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  3. dredlifter

    Growing neighbor - can't find story

    It's on Metabods https://metabods.com/mbxy/site/story.php?id=arthur-the-young-titan
  4. londonboy

    Super Orgasms

    Wow. Not sure about that. I'll certainly think about it. Thanks for reading my stuff.
  5. Yesterday
  6. xboy

    Uncle Ryan cont. (Ch. 5 onward)

    I hope it's ok my back and forth in time with all 3 characters, and It's easy to follow XD - this story give me alot of ideas, and I like to expand if you like it!
  7. NTMuscle

    The Unexpected Opportunity (5.7.24 Update)

    Part 5 It’s been a few weeks and I think I started to hit my stride with the routine and everything. I’ve been measured a few times since I’ve started. The only big change for me was I lost weight and my bodyfat percentage went down so I’m now at 209lbs and bodyfat is 17% which was fine by me. But the biggest change literally was with Jason. He grew a couple of inches and was now standing at 6’2” and weighed in at 291.5lbs his bodyfat went up to 15% but at his size you couldn’t tell. His waist was unchanged, his chest grew a bit to 71” as did his arms when they were flexed they peaked at 24”. The biggest change this time around was with his legs. Comments that were made about him behind his back about being top heavy and skipping leg day are a thing of the past now as his calves were 26” diamonds and his quads were 69”. During one of our meal breaks Jason walked into the kitchen while I was in the fridge getting my meal and stood over me looking down. I looked up at him and he bounced his pecs and flexed a bicep and said one day you will get this big but when you do imagine how big I will be. I couldn’t say anything I was just dumbstruck by the size of him, granted I know The Corporation isn’t focused on leaning us out but where I am now compared to Jason, I look like I have a swimmers build. I hope I will be able to pack on some size soon. Jason grabbed his food and looked at the stat wall and said that I’m at the acceptable level of The Corporation to start bulking soon so be ready for a routine change which would mostly be food and workout. I smiled at the thought of it and said, so I guess I will start getting bigger now then. Jason hit a double bicep pose and said yep. I was nearly done with my own meal while Jason was getting started but I intentionally slowed down so that I can just watch his muscles just dance with movement as he was eating. His chest was almost touching his food. I snapped out of it and remembered I had a schedule to stick with and got up from the table to head to my room daydreaming about how it would be awesome to have the problem of having my meaty chest end up in my plate of food or even having crumbs fall on my pec shelf, hell even having my biceps fight with my chest trying to get food in my mouth would be arousing as hell to me. But before I got too carried away, my TV turned on indicating I had a new message printing from The Corporation that needed my immediate attention. I moved to the printer and saw the 1 page document awaiting my retrieval. Congratulations on finishing your primer schedule with us. Now the fun part, getting huge. On your TV screen there are numbers listed 1 - 5 and you have choices A-D to select from. Below are questions that you will need to answer so that we can give you your next schedule. Please note that we can adjust your selections as well if we do not feel that they are accurate for our plans. You may even surprise us, the note read. This was different but hey I’m game, The Corporation has been on point so far so lets see what these questions have in store. Question 1 - How tall is too tall for you? A. 6’10 B. 7’3 C. 7’10 D. 8’9. Question 2 - Roughly, how much would you want to weigh by the conclusion of the program? A. 330lbs B. 450lbs C. 500lbs D. 900lbs. Question 3 - Please order the muscle groups that you would like to have overdeveloped with your first selection being the muscle group you would want to be overdeveloped most and going down from there. A. Back B. Chest, C. Arms, D. Legs. Question 4 - How vascular would you want to be by the end of