parsom Posted October 10, 2023 Share Posted October 10, 2023 2 hours ago, Maxum said: Dudes! I totally expected to get more comments about the story line, but maybe I'm misreading the audience. (I'm often less interesting than I think.) Since I'm not really a writer by trade or profession, I'm insecure when it comes to this sort of thing. Let me know how you think it's going. If you don't want to post criticism for all the world to see (sometimes it begets criticism of its own), feel free to DM me. Thanks, MX I think the story is a very interesting read for starters. You are doing a great job of describing muscle in arousing detail. There are typos here and there, yet the overall result is very satisfying. Please continue as I am very interested to see where this unique story leads. Thanks for sharing! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
atleest Posted October 11, 2023 Share Posted October 11, 2023 20 hours ago, Maxum said: Dudes! I totally expected to get more comments about the story line, but maybe I'm misreading the audience. (I'm often less interesting than I think.) Since I'm not really a writer by trade or profession, I'm insecure when it comes to this sort of thing. Let me know how you think it's going. If you don't want to post criticism for all the world to see (sometimes it begets criticism of its own), feel free to DM me. Thanks, MX I'm enjoying the scenes a lot, but am confused by the point-of-view name change (ch 4 Marcus -> ch 5 Cameron). Is this part of the change in reality like the growth and Billy's transformation? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
citizenies Posted October 11, 2023 Share Posted October 11, 2023 Great work ~ hope more comes Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wrestlejock646 Posted October 11, 2023 Share Posted October 11, 2023 I'm loving this ride....hot descriptions and action. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeedMore123 Posted October 12, 2023 Share Posted October 12, 2023 Please don't worry about lack of feedback. We should, and I certainly should, at least give the decency of a bit of a response when people have put so much effort into creating a world and writing a story like this. My excuse is that I'm often pre-occupied when reading incredible stories like this that I'm not in the head space to write an intelligent feedback. Apologies. 1 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tjdonger Posted October 12, 2023 Share Posted October 12, 2023 Really enjoy the story line, the character development and of course the muscle growth tied to the descriptive sex. I’m hopeful you’ll continue the story. It’s really good! perhaps there’s something we can do to entice you?.. Thank you! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maxum Posted October 12, 2023 Author Share Posted October 12, 2023 21 hours ago, atleest said: I'm enjoying the scenes a lot, but am confused by the point-of-view name change (ch 4 Marcus -> ch 5 Cameron). Is this part of the change in reality like the growth and Billy's transformation? My bad. Writing in spurts. Marcus and Cameron are the same character, and I'm editing Chapter 4 to change the name from Marcus to Cameron. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ro20316 Posted October 13, 2023 Share Posted October 13, 2023 Wait so both Cam and Billy went through a change, right? And im guessing that was because of "the storm"? We gonna see anymore people being changed? 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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