Popular Post Scriptboy Posted January 18, 2015 Popular Post Share Posted January 18, 2015 Karim looked on as Harold finished his last workout in the gym. Karim was a teenage boy who had come from Persia (modern-day Iran). Harold had found him and he had taken him to the United States. Harold was a successful businessman who had run numerous businesses, the latest being a small gym on the corner of a small strip mall in Miami, Florida, which was where he came from. Harold, now being in his late 50’s, having been divorced and had no kids of his own, but his relationship with Karim was a very special one. Harold had met with an old friend of his while in Iran while delivering medical supplies for a local hospital. This good friend of his was dying of cancer, and he had given him one last parting gift before Harold said goodbye: an old oil lamp. The friend told Harold to rub the lamp, and instantly the room was filled with white, thick smoke! The smoke then filled out in the form of a Genie, who didn’t look at all as expected. Rather than resemble an old, overweight man, this Genie was a teenage boy. Only 5-foot-4 inches tall, Karim was short and lean, with brown eyes, short, straight, jet-black hair, and chocolate-colored skin. Karim was a powerful, young Genie, and he was extremely generous; hence his name, Karim, which meant “generous”. Karim looked like he was about 17 years old. Harold got a plane ticket and flew back to the United States, taking the lamp with him. Once he was back in Florida, he released Karim from the lamp and he told the teenage Genie that he no longer needed to stay in the lamp. He then escorted the Genie to the gym which he owned and asked him to help grow the members who worked out there. Harold was completely amazed to see how easy it was for Karim to inflate the muscles of all the people who came to the weight room. One man would walk in and start to use the machines. The man would be skinny to the bone. Karim would focus his powers on him, and the man would find his muscles expand rapidly! Karim would help older clients, younger ones, college students and teens. Nobody would escape his powerful magic! Eventually, all the clients at the gym were big, buff and incredibly strong! People started leaving, or they wouldn’t work out so often anymore! Harold was losing business! So, one day, Harold sat Karim down at the dinner table at the house. “Karim, I need to have you stop growing my customers at the gym…” Harold said to him. “People aren’t coming back anymore and I need to gain my customers back!” “Ohh… But Master! I can shrink their muscles if you want!” Karim suggested, while he was eating his breakfast. “No, Karim! I don’t want you to take away from them what you had already given!” Harold said to the teenage Genie. “Go out and give to other people! Go meet others and grow their muscles!” “But… I cannot! You are my Master! I am bound to serve you! I live at your house, in the lamp!” the boy argued. Harold then stood up and looked at the slender teen. “Karim, I love you very much! You know that, right?” “Yes, Master!” “From now on, I want you to be my son…” Harold said calmly. “Ohhh…. Y-y-yes, Mas—Father!” Karim said. “And you are no longer a Genie! You are free from the lamp, because you are my son!” Suddenly, the lamp shook and rattled violently, before it vanished into thin air! It was gone! “Ohhh whooaa! I’m free! I’m totally FREE!” Karim cheered as he embraced Harold. “Thanks, Dad!” “Now, Karim…. Can you still grow other people?” Harold asked the teen. “Of course! The power never leaves me!” Karim said, as he walked towards the window. He spotted a man walking his dog outside. Karim just pointed his finger at him, and the man, who was only wearing shorts, a tank top, and running shoes, began to feel soreness in his muscles. Suddenly, his arms bulged, his biceps grew, his arms thickened and his strength increased… All at once! Harold and Karim saw this from a distance while looking out the kitchen window. “Splendid, my son! I know how much you just love to grow muscle on others!” Harold grinned. “You think I should just go to school?” Karim suggested. “Yes, that would be a start!” Harold pondered. “Then, you can go to the park, to some sporting venue, or other places from there!” Karim just laces his fingers together and cracked his knuckles. “I’m going to have so much fun!” 10 26 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scriptboy Posted January 18, 2015 Author Share Posted January 18, 2015 Thanks for all the likes, guys. I guess that means I should continue it? 1 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
roboprobo Posted January 18, 2015 Share Posted January 18, 2015 Also, now you gotta give us some plot about his old friend! Oh man, that's so interesting. It's really fast though, so it doesn't really feel like you settled in a 'genie' character, more like a guy who can grow people. I guess it was pretty cute, but the genie was really just a genie 'cuz he had magic? Continue to write, Scripts, I'd love to see some magic going on in this forum 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scriptboy Posted January 18, 2015 Author Share Posted January 18, 2015 Also, now you gotta give us some plot about his old friend! Oh man, that's so interesting. It's really fast though, so it doesn't really feel like you settled in a 'genie' character, more like a guy who can grow people. I guess it was pretty cute, but the genie was really just a genie 'cuz he had magic? Continue to write, Scripts, I'd love to see some magic going on in this forum You are exactly right. I just wanted to lay a foundation for a continuous story which could be a lot of fun to write. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ro20316 Posted January 18, 2015 Share Posted January 18, 2015 That genie is gonna have some fun on it's own. I like that Haron treated him like a son and not some slave that will have to do anything he ask.Great start. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scriptboy Posted January 18, 2015 Author Share Posted January 18, 2015 That genie is gonna have some fun on it's own. I like that Haron treated him like a son and not some slave that will have to do anything he ask.Great start. Thanks! I don't consider this chapter my "best" writing.... I could have done better... It was a little rushed... But I just wanted to have something posted and I wanted to lay a foundation for future chapters. Thanks for your feedback! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
