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The next scene - as the hot bodybuilder is giving his food order will Daniel be able to concentrate on anything except the muscular chest and arms he's staring at?   

dreamboy - love your writing and set-up for the next chapter!

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Oh wow - fantastic first chapter @dreamboy. Well written with a relatable and likeable main character and I love how realistic the whole thing feels. Can't wait to read more of this. Curious as to who handed him his phone back under the cubicle too! 😏

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8 hours ago, muscleaddict said:

Oh wow - fantastic first chapter @dreamboy. Well written with a relatable and likeable main character and I love how realistic the whole thing feels. Can't wait to read more of this. Curious as to who handed him his phone back under the cubicle too! 😏

We’ll just have to wait and see😉

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