this? A. Not at all, B. A little bit where you could see it in just the right light, C. Above average, you can see them when I’m not working out but when I am working out the really pop out, D. I want to look like a walking road map of vascularity. Question 5 - If you were to go out in public for an excursion fully clothed, how would you want your clothes to fit you? A. Tightly, hugging every muscle that you have, B. Obscenely stretched over your body, C. Stretched so far the clothes already are bursting at the seams, D. You don’t want the clothes to be able to fit properly (i.e. your chest is so large the shirt can’t cover them all and exposes your stomach) but they still are about to burst at the seams. Please send us your responses within the hour and do not share your questions or results and remember we can make adjustments if we deem necessary. To be honest I like these questions, even if they were to adjust down or up from whatever I choose being in the minimum that they have would still be huge. I wonder if Jason had these questions but doesn’t matter, I have an hour to think how I want to respond to these 5 questions. Lets see question 1 how tall, well it was cool when Jason and I were the same height granted I wasn’t taller than everyone before but just seeing him be so massive over me was a turn on but I think it would be even more of a turn on if I were the big one in height so for question 1, I’m thinking D. 8’9 would be too tall. Hopefully I would be around that height though, so option D good to go. But honestly would I mind being even taller, not at all but that’s the only options available. Next question. How much would I want to weigh after the conclusion of this, shit Jason already close to 300lbs on his own and he looks massive already. 500lbs I think would be awesome but hell they gave me an option to be even bigger so why not be my own living breathing fantasy mass monster so 900lbs it is. I wonder if they go beyond these numbers? I can see it now just walking around causing minor tremors in the right environment. Oh well option D again for 2. Alright question 3, order for which I would want to have my muscles overdeveloped. Well first up is a no brainer chest, at the height and weight I want to be I would hope my chest would enter a room before me. I wonder if I will have bigger/fatter nipples to go with the size of a massive chest? Ok so after that I’d say legs to be able to carry the heavy load of my chest, then back and arms which would essentially work together anyway. Tall, thick, and wide sounds pretty good. But I hope I would still have impressive peaks even though I put arms last. Ok question 4 vascularity, above average is good, they would look amazing after a good pump but don’t have to be a 24/7 thing but if some like forearms or that bicep vein were to remain constant I wouldn’t be opposed so C it shall be. Alright last question, going out in public how would I want clothes to fit me? Shit D is the dream not only for the shirt but pants/shorts where they would be difficult to go over my massive quads or even be overstretched where they wouldn’t fit my small waist and big legs. I would want to be so big that I would need assistance to get clothing on period. Hell I don’t think that anyone would be able to arrest me for indecent exposure because I would likely be too large but still that aside yeah. I double checked my responses and submitted them and got a typical thank you message to include be on the lookout for an updated routine in 2 days. I was still hyped up on what I was potentially about to become. I started watching pumping iron while rubbing one out at the thought that soon and very soon hopefully all of them would be smaller than me. I did the same watching Mr. Universe, I couldn’t wait. The next 2 days invigorated me and motivated me more to really be ready to go once the prime has ended. Jason even noticed a new burst of energy and so did The Corporation. I was in such a trance on what was to come next that it didn’t even phase me that Jason broke the 300lb mark. I was waiting for my new routine until the message popped up on my TV screen that my new routine had arrived.
  8. Wizard0410

