Montparnasse Posted September 18, 2015 Share Posted September 18, 2015 This was AMAZING. So clever. You COULD stop it here, but you left just enough neatly tied threads to untie and continue for a possible part two. It was such a good story, and you kept doing the unexpected thing! A perfect twist to the the expected tropes. I can see why everyone was eagerly awaiting part two! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tinytank90 Posted September 19, 2015 Share Posted September 19, 2015 Awesome story. Can't wait to read more of you work. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MuscledJunk Posted March 31, 2021 Share Posted March 31, 2021 Perfection Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ToolShedCub Posted March 31, 2021 Share Posted March 31, 2021 FUUUUUUCK THATS SO HOT! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darkluster4 Posted April 1, 2021 Share Posted April 1, 2021 You know who should read this story, and maybe do a comic of it? @GymJunkieMuscle! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1996bodybuilder Posted November 20, 2021 Share Posted November 20, 2021 amazing story how is chapter 2 coming along? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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