debate1 Posted April 16, 2016 Share Posted April 16, 2016 Ever thought of doing a spin off of Simon or ralphie? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jaypat Posted April 22, 2016 Author Share Posted April 22, 2016 Thanks for the interest, but I'm done with this one. On 2/2/2016 at 7:44 PM, Kymuscleboy said: I absolutely loved it! The physical descriptions are perfect, and the description of the attitude change really made the story. p.s. I did catch the same issue that arpeejay mentioned, but my mind "autocorrected" it. I'm glad you found it because I couldn't. I'd have to break out the original document and do a word search and I just haven't had the time. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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