Dezman Posted July 13, 2023 Share Posted July 13, 2023 20 hours ago, Littlerjim said: Turns out I have a fetish for introspection LMAO I need this on a t-shirt. Joking aside, this was really really good! Just for my own curiosity, though, how big do you think Peter wound up getting? I also noticed that you tagged this as 'cum inflation' so I'm assuming that when it was all done Sean had to get rolled out of there. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Littlerjim Posted July 13, 2023 Author Share Posted July 13, 2023 21 hours ago, Two said: I am interested in stories where mental states affect physical attributes (i.e muscle growth). And while anger is the archetypal emotion thanks to the Hulk, I've come to prefer more positive ones such as arousal and especially appreciation, as is the case here. I also enjoyed the confrontation between the two characters. Sean's conduct was questionable enough to make the conflict believable, but not so much as to make him vile. I also liked that the transformation is mostly temporary, as I enjoy the growth more than the end result. In other words, I really liked this story! If only that could cause you to grow as well I laid it all out in the comments for Being Bigger, but I'm all about growth having to mean something - it's power, status, respect, whatever you like, but I think the very best stories on this site make that connection, and I try to do the same. And if I randomly gain an inch, I know who to thank! 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Littlerjim Posted July 13, 2023 Author Share Posted July 13, 2023 1 hour ago, Dezman said: LMAO I need this on a t-shirt. Joking aside, this was really really good! Just for my own curiosity, though, how big do you think Peter wound up getting? I also noticed that you tagged this as 'cum inflation' so I'm assuming that when it was all done Sean had to get rolled out of there. My original plan was for this to be shorter and simpler, way more porn, with even more exaggerated sizes - cum inflation included. I'm going to remove that tag, actually. But then I got distracted working the growth into the motivations, and by the time if fleshed them out, the idea I had for the sex felt like tonal whiplash. I decided to fade to black so that the actual sex could be left to the imagination - though it felt like chickening out, I'll admit. It's something I want to work on. If you want me to put actual stats on it, I'd say Peter got to around 9ft tall, and all my giants grow proportionately, so that puts him over 900 lbs (!), and he was giving Sean a little over 2ft of dick. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dezman Posted July 13, 2023 Share Posted July 13, 2023 2 hours ago, Littlerjim said: My original plan was for this to be shorter and simpler, way more porn, with even more exaggerated sizes - cum inflation included. I'm going to remove that tag, actually. But then I got distracted working the growth into the motivations, and by the time if fleshed them out, the idea I had for the sex felt like tonal whiplash. I decided to fade to black so that the actual sex could be left to the imagination - though it felt like chickening out, I'll admit. It's something I want to work on. Respect, honestly. Stories change as you write them, and if things have to change to make the story better or work well then that's totally fine! I'll just have to sit here and imagine Sean getting stupidly bloated by Peter. Fun times, especially if he has to get rolled around like a yoga-ball. 2 hours ago, Littlerjim said: …I'm all about growth having to mean something - it's power, status, respect, whatever you like, but I think the very best stories on this site make that connection, and I try to do the same. I really REALLY like this take, honestly. I'm a slut for themes and metaphor, even in my horny stuff (it's why my own current project is taking way longer than I expected lmao). It makes me wonder, though, what you would say cum-inflation might have represented in this story. I know context means everything (as we have seen from your work on Being Bigger vs Ego Boost's muscle growth) so it makes me wonder what it would have meant to Sean and Peter. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dezman Posted July 13, 2023 Share Posted July 13, 2023 2 hours ago, Littlerjim said: If you want me to put actual stats on it, I'd say Peter got to around 9ft tall, and all my giants grow proportionately, so that puts him over 900 lbs (!), and he was giving Sean a little over 2ft of dick. That is a whole lot of man!!! Also glad to see someone else going the Proportional Math route aside from me. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Littlerjim Posted July 13, 2023 Author Share Posted July 13, 2023 2 hours ago, Dezman said: It makes me wonder, though, what you would say cum-inflation might have represented in this story. I know context means everything (as we have seen from your work on Being Bigger vs Ego Boost's muscle growth) so it makes me wonder what it would have meant to Sean and Peter. In my mind, Peter's growth means time running out on something he's been coming to terms with all his life. He knows he enjoys being powerful, but he's always avoided accepting it. His transformation puts him in a position of either fighting the truth, running from it or facing it - which parallels the story from his childhood, as well as Sean's philosophy. When he puts his hand through the steel shutter, it's meant to show the scale of that decision, it builds jeopardy. Cum inflation would fulfill a similar role, with more of an emphasis on sexual potency. But the way things shook out, Peter's choice would have been made by the time they actually had sex, which means the inflation would be meaningless except as a kink. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HawkShark Posted July 13, 2023 Share Posted July 13, 2023 On 7/12/2023 at 2:28 PM, Littlerjim said: Turns out I have a fetish for introspection As Dez said, this is such a good summation of your writing style. Loved this story, I also appreciated that it didn't leave me in an existential lurch the way Being Bigger did after the first three chapters lol. 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dezman Posted July 14, 2023 Share Posted July 14, 2023 Hey, I will never object to meaningless kink, lol, but honestly your commitment to the themes is amazing. I don't know if I would have had that much restraint. 4 hours ago, Littlerjim said: In my mind, Peter's growth means time running out on something he's been coming to terms with all his life. He knows he enjoys being powerful, but he's always avoided accepting it. His transformation puts him in a position of either fighting the truth, running from it or facing it - which parallels the story from his childhood, as well as Sean's philosophy. CHARACTER GROWTH REPRESENTED BY PHYSICAL CHANGES IS ONE OF MY FAVORITE THINGS IN MEDIA. IT'S RIGHT UP MY ALLEY. Gah, this is all so good. I feel like, at some point, one of your characters is going to get Trent as a therapist and as he works through his issues he gets bigger. 1 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dezman Posted August 4, 2023 Share Posted August 4, 2023 I just keep coming back to this one. So good. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dezman Posted January 1 Share Posted January 1 Back again because I still love this story and I have to wonder just how big the muscles and cumulation were in the original version. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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