hoga Posted November 21, 2019 Share Posted November 21, 2019 epilogue is amazing thanks - please continue! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hoga Posted November 23, 2019 Share Posted November 23, 2019 it would be amazing if he showed Aaron just how strong he is Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ToolShedCub Posted November 26, 2019 Share Posted November 26, 2019 I think it's time for Justin and Aaron to grow some so that they can keep up with Patrick and all sex together. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LinkX Posted November 27, 2019 Author Share Posted November 27, 2019 A huge thank you to everyone who has shown their support. An epilogue is an ending after the end... so I don't think I will continue on with this one. A story has a beginning, middle, and end... and I realized somewhere in the middle that if I didn't write an ending I would write about Aaron and Patrick well into their eighties, and possibly into my own eighties. I figure this story has been a chapter of their lives... sure there are more chapters but that would be more stories and I feel this one is complete for now. Thank you for putting up with my lack of having an editor and proofreader before posting... I mean I run spellcheck, but that's it. Sorry, not sorry. Thank you Hoga for the critique... I thought that when Patrick shielded Justin from the weight of the house while they were being rescued and then lifted what was left of their home to extricate himself, that it was evidence of how strong Patrick had become and was quite apparent to Aaron... if that didn't come across I'll try to work on it in future stories. Toolshed-- I'll have to leave their future to your imagination. I will say that none of them felt any need to "keep up" or to "catch up" and there was still plenty of sex between and among the three of them. Yes, relationship dynamics changed a bit...Aaron, Patrick, Justin, and a few others had some personal discovery and growth... but no one outgrew anyone. 4 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
atomcell Posted February 3, 2020 Share Posted February 3, 2020 What an amazing story! Thanks LinkX for your work on this. Your characters have a lot of heart and personality, and the descriptions you use are very vivid. I'll definitely read more of whatever you care to write in the future 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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