digiprime1 Posted January 31 Share Posted January 31 8 hours ago, bbeware said: I think digiprime1's question was ambiguous. Maybe he meant something like "How much longer will this story be, compared to the original?" (a more innocent question than suggesting everyone's making comparisons, which is how I first read it) 7 hours ago, DennisFLL said: I went back to digiprime1's original question and I think that you are spot on. And I apologize digiprime1 for not interpreting it that way in my response. Thanks bbeware for pointing this out. My story is perhaps a little longer. The ending that you will read with mine ("Grand Finale") is lengthened and substantially changed. Yes bbeware was right, I just wanted to know if this story would be longer, that was all, and you just answered it, thank you . 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DennisFLL Posted February 1 Author Share Posted February 1 Hi there again, guys. Hope you’re enjoying reading “Jolias & Mike,” and about their growing relationship. I think you’ll enjoy Chapter 7, where it’s just Mike for the first time, allowing the reader to better get into his thoughts perhaps a little more. And, well, maybe into his actions as well? You’ll see what I mean!……Dennis CHAPTER 7 I returned to my dorm room and was so keyed up, just non-stop thinking of this evening’s events. Being with Jolias from when our class had begun, until just a few minutes ago, has been the happiest six hours of my life. And I couldn’t stop smiling! I undressed, and put my drenched boxers and pants in my laundry hamper. Naked, I looked at myself in the mirror and saw someone that a lot of people had said was handsome, actually some had said very handsome. But I also saw a slender body. That’s not a bad thing necessarily, because it was somewhat toned, but there was not much muscle at all. That gave me the jitters, hoping that if Jolias and I ever took this to the next level, he’ll like me just the way I am. Exhausted, though horny, I slipped into bed. The room was dark except for the moonlight streaming through the blinds. There was no need for me to furiously beat my meat in any way at all. I was hard and knew that I’d come shortly after touching myself. I quickly tried imagining what Jolias must really look like under those clothes. It was the worst time of year for gay guys like me. All these hot guys out there and they're all covered up. But I wanted so badly to believe that Jolias had that solid sexy bulging-with-muscle body that I fantasized about. The type that clearly shows that the muscle-guy works out a lot. I was a dyed-in-the-wool muscle-worshiper, and what really turned me on more than anything were handsome bodybuilders that had huge bulging ripped-to-shreds muscles. OMG! In the winter, when everyone is wearing heavy clothing, you see many guys who look like they could be really beautifully built, but you just can’t know for sure until they shed their clothing and reveal themselves to their muscle-admirers. 'But what if he really is this gorgeous bodybuilder that I think he could be?’ I thought to myself in this fantasy. I imagined what he'd look like without that damned hoodie, with his pecs pushing out of that black shirt that I sometimes saw a little of that he was wearing, with striations all over the place, so very hard and bulgy and dancing just for skinny me. And his abs revealing a cobbled array of sexy bricks. With no modesty, flaunting his beautiful muscular development, even cocky about it, showing off without showing off. Casually scratching his head, but using that only as the ploy to show me his beautifully bulging biceps. And then he looks at me seductively, and pow, his biceps flex into what is, to me, a high-peaking erotic-looking porn shot. Maybe I could turn my space heater on and make it really hot in here so if he came over to chill he'd be forced to remove his hoodie... and I imagined watching him remove it, slowly undressing, seeing his thick muscular arms slide out from the sleeves revealing immense Himalaya Mountains for biceps, bulging so sensuously. Vascular and so very strong. And maybe he'd be wearing a black wife-beater, hugging the contours of the rest of his ripped, very muscular physique. "Oh fuck," I breathlessly moaned, my cock jolting now within my hand, making me squirm. "Like what you see?" he'd ask in my little new porno fantasy, smirking, his eyes glinting. He caught me staring at him. But I wanted him to. He then turned more towards me, took a step forward closing the gap between us. His striated pectorals flex as they sensuously push that wife-beater out, the valley between them so obvious from the very tight shirt covering his massive chest. "How 'bout now?" he'd ask, flashing a hot handsome smile, raising his arms and flexing them, making my mouth water as his enormous biceps flexed and peaked so sexily high. So hard. Shaped so beautifully. He looked at each biceps and then cockily, proudly, looked at me, his eyes saying ‘ain’t they spectacular?’ "Ah ahhhgod," I shuddered, the pressure from my cock reaching its limit. I yanked my hand away from my cock as it spasmed a bit. I was a mere millisecond away from shooting a giant load. I watched as pre dribbled from the tip, almost like it was showing me its dissatisfaction with my refusal to cum just yet, me wanting this to last a bit longer. Helplessly back to my fantasy, Jolias is studying his arms again, as he continues to flex and relax his enormous beautifully-shaped Tetons, loving himself so much. Veins are covering his forearms and his biceps flex so immensely. He then so cockily and sexily kisses one and looks down at me and says in his deep voice, “So fucking muscular and ripped and hard and sexy. Don’t you agree, little dude? I guess from the drool on your lip you like a lot what you see," Fantasy Jolias says, as he winks at me. I blushed and looked away. 