    Growing neighbor - can't find story

    Is there a link where we can find it?
  9. Ro20316

    Uncle Ryan cont. (Ch. 5 onward)

    I love this ebggining of the new Ben. Ryan knows exactly what it feels like to bee confident and dominant and he loves his brother
  10. BrzNLA

    Muscleville: A Short Story Collection

    Another great start from you @muscleaddict. I can’t wait to see what you come up with in the next part. I love that you are experimenting with different types of story and approaches. Keep on the great work mate!
  11. mesdoyle

    Super Orgasms

    You are.a great author. Could you do a cross over between the character from this story and old man Stevens as a wrestling match. Loser has his powers ripped off and is the sex slave.
  12. DennisFLL

    CONDO HOOKUP - PART II

    CHAPTER II The two lovers are in a very amorous mood when Biff returns home, his muscles pumped after spending several hours in the gym. Timmy is very sexually charged after watching his boyfriend enter the room, remove his shirt, and bring him close to him. When Timmy reaches for Biff’s biceps, they continue their hot erotic dance and role-playing. “So fucking big and hard,” Timmy says under his breath, panting in lust for his lover and his enormous bulging muscles. He caresses the lean knots in Biff’s unflexed upper arm, as his hand then roams up to the bodybuilder’s defined deltoid striations. His excitement builds as his hand then falls down to Biff’s delt and bicep separation and to the thick cephalic vein on top of his award-winning 25-inch biceps. Timmy runs a finger up the vein and then kisses it giving an “mmm” sound. “You wanna feel it when it’s really huge, my little Dutch boy? When I flex my Mount Everest for just you?” Timmy looked up at Biff’s handsome cocky smile and nodded as he whispered an “Uh huh.” As Biff flexed his huge biceps to its beautifully shaped high peak, Timmy grabbed it with both hands feeling both the peak and triceps bottom of the handsome Mr. Olympia’s upper arm. The two lovers rubbed their dicks together in their frottage as Timmy kissed and licked the top of Biff’s flexed biceps. Biff then leaned down, meeting his lips to Timmy’s. They tongue-sworded, then deep-Frenched, as Timmy moaned in great several desire. And then he came, unable to suppress it any longer, moaning his orgasm loudly with his pants still on. Biff then lifted Timmy up, one arm under his knees and the other around his back and cradled Timmy to his hard bulging chest as Timmy reached both his hands around Biff’s neck. Biff looked down at Timmy, their eyes locking, and affectionately simply said, “My Timmy,” before the massively muscular bodybuilder kissed his handsome slender boyfriend again and brought him into the bedroom. Timmy had previously, half-jokingly, promised him a nice blowjob for his great accomplishment at the Mr. O, and the bodybuilder was about to get his ‘present’. But of course, Timmy will very much enjoy giving the present as well! As Biff slowly lowered Timmy onto the bed, Timmy kissed Biff’s striated pectorals, then each of Biff’s eight carved abdominals. Biff then stood up and removed his shorts. Biff is erect, with his “incalculably large penis” within Timmy’s reach. The slender model needs both of his hands to guide the bodybuilder-dick to his mouth. As Timmy sticks his tongue out to taste Biff’s pre, he looks up and sees Biff looking into their full-length mirror across the room at himself as he flexes his right arm’s winning biceps. Biff loves the muscular-size difference between him and his lover as it makes him feel even more powerful. He kisses the top of his Mount Everest peak. Timmy gets hard again, excited further by Biff’s cockiness as Mr. Olympia continues his assessment and love of his ripped muscular development. Timmy guides his lover’s dick to his lips again and the bulbous head of Biff’s huge manhood fills Timmy’s mouth as he begins sucking. “You’re doing good,” Biff said, then smiled to himself as he knows these were the exact words he’s used over the past decade perhaps a thousand times ‘at this same moment’ with other muscle-worshipers. Several minutes later Biff is in orgasm with his semen being swallowed by his boyfriend who does not miss a drop. When Biff withdraws, the bodybuilder then lowers his lips to Timmy’s for an “I love you” kiss. This is something that Biff never did ‘at this same moment’. * Several days later, on a crystal-clear morning, Biff’s mother comes for a day-visit with the couple. She and Biff’s dad had come down from their home in New Jersey and were staying with Biff’s sister and brother-in-law up in Boca Raton. Biff greets her at