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Wrong Target (part 10 added 10/11/22)


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Ohhh I love that open ending. Dad wanting his son to become a HIMS as well. He knows how hard it's been for him and wants to help him to get "infected" i dunno if its good oir bad disease but either way the men infected are loving the effects and David has become a titan amongs men

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I wonder what David would say when Kyle confesses how he bought the virus covered clothing that made him so huge and how Kyle didn't feel the effects. 

I think that David might find a cure for that problem.  Or if he really wanted to, use all the resources that he had been given to find one for his son. 

 

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David could write off his son as a weakling human not deserving of his love.  Then David would try to have a HIMS baby.  This might make the mother HUGE in the process as the baby develops.

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4 hours ago, ploder4 said:

I wonder what David would say when Kyle confesses how he bought the virus covered clothing that made him so huge and how Kyle didn't feel the effects. 

I think that David might find a cure for that problem.  Or if he really wanted to, use all the resources that he had been given to find one for his son. 

 

--- OR ---

 

David could write off his son as a weakling human not deserving of his love.  Then David would try to have a HIMS baby.  This might make the mother HUGE in the process as the baby develops.

I mean just because he didn’t get it then dosnt mean he’s immune viruses don’t work like that  . But I think David would lean towards the first considering he doesn't have disdain for the non hims men and hasn’t payed that much attention to his wife from what I remember. He’s been around Kyle more than his wife from what we have seen

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Thanks for such a fun and unique story!   It's so rare to have a muscle story with 'mini giants' in this size range.

I absolutely LOVED some of those comparisons. 

  • The son standing on the top step of a ladder and still only being level with Dad's delts.
  • The son looking directly at his dad's face, and his dad's head is 3 times as big as his. 
  • The son noticing that his giant dad's shoulders are wider than he is tall.  This gives me images of the dad laying his son's body perpendicularly across the top of his chest, and indeed the son's body fits along the top of his torso.  HOT
  • The son having to reach around and measure his dad's calf, which is bigger than most men's chests. 

Great stuff.  My only slight criticism is I would've like to see more reaction from the dad.  At the end of the story it became clear Dad sees himself as more than human.  I would liked to have him be a bit more expressive and/or vocal when he was being measured and his amazing stats were revealed.  Even hearing his thoughts as he looked down at his son standing on a ladder...and he was still way taller.  Things like that.

But otherwise, a great story!  I would've loved to have it continued, but 10 good chapters and the Dad reaching his amazing milestone measurements is a great place to break.

Hope you'll write other stories in the future!

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Loved where you took this story. Even if you don't continue it, I believe it is fine since it's the kind of open ending that is good and not too ambiguous to be an actual ending.

I would gladly read more of your works in the future, be it a continuation of this story or a new one. Thank you for sharing with us 💝

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If anyone ever decides to write a sequel or explore more of this universe, hopefully there will be cases of "long" HIMS, where the guy is about 9' tall, 1000 lbs, and 12" long after the initial infection, but over the course of an indeterminate amount of time, he has sudden "flare-ups" that cause him to gain a few inches in height, a couple hundred pounds of muscle, and/or a couple inches in length.  Someone challenging David as the biggest god would be an interesting twist 😈

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