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Hello, I had this story(part of the story) in ma head for long time so I started it to try out how things will evolve. Every feedback will be appreciated!

 

 

Hi, honey how was your day? Asked Jake sitting on couch drinking tea.
Name: Jake

Age: 26
Height:5´10 (178cm)
Body type: Slim fit

Weight: 167lbs (76 kg)

Cock: 6,7 inches (17cm)

I guess OK, long boring day, not many clients today. Answered Ty walking to Jake and kissing him on forehead. 

Name: Tyler

Age: 27
Height:5´7 (172cm)
Body type: Build fat???

Weight: 209lbs (95 kg)

Cock: 5,5 inches (14cm)

“But I got something that I hope you would like...no love”: and showed Jake a silverish steel briefcase with yellow logo which said: Modify yourself

“No way! How did you get that? And whole package? How many of it its inside?”

"7! And ready for use!": Tyler opened the briefcase and revealed 7 syringes inside with shimmering purple liquid inside them. They looked different than normal ones. No piston to push and needle was only 0,2 inch (0,5 cm).

“So where you want them, Ty? You know well I don’t have problem to stick anything into you. Big grin formed on Jakes face.”

“Funny, and I would normally just go with try and error but I don’t want to look like a freak so we should check the manual.”

 

Under the syringe was paper manual, Tyler took it out, but Jake elegantly took it from Ty’s hand. "By the look of it you will need most of them just to look normal.... If normal means big. You need one syringe for each arm and leg + torso with that you are left only with 2. Wow that’s lame..."

"Give me that! And what do you mean lame? I’m happy I got my hands on it! Let me see what the options for rest of the 2 syringes are.”

Cock (Increase cock size)
Balls (Increase balls/cock size + libido)
Pecs (Increase size)

Ass (Increase size)
Head (Increase IQ/EQ)

DISCLAMER!
- Intensity of change varies from human to human

“Hmmmmm....soooo......what you want to get "EDDITED" Ty?”

 

“You don’t like me how I’m now Jacob?”

“Boo hoo, poor Tyler, we both know you didn’t buy that stuff for me. Sooo? With what should we start?”

“Ok, take out the syringes out Jacob, I go change into something more suitable and looser, so I won’t suffocate.”

“What? NO no no no no.... not happening. You come here only in your boxers.”

“Hahahah, fine just give me a second.”

When Tyler came back into the living room 5 syringes were already laid out on the table.

 

“Why only 5? What you did you do with the rest Jacob?”

“Chill out would you? I’m keeping them safe for later, in manual it says, even if you are using syringes for example arms, the rest may potentially grow too a little so those two will be used tomorrow if needed to. Since this is first batch, it will take time to fully develop. It says 2-3 hours and we are going to use 5 at once so let’s not overdo it.”

“So what are you waiting for? Shove them in me!!”

“With pleasure.”

Jake took syringe after syringe and used them for arms legs and torso as recommended.

“So how do you feel? Do you feel anything?”

“No, not at all, but they said it will take a while so what are we going to do now?”

“Ty, you are too impatient. Let’s watch movie, time will fly by faster. You are not only one impatient in this situation and you are not helping. Do you want something to drink?”

 

“Yes, can you bring me cup of coffee?”

“Suure.... but coffee for evening? Will you be able to sleep at night?”

“Well, its Friday and we just used body modifying serum, so I hope we are not just going to sleep tonight.”

"Right.": Jakes face was red and on fire. He loved when Tyler was like this. Since he was more introverted than Tyler, he often felt his voice drowned by Tylers. Jake placed both cups on the coffee table, covered his lower half with blanket and same did for Ty. Jake leaned on Ty shoulder. Didn’t take long and bot fell asleep.

 

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Jake woke up to getting suffocated. He had to slid lower during sleep, so his face was under Ty hand. Still dizzy, he got up and took both cups. They were cold, he went into the kitchen and pour it out into the sink. **

“What a waste of good coffee.”

 

He looked at the clock. 21:26. Didn’t Ty used the syringes at 17:30. It was almost 3 hours since then!! Jake rushed into the living room.