canon Posted June 10, 2015 Share Posted June 10, 2015 Thanks! I don't consider this chapter my "best" writing.... I could have done better... It was a little rushed... But I just wanted to have something posted and I wanted to lay a foundation for future chapters. Thanks for your feedback!Hey Scriptboy, where are the "future chapters". Really loved this story, great foundation for an amazing story. Would love to read more from you Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scriptboy Posted June 10, 2015 Author Share Posted June 10, 2015 Hey Scriptboy, where are the "future chapters". Really loved this story, great foundation for an amazing story. Would love to read more from you Oh God, has it really been 5 months since I wrote that? Well, thanks for the reminder! Needless to say, I have been BUSY on this forum! LOL! I'll think of something fun for the next chapter! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cutlerfan Posted June 10, 2015 Share Posted June 10, 2015 If this your writing when rushed..Damn..you are incredible! More exposition and descriptions of muscle growth would be appreciated. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scriptboy Posted June 17, 2015 Author Share Posted June 17, 2015 (edited) Genie with a Muscle Growth Fetish - Part 2 It was the start of the first period but for Marvin Macdonald it was a free hour to sit in his classroom and to study, read or work on homework assignments. Of course, being one of the biggest geeks in high school meant that he had already completed all his assignments for all his classes already, including his homework for the next three days! So what was a super-smart kid going to do with his free time? He pulled a heavy, thick book out of his backpack. He treasured the book and treated it like it was his most prized possession. In fact, the heavy, 700-page tome was completely wrapped in a plastic bag! Marvin carefully pulled it out of the bag and held it in his arm like he was carrying a newborn baby. “Ahh… This is awesome!” he grinned, as he glanced over the cover of his prized book while he began the slow journey from his locker to the classroom as he paged through his brand new copy of “History of Object Oriented Programming”. The only bad thing about being engrossed in this book while walking was… He wasn’t paying attention to where he was going… “BUSTED FOR DISTRACTED WALKING!!!” Ben shouted in Marvin’s ear as Marvin practically walked right into him. “WATCH WHERE YOU’RE GOING, YOU DWEEB!” Ben placed his hands on Marvin’s chest and shoved him out of his way, sending him flying into the brick wall! The hard impact with the wall made him drop his book on the floor, of course, which was his worst nightmare. “MY BOOK!” Marvin cried out as he tried to peel himself from the brick wall, when somebody picked up his precious book. “Is this yours?” “GIVE ME MY BOOK!” Marvin shouted. “IT’S MINE!” “Chill out, dude! I’m not gonna take your book…” Karim smiled as he handed Marvin his book back while he saw Ben walking away. Marvin took the book and glanced at it quickly, flipping through the pages and inspecting the cover. “That bastard… He dented the cover of my book and one of the pages got a fold in it…” Marvin grumbled as he wiped the dirt off the cover with the palm of his hand. Karim casually walked over to where Marvin was standing and he glanced at the cover. “Object oriented programming, huh? Wow… That’s pretty cool, Marvin!” Karim grinned. “You must be really, really smart!” Marvin just stared at his classmate with his bright, blue eyes. Marvin had short, blond hair, fair smooth skin, he was only 5-foot-5 inches tall and he was as skinny as could be. He wore a t-shirt with short sleeves and jeans with running shoes. Lastly, he wore glasses to correct his vision. He looked like your typical geek. “Yeah, well, idiots like Ben make it hard to be a geek around here…” Marvin sighed. “Thing is, I don’t have time to sit in a weight room and to lift metal plates all day long… I got websites to build, code to write, programs to debug, problems to solve and apps to develop for Apple and Android and I don’t have the hours in a day to worry about idiot jocks who push me around all the time!” “Well…. It doesn’t take hours and hours, Marvin…” Karim grinned, as the two boys walked side-by-side. As they were walking, Karim decided to increase Marvin’s muscles just a little. Just to see what would happen. So, he made Marvin’s biceps inflate by a little bit, enough to make it barely noticeable as if he had started working out in the gym. Suddenly, Marvin stopped walking and looked down. This was right before the entrance to the classroom. “That’s weird…” Marvin mumbled. “What’s that?” Karim asked him. “What’s weird?” Marvin flexed his arm for a moment and then he just shook it off. “My arms just feel a little… heavier… I had a brief cramp in both arms and now they just feel weird…” Marvin sighed. “Maybe it’s from carrying that heavy book around the whole time?” Karim suggested. “My programming book?” “Yeah…. You’re lifting weights, you know?” Karim grinned. “You’ve been carrying that heavy book around for the last ten minutes!” “Hmm… Maybe you’re right…” Marvin wondered as he switched hands and started holding the book in the other hand. Then, the two boys entered the classroom and sat down next to each other. Marvin was deeply engrossed in his book while Karim thought about how he would grow his friend’s muscles some more throughout the day, little by little… This chapter has a very short muscle growth scene, but it sets the stage for a lot more to come! Edited June 17, 2015 by Scriptboy formatting fix 8 11 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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