ploder4 Posted May 9 Share Posted May 9 I wonder if Harris will accidentally find a cure. Probably not until Rhys has completely and totally drained and broken his will. I could see Rhys shrinking back to a more than manageable size if not back to his old self and Harris still being his bitch (he'd end up that broken). I could see Rhys making Harris teach him how to build muscle and eat right while Harris is not allowed to continue to maintain his own body. The roles reverse again. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Littlerjim Posted May 9 Author Share Posted May 9 Thanks all for the great feedback so far! Just wanted to address some things raised all in one go: I’m not planning to include snuff, not my speed, sorry! If you want a deeper meaning for this, I guess you could talk about ideation and blaming other people for circumstances beyond their control and how we treat them for it… But mostly I just wanted to write some asshole getting their comeuppance. I don't have a problem with dubious consent in fiction necessarily, but in this story it doesn't make sense. It would vindicate Harris, prove that he was right about Rhys all along. I don't want that. 5 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ro20316 Posted May 10 Share Posted May 10 Jealosy is a dangerous feeling and herre we are with Harris that even after everything he has seen its still in denial about what he really feels and Rhys sees through that. He tried so hard to like Harris and the guy didnt meet him half way now here are teh consequences Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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