“Ty? Wake up!”

“What? What is happening? Did I fell asleep?”

Tyler saw Jake is getting redder by second and his breathing speeding up and then he saw why, Jakes bulge was screaming from his trousers. Tyler stood up, he was looking into Jacobs eyes but this time he was looking down.

“I sweet! My height increased too! "Look at those abs, my fat is gone! WOW this is awesome! Look at my chest, so define and..... wow my bulge seems bigger! Wanna check?"

Jake was in state of trans looking at Ty, his brain just stops working, he was too horny for that. Tyler came close to Jacob, close enough for his pec be just few inches from Jacobs.

"Pull the pants down. Let’s compare them. You were bigger before, how big yours again?"

"6,7 inches"

Jake pulled his pants down with his briefs and his painfully hard cock flung from his confinement. Tyler grabbed both cocks to compare.

"Dude! I was only 5,5 inches but LOOK AT IT NOW! We are almost the same now! Thats crazy. Jake, go get the tape to measure it. .......Jake?"

"Jake, honey, go and bring me the measuring tape.": said Tyler now with much lower voice. Jake whole body made a small twitch, which after he got out of the trans but when he moved his cock was still in Tylers hands. Jacob tried to pull one more time, but it only made his cock sends shivers of pleasure trough his body.

“T-Ty you have to let me go if you want that tape.”

Jake was starts panting quietly now, while grip on his cock just got stronger. With confusion Jake looked at Tylers face that was grinning at him back.

“I just changed my mind, we can measure later, now, you are mine.”

Tyler pulled Jake towards him into his embrace with Jake face right in front of Tylers. Tyler didn’t wait any second and gave Jake one huge passionate kiss, he started to feel something, something different, something he could describe as a bond forming. Even though they were together for 5 and married for 3 years, he knew it wasn’t love, he felt plenty of that for Jake, this was different.

Tyler lifts Jake, Jake got surprised since Tyler had always problem lifting him. Tyler carried him into their bedroom like he weights nothing. Tyler slammed Jake on bed, Jaked turned around and saw Tyler pouncing on him like wild animal. Tyler pined Jake down to bed by holding his arms, lowered his head and licked Jake form his abs to his torso. Then he whispered into Jakes ear: “I haven nice prey here but, to be mine, I have to claim it first.”

Right after that, without any warning, Tyler shoved his newly improved cock into Jake. Taken by surprise, Jake screamed from pain and pleasure. Tylers thrusts just got more intense. He was looking at Jakes flushed face and his cock was twitching like crazy. With one hand Tyler grabbed Jakes cock and start jerking it. This took Jake into overdrive and started cumming like he was holding it in for full year. Cumming changed into twitching, from reaching full body orgasm. He never felt like this before.

“Now it’s my turn!”: Roared Tyler as his thrust slowed down but were more passionate, after few strong thrusts he came what felt like 5 minutes. It was intense Tylers cum made small bulge in Jakes tummy. The amount was just too much, cum was pushing Tylers cock out of Jake but Tyler shoved it in one more time to make sure it all stays in. Tyler kissed already passed out Jake and tired from sex he too fell asleep next to him hugging him tightly.

When Jake woke up, Ty wasn’t in bed anymore. However, Jake heard laptops keyboard popping in the living room so he just decided he will take a shower. Inside under the falling water Jake was thinking about last night. The way Tyler was more daring was super-hot. Although Tyler was toping half of the time, he was more passionate and romantic rather than dominant. This train of thoughts gave Jake a boner, when he touched his dick, his legs gave away and he dropped to the shower floor panting. His dick was after last night super sensitive, was it because of the intensity of sex or body orgasm? Who knows, he knew only one thing, he must get rid of it. That was not really a problem since just few strokes made him cum, in his mid he saw Tyler, now beefy man with no hair flexing. Without touching, thanks to this thought Jake came again. After he cleaned himself again, he put on clothes and went to check on Ty what he was doing.

