muscleaddict Posted December 16, 2021 Author Share Posted December 16, 2021 15 hours ago, Wrestlejock646 said: WOW, intense and hot! Emotional roller coaster for Deano, Adam and Ozzie. I get more invested in all three with each passing chapter. I hope there are plenty left to go! Thank you, matie! There's not a *huge* amount of the story left but the chapter's that are left are pretty eventful. 4 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crushme99 Posted December 16, 2021 Share Posted December 16, 2021 40 minutes ago, muscleaddict said: not a *huge* amount of the story left Oh no!!!!!! Say it isn't so!!!!!!! 4 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
muscleaddict Posted December 16, 2021 Author Share Posted December 16, 2021 29 minutes ago, crushme99 said: Oh no!!!!!! Say it isn't so!!!!!!! Haha! I'm afraid so, mate. It's actually a lot longer than I intended it to be. Though, to be fair, that happens with pretty much every story I write! 5 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mdlftr Posted December 16, 2021 Share Posted December 16, 2021 Man, Deano is going through the emotional wringer! I have a feeling that the family just might end up communicating more directly than by terse comments and eye rolls when Deano Sr. comes home! Neither he nor Mum are blind - or dense! Deano better be ready! 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DennisFLL Posted December 16, 2021 Share Posted December 16, 2021 1 hour ago, muscleaddict said: Haha! I'm afraid so, mate. It's actually a lot longer than I intended it to be. Though, to be fair, that happens with pretty much every story I write! Sorry to hear that we're near the end of this wonderfully constructed story of the walking-through-the-life of Deano Watkins of Brighton. Interesting that Deano and Adam actually finally connected, and D will now be returning to MU to face the music with Ozzie on that. And there's a bodybuilding contest coming up also, so MA, you'll hopefully still have to give us several more chapters? 4 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kons Posted December 16, 2021 Share Posted December 16, 2021 Deano gotta be careful though. He might end up losing both 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mdlftr Posted December 17, 2021 Share Posted December 17, 2021 3 hours ago, Kons said: Deano gotta be careful though. He might end up losing both Of course! Knowing Deano, what else can you expect? If there's ANY way to make a cock-up [see what I did there?!] of the situation, Deano WILL f---k it up! And NOT in a good way! I believe these are called "learning experiences"! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
S01 Posted December 17, 2021 Share Posted December 17, 2021 MuscleAddict, this chapter is like a chapter from my life when my dad had a heart attack. The angst, the urge or need to get home. And like Dean I was at Uni at the time too. This big bloke (me) didn't have dry eyes from the moment I started reading (I was also thankfull that a very dear reader of the story with whom I've been conversing gave me heads-up that I didn't need to dread the worst). Otherwise I would have been bawling. If you're not writing from experience, man, chapeau, but even if you are, truly gifted mate!! And from a silent team/camp Adam member, a sincere but very reserved, yeah. 6 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
macookie Posted December 17, 2021 Share Posted December 17, 2021 Ummm… I’m divided between Ozzie and Adam… so I hope Deano can workout a throuple in this situation. He deserves to be sandwiched between them. 2 2 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexfan Posted December 17, 2021 Share Posted December 17, 2021 Obviously Adam and Ozzie wind up together, and Deano hooks up with Shaun. 1 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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