Pedrobiel Posted August 10, 2021 Share Posted August 10, 2021 3 hours ago, pasidious said: I’m thinking about writing a supplemental story describing what happened to the twink after he decided to workout. He wanted that cock, for sure, and was definitely willing to workout to get it. But obviously something happened along the way. If I can make it into something hot instead of just a boring backstory, I’ll write it. it already sounds really hot 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ploder4 Posted August 10, 2021 Share Posted August 10, 2021 Suddenly hoing from submissive to dominant was sudden and felt awkward... but it somehow fits. You could take advantage of that possible happy accident. It might not be so easy for some submissives to become alpha just because of size change. If the twink still wants that cock... how will he get it if he's denied because he went too dominant to the point of harm. How much does he still want that cock? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MuscleGodInTraining Posted August 11, 2021 Share Posted August 11, 2021 This is a ridiculously hot and well written story. I think I may have unloaded to this about 15 times already. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spacevlad Posted August 11, 2021 Share Posted August 11, 2021 One of the best stories on here of late, absolutely great example of the "eat cum and grow" genre. Love the power dynamic shift, love the desire for more and more, love the scene where he gets that second load and the growth accelerates, love that it ends on a cliffhanger of sorts. A big part of me wants MORE and to see a continuation of this scene with him getting that third load and growing even bigger, but I also sort of love that you leave it there. Looking forward to whatever you write next. 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ToolShedCub Posted August 11, 2021 Share Posted August 11, 2021 We need a part 2 of this 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SilverDar Posted August 11, 2021 Share Posted August 11, 2021 I just read your story. Great tale. Vivid description. Love to the potential shift in power dynamic, especially twink realizing he could move beyond the twink attitude. If you do decide to write the back story, please also consider advancing your original story. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ugalawguy Posted August 11, 2021 Share Posted August 11, 2021 Incredible story, and would love to see another chapter. Your style is great, and I'll echo the other commenters in saying I can't wait to hear more from you! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pasidious Posted August 12, 2021 Author Share Posted August 12, 2021 Thank you all. I honestly didn’t think this story would be received so well. I often think my ideas are garbage cliches and this was no different. And then y’all surprise the crap out of me. 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tzeiner7 Posted August 12, 2021 Share Posted August 12, 2021 It is amazing how stories do that I write a story I think no one would like and it becomes popular you never know how it would go I have had other stories I thought would be great and they turned out flops all you can do is write for what you like and hope others like it 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pasidious Posted August 12, 2021 Author Share Posted August 12, 2021 23 minutes ago, tzeiner7 said: It is amazing how stories do that I write a story I think no one would like and it becomes popular you never know how it would go I have had other stories I thought would be great and they turned out flops all you can do is write for what you like and hope others like it Yup exactly. I just write what I think is hot and if people enjoy it then they enjoy it. If not, that’s okay I’ll write something else either way. 3 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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