Tyler was sitting on the sofa with his laptop on his legs. Jake couldn’t properly see what he was reading, only thing he saw was logo of Modify yourself company.

“What are you looking at?”

“Nothing really, just checking on other people before and after pictures. The transformations are fascinating.”

“I can see by those used tissues next to you.”

“You bet, and I didn’t have to even use porn, just flex in front of mirror. Till you were asleep I measured and weighted myself. I’m 6,1 feet exactly and weight 210lbs. Even though I lost some weight, it was only fat I lost, and I’m mainly muscle now.”

Tyler stands up and flex for his husband his new muscle, new pride.

“Holy shit! It seems you are even bigger than yesterday? Will you keep growing?”

“No, serum should wear off, but we have 2 more and if what I saw on forum is true this day will be interesting.”

“Do you know how are you going to use them? What part is going to change?”

“You will see, but for now I want to enjoy this, let’s go to the gym to see my limits.”

“Do you really want to go to the gym on Saturday?”

“Yes, I believe you will like it, maybe even more than me. So go grab your gym bag.”: said Tyler again with his lower voice.

“You know I can’t say no if you say it like that, it practically cheating.”

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“We are here!”

“Yea, I’m “super” hyped.”

“Don’t be like that pumpkin, we came here to test my new muscles.”

“No, you came here to test your new muscles, I came here because I got charmed by you and till I realized what happened we were here.”

“Excuses, get your ass inside."


"Fine, but I’m just going to watch. I have plenty of training during the week, I want to relax during the weekend."


"Boo-hoo one more day of training. You cand do cardio instead of eating sweats you like so much and It’s not like you would be able to spot me :P"


After they changed clothes and some additional whining form Jake, they entered training area. Tyler when right for the weights and Jake for the treadmill. After and half hour Jake went buy some drinks, post workout shakes for Tyler and water for him to satiate his thirst after so much running. On the way out as he turned around, he slammed with his face into guy behind him. Drinks went flying. Shake cup splashed their whole content onto guys torso. Jake went pail, the guy was ripped, Jake knew that if this guy was on roids, what he was by his physique, he will end up purple from beating. He immediately started to apologize. With his T-shirt he tried to rub the shake off the guy.


"Deeeam bunny, do you do this service to all dudes?


Jakes eyes went wide, that huge, ripped guy was Tyler.

 

"What the actual..."

 

Tyler covered Jakes mouth with his hand.


"Sir, we apologize for the mess, but we are in a hurry, sorry we can’t help to clean up the mess. “: With that Tyler grabbed Jakes hand and dragged him to the car. In car Jake got his senses back.


"What the actual fuck happened to you? I thought you said there is no more growing. But look at you, you are huge."


"And you are hard. “: Said Ty and grabbed Jakes hard cock in his pants.


"Aa-aahhh, stop gripping it like that or I... aaaaAAAh“: Jake gripped Ty’s hand and with big difficulty he pushed it away with both hands.


"Don’t worry I’m just teasing you, but we have to hurry home the main event is still waiting us at home."


They were home in 10 minutes, whole drive Jake couldn’t look away from Tyler. He looked so big and manly now. Bigger, taller, Jake was winning only in crotch area now and not by lot after yesterday dose. During the ride Tyler wasn’t thinking about anything else, only about the main event that he kept from Jake and his cock only got harder just by thinking about it. If Jake thought this was hot, he was eager to know what Jake would think after.

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After they entered the house Ty started to drag Jake to the bedroom, but Jake stopped Ty right way.


"Ty I really need a shower and you are too. You are still sticky from the shakes!"


"Don’t be a buzz kill bunny, this one will be special I promise!"


"I’m down for shower fuck, would that be a possibility?"


"I think that would make my surprise even more fun. “: Said Tyler with devilish grin.


"Oke, so let’s go."


"Go there first, I just have to take something with me."


"Hmmm, I will be waiting."


Tyler went into the living room and took out last two syringes with him.
In bathroom Tyler placed syringes on the sink counter and flex in the mirror. He loved how buff he was, and his cock loved that too. He stands on the scales and it showed 235lbs.