the door, and they start their conversation in Italian, where they usually go when they’re being affectionate with one another. Biff asks his mother how she is as he gives her a kiss, “Mamma, come stai?” She responds with “Stai bene,” telling him she’s fine. He nods to her that so is he. The doting son starts to show her around the apartment and when she sees the magnificent views of the city on one side and the ocean and Intracoastal on the other from their high floor, she says, “Ah que bella vista,” and she quickly walks out onto the balcony. Timmy comes out of the bedroom and Biff quickly goes out to get her, telling her he wants to introduce her to someone very special in his life. She walks back into the living room with him and when she looks at Timmy, she appears stunned by how handsome he is. “Ciao bello,” she greets him with a flattering admiration of his good looks, accentuating the ‘bello.’ “Come ti chiami?” she asks his name. “Inglese Mamma, per favore,” Biff asks her to speak in English. And he’s annoyed at her also because he knows that he had told her his name on the phone already. “Buongiorno, Signora Stevens. Mi chiamo Timmy,” she gets in a very surprising response from her son’s boyfriend. “Ahh bravo, Timmy,” she says smiling at him warmly in congratulations at answering her in Italian, despite her son’s request for English only. She then looks at Biff and scrunches her face as if to scold him and to indicate that he should mind his own business with the language thing. Biff is amused at his mother’s reaction and surprised and proud of Timmy’s answer. She and Timmy hug in greeting and she looks at Biff and remarks, “We gotta fatten him up. He’s too ‘tin’,” she says in her mostly Jersey accent now. All three laugh, but then Biff says, “I love him just the way he is.” Timmy’s face turns red from that, the first time he hears Biff telling someone about the love they’ve already expressed for each other many times. He remembers back to the movie “Swept Away,” the 1974 film directed and screen-written by Lina Wertmuller. Biff’s mother seems exactly like the beautiful middle-aged blonde character who’s seduced by Giancarlo Giannini. The trio are instantly chatting over some drinks, then lunch, and then more drinks. They show “mamma” the video from the Mr. O contest, then mom and son gossip with Timmy about some cousins. Timmy’s happy that their meeting with Biff’s mom is going so well. And he sees firsthand that Biff is very close with her, which says a lot about his boyfriend’s character in Timmy’s book. * It’s late in the afternoon and Timmy excuses himself as he has several things he needs to do. He wanted to let Biff have some quality time with his mom, and he had also promised his best friend, Pete, a get-together. He thought that this was perfect timing, since he would also now have his quality time with Pete, who he hadn’t seen on a one-on-one basis in several months. He first spoke with his agent about some upcoming modeling gigs, then gave a call to Pete to make the evening’s arrangements for dinner. * Biff and his mother continue their amicable yammering, but soon a very sore subject comes up when Biff asks his mother why his father didn’t come also. Biff’s dad wouldn’t join the mother for the visit, he’s told by his mom. “I’m sorry, my sweet bambino. You know, he’s very old-fashioned and he still thinks that being gay is a sin. And, well, it’s so hard to say this, but he became so vulgar yesterday when we were talking about us coming today. He was going into a little detail on what gay men do sexually together, and he said it was just too much for him. He then told me that he wasn’t going to come with me today.” “He lives back in the stone age,” she continued. “Well, from more than fifty years ago anyway. He just can’t help it. It was his upbringing. You’ve heard about the difficulty your dad and I had with his family when we first started dating. And then when we announced we were getting married! Madonna Mi! When we finally planned on marrying in his church, his family finally came around to accepting me. Just like your father WILL with you and Timmy. Just give him a little time. Pazienza.” It hurt Biff to hear all this, but a good part of him was not surprised. And he always appreciated his mother’s total honesty with him. He did have a closeness with his dad when growing up through his teenage years. And it was his father who encouraged his bodybuilding, though saying that it would “make more of a man of him.” But he knew his dad was raised with very conservative mores and it would just take him a while to maybe come around and accept him for the way he is.
  13. Musclebulge

