUCK!” he added, like he couldn’t quite believe how good it was. AJ’s huge chest was heaving up and down as he tried to catch his breath. I giggled as I gripped his waist and tangled my ordinary sized legs with his thick thighs. “So … how was the posing?” he asked. “Hmmm!” I said, in a jokey, unenthusiastic manner. “It was okay, I guess!” I said, playfully shrugging. I looked at AJ and gave him a knowing grin and he squeezed me tight and grinned back. “I think you could do with a bit of practice, though!” I added. His eyes playfully widened. “Oh, really?!” “Mmmm. You could be a lot cockier for a start. And a lot noisier!” “Okay, I actually don’t know whether you’re still joking now!” AJ said, grinning, I squeezed his waist and gave him a reassuring grin. “I fucking LOVED it!” His mouth curled into an adorable, dreamy grin. “I kinda got that impression! I loved it too, by the way. And seeing your reaction. FUCK!” “Yeah?” I asked, biting my lip. “Mmmm. Seeing you crazy over my muscles! GRRRRR! Just makes me wanna get bigger. And more shredded!” FUUUUUCK!! “I would one hundred per cent support that!” I said. AJ giggled. “You know you could have just asked to feel my biceps weeks ago? I would have let you!” I pulled a face. “As if I would have had the NERVE to do that!” “Well, that guy in the toilets of the pub did!” That guy in the toilets isn’t falling in love with you, I thought. “Don’t feel like you have to stay yes, but … how would you feel about staying over tonight?” AJ asked me. Fuck! My heart expanded in my chest. “Isn’t your mum coming back later?” I asked. AJ shrugged. “Yeah! She won’t think anything of it, though. She’ll probably ask us if we’re having a sleepover!” he said, rolling his eyes. I laughed. I could just imagine AJ’s mum saying that to us. “I’d love to!” I said, looking at AJ lovingly. He dreamily smiled at me and gave me a squeeze. “Mmmmm! Will be nice to wake up with you! My mum and Andy go to work really early too. And I get pretty horny in the morning!” I raised one eyebrow and grinned at him. “Oh, by the way. I haven’t said this to you yet, but you have a really hot arse!” I said. AJ’s eyes widened in surprise and he chuckled. “It’s been said before!” he said cheekily. “Yours is cute too, by the way!” For some reason, his statement really surprised me. I furrowed my eyebrows. “Have you been checking out my arse?!” I asked playfully, thinking about that very first time we’d been reunited in Tesco when I’d been doing that very thing with AJ. He mischievously grinned. “A couple of times! It looks especially good in your gym trackies! It’s really cute and pert!” Then he reached his hand around and gave one of my arse cheeks a gentle squeeze and my body tingled. “Well, yours is … FUCK! For a start, it’s HUGE!” I said. AJ beamed at me in response. “And also looks good in your gym trackies. And your work trousers. And your shorts. And your painted on jeans. And your shiny, lime green posers! And … OK, it pretty much looks hot in EVERYTHING!” AJ laughed. “Mmmmm!” he said, squeezing me. “Do you think we could just stay in bed for the rest of the week? Fuck Tesco’s. Fuck the Leisure Centre. Fuck Scorpio’s. Actually, maybe not Scorpio’s. I’d lose all my muscle. And then I wouldn’t be a bodybuilder!” I didn’t really think about what I said next. If I had, I may not have said it. “I’d still like you just as much!” I told him. And I very much believed that I would. As soon as I’d said it I felt sheepish. AJ furrowed his eyebrows slightly, like he wasn’t really sure whether to believe me, but the corner of his mouth curled into this cute little grin, and neither of us said anything more about it. AJ had been right about his mum. She’d been fine with me sleeping over. Being in AJ’s bed with the lights off, cuddling up to him under the duvet while my legs wrapped around his and he held me in his arms, being completely engulfed by his mass and his incredible scent, I couldn’t remember a time when I’d fallen asleep feeling happier or more content. But when I woke up at around five am the next morning, still in AJ’s bed but untangled from him, everything silent and still, I suddenly felt this crushing anxiety. Because I knew that whatever was happening in that moment with me and AJ wouldn’t last. That there were only so many weeks left of the summer, and then I would be going back to university, where I wouldn’t get to see AJ every day. And then, lying awake, staring at AJ’s back as he slept next to me, my thoughts started spiralling, and I couldn’t seem to stop them. I wondered whether me and AJ could make it work once I’d gone back to London. Maybe I could come back every weekend, or AJ could come down and visit me, when he could get the time off work, obviously. But would it be the same as what we had now? And would AJ even want to try and make it work? And even if he did, what would happen in a years time when I’d graduated? I’d been certain of what I wanted to do when that time came for so long. I was adamant that I wanted to get a job in publishing. That was why I was doing an English Literature degree. That was why I’d applied to do a number of work experience placements at publishing houses at the beginning of the summer, none of which I’d heard back from. And almost all of those jobs were in London. Being anywhere else, moving back to Little Denton, it had never been an option. But where would that leave me and AJ? Should I give it all in to be close to him? Could I persuade him to move to London? Would he even want to? He had his life here in Little Denton. His jobs. Scorpio’s. And all of his friends and family were here. It wasn’t like I could just really ask him, either. Just a few weeks earlier he’d been terrified to even admit that he had feelings for me. And even now we were sort of together, he wouldn’t let me tell anyone. Not even my best friend. Asking him if he’d maybe move half way across the country just to be with me would probably guarantee that he’d run for the hills and never want to see me again. I wanted so much in that moment to stop time. Or somehow make it so the summer just repeated on a loop, over and over again. I wanted to be twenty years old forever, lying next to the boy who made my heart want to burst and my head want to explode. The sweetest, most wonderful boy, who excited, aroused and turned me on more than anyone I’d ever met. I finally managed to drift off back to sleep. When I woke up a few hours later, AJ’s arm was tightly wrapped around me, his scent more powerful than ever, those early morning anxieties had faded and all of those questions were now buried somewhere deep at the back of my head. I didn’t know what was going to happen, or what would become of us, but there was one thing in that moment that I knew for sure. That I’d fallen in love with AJ Jones. 23 6 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
muscleaddict99 Posted October 23, 2018 Share Posted October 23, 2018 this just all feels so real.....i was every bit as hard as noah!! 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrzNLA Posted October 23, 2018 Share Posted October 23, 2018 Fantastic chapter Mate from the beginning to the end. I really liked the Muscle Worshiping part of it, it was so special because they are really connected in a emotional and physical level. If I was Noah, I would keep the lime green posers and just give it back to AJ for private posings. Of course, you ended in a huge cliffhanger: Noah dreading to go back to Uni and him admitting that he fell in love with AJ. Mate, such a thrill read your story. Keep the good work mate and when you’re ready or have the time, fell free to post another chapter. 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gman Posted October 23, 2018 Share Posted October 23, 2018 Another excellent chapter! 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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