 

"Fuck, I’m huge."


"Were you saying something?"


"Yes, I said open the shower door and watch!"


"What are you talking abo...."


When Jake opened the door he saw Tyler, muscles pumped with blood to brim making him look even bigger and his cock almost purple how hard he was, holding both syringes.


"There is a theory, about these syringes. The reason they took them out of the shelves and now are heavy regulated. If you have “ALPHA” gene and use this serum on your balls and back of your head at the same time, in places closest to your testosterone and growth glands you can activate this gene.

 

"What? But those guys are so rare to see there are only in thousands in whole world!"


"And I’m going to became one of them. WATCH!"


As Tyler said those words, he grabbed the syringes. First one went between his cock and ball sack and second one was shoved into top of his neck near the spine. Since this was the second dose of the serum the changes begun instantly. Tylers whole body cramped making him look more defined, after the muscles relaxed, they started to grow even bigger. First his pec grew into huge melon sized pillows, his nicely cut abs, now they each shaped like a brick sticking out one inch each. His back was next, huge lats like wings were pushing his still small arms away from his core body. His back was now full of valleys form all that bulging muscles fighting for space. After back it was time for hands, the shoulders grew into the size of bowling ball, biceps into Cantaloupe the rest of the hands grew into size to match. His legs started to shake, first from the weight that grew on top of them but later from their own growth. Tylers legs became huge tree trunks, one leg was bigger than Jakes chest. When all muscles stop growing his veins popped out. Huge pencil size veins. Tyler roared, seeing only red from so much testosterone. His hair grew longer and got wild shape, his clean shaved chin grew thick twelve o’clock shadow. From this whole growing Jake noticed not only Tylers muscles but also heigh increased. From 6,1 into 7,85. He looked like real alpha from news. Tyler looked in direction of scared Jake. Jakes heart was beating for his life and was horny as never before. His husband just grew in front of his eyes into muscular, wild looking alpha. Tyler waked into the shower corner, he had to duck and enter sideways. Jake was pushed into the corner. Tyler was so big now that water from shower head was poured only on his wide back fully covering Jake from getting more water on him. 

 

"Don’t worry it’s not over yet. The fun part aaaAHH-AAAhhh Haaa-ha it’s still coming. “: Said Tyler with deep voice, the voice was even deeper than the voice he used to taunting Jake to get him going.
Tyler pointed in into his crotch. His balls started to inflate, from grapes into lemons then big oranges and ended up as two grapefruits tightly fitted into still not adapted ball sack. The rush of huge amount of testosterone got Tyler into overdrive.His clean shaved face grew beard and made his face more rugged. He roared like wild beast he now was. His whole body flexed and grew even more, as he was leaning on the wall with his right hand the tiles behind his hand cracked. Tyler felt it’s time for his cock. 


"It’s time! ": Tyler shouted.


With his huge hands he grabbed Jake, he tried to protest but the grip wasn’t like in the car on the way here. This time it was like he was held by machine. No matter how hard he tried, it looked like Tyler didn’t even noticed there was any attempt of escape. Jake looked down and saw that Tyler is lowering him on his angrily red, metal hard cock. Tyler didn’t wait and just shoved his dick in.


"AAAAaaah"


They both screamed, both from pleasure and pain.


"It is starting!"


As these words were spoken, Tylers cock started to twitch. With each pulse his cock grew. Jake realized it right away and it was not only growing inside of him but outside too. Tylers base of his cock was getting so big it was slowly pushing itself out from Jake ass.


"Not a chance! “: Screamed Tyler and shoved Jake back to the base of his cock.


“Last time I felt the bond because I was so close to Alpha hood but this time, THIS TIME! I will forge it. And then you will be only mine!"


Jake didn’t understand since Alphas never talked much about their bond since for them and their partners the bond was sacred. Only thing that was known was that bond was something that bonded two of them for their life. It was not possible to remove it and only way to make new bond was if the "beta" partner died before "alpha". And rumors were that there were other strong abilities that bond had. But Tyler now knew, no, more like felt what he needed to do. He felt his cock throb with each of his heartbeat. With each throb the cock grew bigger, thicker and the veins became big as a pen. Jake could feel the ridges of the veins adding on pleasure. He felt like Ty’s dick was almost in his chest. The feeling was crazy.