    Growing neighbor - can't find story

    Thank you! I had so much trouble finding it without the name.
  14. Jtchef2

    Uncle Ryan cont. (Ch. 5 onward)

    Amazing chapter
  15. xboy

    Uncle Ryan cont. (Ch. 5 onward)

    Uncle Ryan - Extra Cap 02 - Ryan 02 Ryan was in front of the mirror of his wardrobe, he was still choosing what to wear for to have breakfast and go to his new client, Mr. Smith, down in Port Valley. When he heard the door of his room open, and turning around he saw his brother well, sweaty, panting and with a look somewhere between shocked and worried on his face! "Ryan! Are you still here?" Ben asked not sure if his brother had already left or not. Ryan comes out of his wardrobe still naked and immediately goes to his brother, answering him and curious about his old brother's panting and the obvious concern in his voice. " What's going on Ben, what's wrong? Why are you breathing so hard?" - " Ho Ryan, luckily" the brother begins in a clear state of embarrassment, shock and fear "I was in my room, I was sleeping..and...and I was woken up by my cock at full force!" Ryan's right eyebrow raised, anticipating a loud laugh, "hahahhaha...well Ben, you're a little old to not know this stuff!" Ryan said jokingly. "oh Ryan! don't you understand!?!?" Ben said, getting nervous at the evidence of his brother react. At this point Ryan seemed to be the confused one now. "Well...listen I still have to have breakfast, and then go to a client, I've had a reflection like this for over 15 years now and since 1 when I started bodybuilding again even better....my bathroom can testify... I don't understand, sorry, explain to me, ok?" "This hasn't happened to me in years Ryan! over 10 years!" - "...over 10 years...???" repeats Ryan as if in a trance, making his brother Ben sit on his bed he approached him and said "but...you're married Ben, how is it possible...what..." "Don't you understand??" Ben said with tears in his eyes "She's just been castrating me this whole time Ryan! And after what....transformed me..into this....into this monster....it made me reborn!" - At these words, Ryan hugged his brother, aware that his brother Ben would finally change, not only in body but also in mind. “I'm glad you came to talk to me, sorry if I was a dick to you.” Ryan said to his older brother who smiled back and calmed down. "And there's one more thing!" - Ben said, heartened and more confident "I think I cummed three or four times last night, my bed was full of sperm and I dreamed all night about huge bodybuilders and something inside me..." - "..inside you want me to become bigger than them?" Ryan concluded, turning to his brother and winking. "Yes!" she almost screamed well... "...is this wrong? I'm sick right?" Ben said, returning to being the little man under his wife's thumb for a few moments. Then Ryan stood up, and confidently said, "Ben, look at me!" - making Ben jump and he obeyed with a mixed expression of submission and curiosity. “Ben! Do you really think this is wrong, that being like this, that I am sick?” saying this he began a routine of poses completely naked which showing off all his massive bodybuilder muscles, thick middle abs, beefy, strong arms and legs, bulky, wide shoulders, round big ass, powerfull calves. Ben's eyes went from watering to opening along with his mouth in a mixed state of admiration, lust, and shock, his brother was a muscle god! the show was incredible for Ben, he had seen the photos, and some videos secretly from his wife on YouTube, but what he saw now live, it was incredible, it was pure masculinity, pure power, real muscles, a real muscle god. he felt completely absorbed by it all, he felt that the muscles he had just developed were nothing but a small thing, he felt himself throbbing and wanted to be like Ryan, maybe more...? ""What do you think Ben?" said Ryan, at the end of the little show, sweaty and with a subtle grin on his face, "Wow..." was all Ben could say. "Well thank you...and thanks also for appreciating!" - saying this Ryan pointed to the white puddle of sperm on Ben's feet, the older brother had cum without touching himself, but only f rom his brother's desire. "oh Ryan...I...." he said in new embarrassment, Ben. "hahaha don't worry bro, you don't know how much I like it! And then we're among men!" Saying this, Ryan took his cock in his hands again and gave it two good pulls, making Ben look at him and make him swallow, as if eager to understand what the sem of a god tasted like. "Come here Ben!" the young Ryan said dominantly, and continued by saying ":..touch the body you could have, that you deserve!" Well, Ben hypnotically, stood up, with his cock erect again and dripping with semen, towards the god of muscles in front of him. “Ryan, you're so fucking big, I don't know what's happening to me, but I want so, so much more! I want to be like you, I can feel that power, that strength!” - Ben said, moving closer to the giant, his hand moved towards his erect cock, starting to masturbate, while with his left hand he brought a finger closer to Ryan's bulbous cock head and took a drop of precum, and inhaled it, giving it to Ryan an idea. He was about to touch his muscles when Ryan said: "You're pretty swollen too Ben, and you don't lack musculature, why don't we play with that, and the prize will be the juice, like when we were kids?" "...you mean with wrestling?" - Ben said curiously and excitedly - "Yes Ben, let's go down to the gym, I have everything you need, if you manage to knock me down, you will have much more than a stolen drop... what do you think?!?!" - he winked. "Oh ...wow...but Andreew...if he wake-up?" - reply Ben followe he naked brother in the