'Goddamnit even in my own fantasy I'm shy and unsure of myself' I think to myself. But then Fantasy Jolias steps forward and, flexing his right arm, he licks the biceps’ beautiful high peak and says to me, “why don’t you lick it also in the same place that I just did.” I gasp at the thought and nod enthusiastically as Jolias then shoves his right cannon-ball biceps close to me. I reach up and feel its hardness and beautiful peak, and then do as he instructed and I lick it just where he had, tasting his saliva. He then twists his wrists and his biceps takes on different sexy shapes as it dances for me. I moan and Jolias reaches out, grasping my upper arms right below the shoulders and lifts me up so that my lips are even with his. My eyes are wide as the sexy striations in his deltoids ripple before I look into his face and see a cocky grin, and he knows he's got all the power in the world over me. Knows he can do anything he wants to me for his greatest pleasure. And then he brings my face to his, and suddenly his lips are on mine. And they're soft and delicious. I wanted so much for him to have kissed me good-bye just before, and now he is! "Oh fuck fuck ohhh god," my hard cock was spasming and I knew I was past the point of no return now and reveled in the explosion about to occur. "FUCK!" I yelled out feeling that unbearable pressure finally letting itself loose, and the cum that was launching from my balls into my cock shaft was hot and moved fast. The first shot was hard and intense and flew so high into the air that I thought it would hit the ceiling. And then another one exploded from my tip, just as high as the first. I felt the cum raining down on me, hitting my chest, my stomach, my neck, and even my face. "God, oh god," I yelled as another volley exploded out, raining more cum upon me. "Enngghh" I groaned as two more shots came, still powerful and hard and hot. Finally, the next one was less intense, but still flew into the air, and then another shot, and then it died off and became a dribble of cum oozing from the tip and onto my hand. "Oh holy fuck," I whispered to myself as I lay there with cum drying on my body. My chest was rising up and down as I tried catching my breath. My hand was still gripping my dick as it deflated, but I finally had my release after six hours with Jolias, building since my last one early this evening in class. Being with my gorgeous, sweet and funny masculine man for all these hours, and then getting a fantasy-kiss from that man, is what put it over the top and did it for me, really big, this time. And then I realized that once again my own fantasy didn't progress any further than what's basically foreplay. Actually never really got too much past Jolias’s arms! I so wanted to actually fantasize the muscle-worshiping of every muscle-part of him. Traps to calves would be the goal! And…the sex part. Well, fuck, if I'm going to wish for things I might as well wish to actually have sex with him. In real life. I cleaned myself up again and thrilled at the thought that this was by far the most massive load of cum from any ejaculation in my whole life. And that was all dedicated to the muscle-stud of my day-dreams and fantasies, Jolias! But, obsessively, I still hoped that he really was the bodybuilder that I think he may be! 18 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
emsgdh Posted February 1 Share Posted February 1 Beyond doubt one of the best stories of its type that I've ever read. Bravo and thank you. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DennisFLL Posted February 1 Author Share Posted February 1 31 minutes ago, emsgdh said: Beyond doubt one of the best stories of its type that I've ever read. Bravo and thank you. And I thank YOU for the very kind words. We're about half-way through now, so there's lots more to enjoy! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jakob78 Posted February 1 Share Posted February 1 Loving the slow and steady build up. Hope Jolias is not a ket down when we see him strip 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DennisFLL Posted February 1 Author Share Posted February 1 1 hour ago, Jakob78 said: Loving the slow and steady build up. Hope Jolias is not a ket down when we see him strip Thanks, Jakob78, for the compliment. No spoiler info divulged here - just relax and enjoy the read and you'll get your answer soon....D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jtchef2 Posted February 1 Share Posted February 1 Loving this story and how you are writing it more like a novel. (Hopefully many more chapters to follow) The build up of sexual tension between the two is awesome. Looking forward to reading the next chapter 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DennisFLL Posted February 1 Author Share Posted February 1 46 minutes ago, Jtchef2 said: Loving this story and how you are writing it more like a novel. (Hopefully many more chapters to follow) The build up of sexual tension between the two is awesome. Looking forward to reading the next chapter I'm happy that you're enjoying it so, Jtchef2, and thanks so much. The next chapter should be posted on the weekend.....D 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jakob78 Posted February 1 Share Posted February 1 2 hours ago, DennisFLL said: Thanks, Jakob78, for the compliment. No spoiler info divulged here - just relax and enjoy the read and you'll get your answer soon....D Hey buddy not fair! The more you draw this out the longer I got to deal with this boner ... Oh wait, that's a good thing right? 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DennisFLL Posted February 1 Author Share Posted February 1 51 minutes ago, Jakob78 said: Hey buddy not fair! The more you draw this out the longer I got to deal with this boner ... Oh wait, that's a good thing right? Yes, it generally is! But you wouldn't happen to be at school in a night-class now day-dreaming about some hot guy sitting next to you, are you? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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