"T-T-Ty! Ty! Tyler! ": Cried Jake. "I can’t, please, pull it out, AAAAAaaaa-aaahhhh. I’m scared, I’m scared of you, put me down."


"Shut up! You talk too much. I’m in charge now! If I say something, you do it!”

 

Tyler pulled out his cock, it was huge, at least twice of Jakes cock. In front of Jake was over foot big cock. It had to be at least 14 inches long.


"God, no wonder I felt I was filling you up whole. My cock is almost as long as your torso and thick as your arm, no bigger! My transformation for now it seems to be over, time to do the bond."


"Tyler, you can’t think you can shove it back into me. ": Cried Jake.


Tyler hand flew next to the Jake head into the wall behind him, but this time it wasn’t only tiles that gave up. Tyler made hole through the wall. With his other hand Tyler took Jake by his neck and lift him till Jakes legs we no longer touching the floor.


"You dare to defy me! You are mine! ": Tylers scream was so loud Jake felt all his bones inside him. His neck was starting to form bruises. Tyler pulled out his hand out of the wall and let he of Jakes net. He grabbed his legs instead. Now only things that was supporting Jake were Tylers hands and wall behind him. Tyler aimed his cock into Jakes ass and forcefully penetrated Jake. Tyler started mercilessly fucking Jake. Jake was screaming, from pain from the grip on his legs and huge cock that was coming out and in from his ass. He felt like something was breaking inside him. Not his body but inside his spirit.


"I feel it, YES! I’m fucking FEEEL IT!"


"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAaaaaahh!"


Screamed Jake as Tyler for last time shoved his cock inside. Jakes whole body spasm from body orgasm and all that movement was just supporting Tyler huge orgasm. Jake cock shot so hard it hit Tylers face. Tyler meanwhile came so hard it pushed Jake from his cock and felt on the ground where he wasn’t safe. The stream of cum continued as Tylers balls tried to empty all the content. Tyler also couldn’t hold himself standing and felt to his knees overwhelmed from the orgasm. The cock still shooting thick ropes of cum covering whole Jakes body. Jake was still shaking but even Jake didn’t know from what. Was it from that strong body orgasm? Or the stress and how much scared he was from Tyler now? He didn’t know. Tyler rinsed himself and left the shower with Jake on the floor. After a while Jake made attempt to stand up but found out he had to unstick himself from the wall he was connected by Tylers cum. He washed himself and went to the bed. His legs hurting as hell. Tyler was already in bed taking most of. Jake decided it would be best if he don’t sleep with Tyler in same bed so left to lay down on the couch and after a short cry, he fell asleep.

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** In EU we dont use microwave to heat up coffie again. We drink it right away or boil up water again to add to the already made coffee.

 

 

If you like what you see, dont be shy and show aupport! Thank you ;).

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6 minutes ago, Kubasik said:

** In EU we dont use microwave to heat up coffie again. We drink it right away or boil up water again to add to the already made coffee.

I agree with you, that it's unlikely to find someone microwaving coffee here in the EU, but I'm not personally familiar with anyone who pour hot water in old coffee. I suspect, that it all depend on preparation methods. Coffee habits differ between separate geographical  regions, and it's impossible to make general statements about the matter.

By their names, I suppose Tyler and Jake are either Irish or British? The British left the EU a few years ago. I don't think the Maltese use English first names. 

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2 hours ago, Hialmar said:

By their names, I suppose Tyler and Jake are either Irish or British? The British left the EU a few years ago. I don't think the Maltese use English first names. 

This autor note was just for fun/if people find it weard. I mostly see USA measurements on this website. (Or more less I assumed its USA). So I made this note(in "More you know" style).

And I totaly dont understand what you ment by quoted part(With names).