gym, but Ryan replied not to worry, his young nephew was a very deep sleeper, he certainly wouldn't wake up for such a short time. Both wear shorths and their guinea tee. "You take top position. If you get me on my back, the cum is yours." Ryan waited on the mat like a rodeo bull as his brother stood up and shook himself off. He stood over Ryan and reached across him to lock his arm on his Ryan's left side. But Rryan's broad back was so thick and wide that Ben had to lean halfway over him to reach his armpit. Ryan's body felt like it was made out of marble. "GO," said the Ryan once his brother locked his hold. Ben pulled and pulled and pulled on the massive musclegod. His old brother didn't budge an inch. "I said GO," Ryan said. Ben pulled with all his might, but his 230lbs was no match for his heavily bulked up 320lb massive young brother. Ryan reached back and grabbed Ben's arm with one hand, lifting him into the air, then slamming him down to the mat, pinning him with one thick burly hand. Ben struggled against the powerful arm, to no effect. Ryan sat down on brother's chest, with just enough weight to hold him pinned but not crush his ribcage. "Looks like that you will be left without the cum that you like so much for awhile," he said, hoping to use that time to whip his brother into the man he wanted him to be. "Get off me, you fat fuck," said Ben. Ryan's face darkened. He stood up, but as he did so, he grabbed Ben around the neck and lifted him up with him. He stood his Bro on his feet, then let go of his neck. "You think this is fat, boy?" the Ryan said, exposing his poweful muscualr body. "Go ahead and punch it. This solid rock abs is harder than anything you ever felt. And this body gives me power beyond anything you can dream of." Saying this, he struck a Front Double Biceps pose that brought out hundreds of veins everywhere and increased the size of every muscle in his already huge body. The skin stretched out tight and shiny over it. Ben backed up, conflicted by his feelings of love and hate for the huge powerhouse of a man standing in front of him. Part of him wanted to jump into his arms and ask for forgiveness for being such a dickhead for the past years and asking for forgiveness and mercy for what had to be said and just wanted to thank him for what he had given him. But another part of him wanted to hit the guy over and over for being so pompous and superior. "Come on," said the young man, "don't be a pussy. Give me your best shot." That pretty much decided it for Ben. He had backed up as far as the weight rack. He reached behind his back and picked up a 25lb dumbbell. He whirled it around in front of him, and tossed it at his Ryan's gabs. It landed square on the big thickly strong, then bounced off and fell to the ground. They both looked at it as it rolled away. Ryan hadn't even budged. He reached up and grabbed the straps of his guinea tee and pulled them over his soccer ball sized delts. Then he ripped the shirt in two and tossed it off him, exposing his entire hulking torso. "That all you got?" he said to his old brother as he took a step toward him. Ben reached around and grabbed the 35lb dumbbell. He had to use both hands to throw it. It bounced off his Ryan's abs with a thud. Then Ryan leaned over and picked up the weight. He put one beefy hand on each end of the dumbbell, then began to press inward. His torso bulged with thickening muscle as he pressed down on the weight. Veins popped out on his 22" neck, and across his chest and delts, and into his arms, feeding them with power and more power. The handle of the dumbbell began to crumple in like an accordion. Ryan pressed in on the weights until the handle was flattened to the thickness of a penny and the plates touched in the middle. He dropped the crunched up iron to the floor, and looked at himself in the mirror. He'd never looked more jacked up. Every thick brute muscle on him was ruddy and pumped. He did a most muscular pose and watched in amazement as his traps rose up behind his neck like two thick bridge cables. He felt like he had the strength of 20. "Ryan" said the kid, "I don't know what happened, I just lost it...." Ryan looked at his old brother, then waddled over him,took his big erect cock, which was roaring inside his shorts for free use, brought it to his brother's mouth. grabbed his head, and dropped the cum into is inside his dry mouth. Sweat ran down his huge torso. "Here you go, bro. Take the cum. You don't have you don't really have to beat me to get what you want." Ben she took a good suck from Ryan's virile member, savoring its hardness, size and taste. "I shouldn't expect you to be like me." Ryan said as he gets sucked by his brother, thinking back to how Ben was changing. "That's just it," said the Ben "I ache to be like you, but I know I never will be." Rayn grabbed his old brother around the back of his neck and pulled him into his solid torso. "Don't repeat this to anyone, Ben, but I was a skinnier little twerp than you remember?" "No you weren't," said Ben. "Oh yeah I was. Now look at me." Ryan flexed his right arm, which had swollen to a thick gnarly 24"s of peaked muscle. Ben put his hands on the powerful arm. "I could never be this big," he said. "Sure you could," said Ryan "In fact, let's see if we can get you even bigger." Having said that, Ryan gave one last shot of his juice, said goodbye, he was really ready to go. His brother would have remained with his son for a certain amount of time, and who knows this would have increased his esteem and improved his new transformation. Ben for his part, felt like a completely new man, it was time to workout, it was time to grow, it was time to change.
  16. arpeejay

