no growth An attempt at realism

[Toro]

Irony is a distinctive sign of intelligence. Nice work!

[atreyu]

Haha.

 

This could work as a Cabin in the Woods type of story.

[Hialmar]

13 hours ago, atreyu said:

Haha.

 

This could work as a Cabin in the Woods type of story.

I'm not familiar with Cabin in the Woods.

I am familiar with Iron Sky (crowd-funded satire, Finland) and David Mitchell (comedian, UK).

Edited January 28, 2021 by Hialmar
Humour I am familiar with

[Hialmar]

On 1/27/2021 at 1:14 AM, Toro said:

Irony is a distinctive sign of intelligence. Nice work!

Thank you. If you appreciate irony, satire and intertextuality, and haven't read two of my stories – Security Squad and My Hulk-daddy is Paying  – I link them here. There are also layers of serious gravity in both of them. I intentionally wanted them to be multi-layered and slightly unexpected. Be warned, though. Both have pretty dark scenes in them.

[aitchbee]

20 hours ago, Hialmar said:

I'm not familiar with Cabin in the Woods.

I am familiar with Iron Sky (crowd-funded satire, Finland) and David Mitchell (comedian, UK).

CABIN IN THE WOODS is a satire of teenagers-get-murdered-one-by-one movies.

[Hialmar]

1 hour ago, aitchbee said:

CABIN IN THE WOODS is a satire of teenagers-get-murdered-one-by-one movies.

I see. I suppose the perpetrator kill the sluttiest teenagers first, because of their strong sense of the morally appropriate.

[Wild]

This story feels weird because like... it's listing off a bunch of muscle growth tropes, but not really doing them, so it's like... just listing off tropes.

So it's like, an anti-story. And like, MG stories def could get a roasting, I think the way I'd do it would be more humorously instead of dark. I mean, real is real, but...

You're in some interesting territory.