Eather way I hope you liked this part of the story, In case you find it weard(autor note), I will just eddit or remove it. Thank you for feedback.

 

And since I have you here, I would like to ask, is this correct place to post this? I mean the section.

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42 minutes ago, Kubasik said:

And since I have you here, I would like to ask, is this correct place to post this? I mean the section.

If I were you, I should have posted bits and pieces of an unfinished story in the sub-forum for Unfinished Stories, and in the future post the finished story in this sub-forum.

44 minutes ago, Kubasik said:

I mostly see USA measurements on this website. (Or more less I assumed its USA). So I made this note(in "More you know" style).

I understand your reaction to the predominant use of imperial stats very well. I've used metric in some of my stories, because I'm unfamiliar with imperial measures.

I'll write a more detailed response later. 

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6 hours ago, Hialmar said:

If I were you, I should have posted bits and pieces of an unfinished story in the sub-forum for Unfinished Stories, and in the future post the finished story in this sub-forum.

I understand your reaction to the predominant use of imperial stats very well. I've used metric in some of my stories, because I'm unfamiliar with imperial measures.

I'll write a more detailed response later. 

Dw, I know how this ends... more or less, so it will end :D

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Intriguing story, though it could really do with some proofreading. (For example...)

The unexplained mixing of 12- and 24-hour time is more confusing than using either system consistently would be:

On 10/16/2023 at 8:18 AM, Kubasik said:

He looked at the clock. 9:26.

Didn’t Ty used the syringes at 17:30. It was almost 3 hours since then!! Jake rushed into the living room.

There are 7 doses, but only 6 are in the briefcase?

On 10/16/2023 at 8:18 AM, Kubasik said:

How many of it its inside?”

"7! And ready for use!": Tyler opened the briefcase and revealed 6 syringes inside with shimmering purple liquid inside them.

Quotation mark usage is sometimes good, but other times either they get left out completely, or they get a bit sloppy. (Missing close quotes, narration inside quotes instead of outside, that kind of thing.)

Plus, some general typos / word usage issues. As just a partial sampling, "pray" should be "prey", there are a lot of "showed" that should be "shoved", and every "trust"/"trusts" should be "thrust"/"thrusts".

None of the issues are major, and the story is certainly readable and coherent. (..."Coherent enough", anyway.) It's just missing the final "polish" that makes it more accessible to readers.

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31 minutes ago, nypup2train said:

Intriguing story, though it could really do with some proofreading. (For example...)

The unexplained mixing of 12- and 24-hour time is more confusing than using either system consistently would be:

There are 7 doses, but only 6 are in the briefcase?

Quotation mark usage is sometimes good, but other times either they get left out completely, or they get a bit sloppy. (Missing close quotes, narration inside quotes instead of outside, that kind of thing.)

Plus, some general typos / word usage issues. As just a partial sampling, "pray" should be "prey", there are a lot of "showed" that should be "shoved", and every "trust"/"trusts" should be "thrust"/"thrusts".

None of the issues are major, and the story is certainly readable and coherent. (..."Coherent enough", anyway.) It's just missing the final "polish" that makes it more accessible to readers.

For time issiu Im sorry, from where Im we use it jsut like that.... so when I 17.00 and then after 9.00 that is ment to mean 21.00.  I will fix it into 24.00h only.

The 7 - 6 dosage ... this part was changed like 4x and also folder ...... will check it . IT suppose to be 7.

Quotation marks.... that will be hard since those are same basic and some differ language by language..... but probably Im missing some.... also I have to check what version is posted..... I was fixing this before...

Gramar....... yea, Im using word gramar corrector but it dont understand meaning just fixing the word..... I will look into it.

You were saing thees are not big issues but for me they are. The story should be enjoyable not readable...

Thank you for feedback, I will try to improove.

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Hi guys, I’m sorry it took so long.  This was supposed to be short story 2 parts max, but it got out of the hands. A lot more is coming! Hopefully all apostrophes were fixed, the mistakes pointed out were removed and inconsistencies were corrected. If you find anything that is incorrect, don’t be shy and point them out. Thank you very much!

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