    Muscleville: A Short Story Collection

    Spin them off into another story or series is what I would do. Someone once told that it is hard to keep readers' attention past 10,000 words and that's usually the max I aim for. But if you have a great character, write a story for each of his adventures: George in the Jungle, George at the Beach, George in the Outback, George Takes On the Big City, etc.
  17. DawnFire98

    Muscleville: A Short Story Collection

    Thanks so much for the answer, @arpeejay. But what do you do if you still have way to many scenes at the end of the day?
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  19. Hialmar

    Muscleville: A Short Story Collection

    Grrrr, O , from !
  20. arpeejay

    Muscleville: A Short Story Collection

    It's very easy to write yourself into a corner and I have done so many times. I finally figured out that it helps to have an ending in mind. I don't write the ending first (although I have been tempted to do so) but any more I generally know where I want to end up with a story. Then it's just a matter of getting there without getting lost in the weeds. In other words, I at least subconsciously ask myself "is the chapter I am working on currently moving me towards a conclusion?"
  21. DawnFire98

    Muscleville: A Short Story Collection

    @muscleaddict Any tips on writing short stories? I just keep adding stuff to it. (Goes out to all the other great writers on here as well! @londonboy @Broody @arpeejay @TQuintA )
  22. WashburnDaddy

    Muscleville: A Short Story Collection

    Oh yes - you haven't lost the touch!
  23. Musclelove24

    Growing neighbor - can't find story

    Arthur the Young titan ?
  24. Bjort

    Muscleville: A Short Story Collection

    Grrrr my Swedish Kapten!
  25. Bjort

    Muscleville: A Short Story Collection

    Awwwww shucks! Cheers mate!!!
  26. muscleaddict

    Muscleville: A Short Story Collection

    Now Archie needs to write a story for the Muscle Fiction Forums where Cody writes a story for the Muscle Freak Forums and the likes of MuscleJohnny, dreamerlad and RobBear leave comments.
  27. muscleaddict

    Muscleville: A Short Story Collection

    I'd actually forgotten about the fact this is an attempt at a story in an American setting with American characters. Hopefully it feels pretty authentic and if it doesn't - Archie wrote it, not me. You might be in luck there!
  28. dreamboy

    Muscleville: A Short Story Collection

    It’s an Inception of Muscle!!!!a Mucleception
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